I Am the King of Gods in Zhetian

Why did Ye Fan let Gai Jiuyou, the quasi-emperor, be his protector and become a holy body? Without the aura of assertiveness, you can see that Gai Jiuyou is not as good as Ye Fan.

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Why can Ye Fan get help from the ruthless emperor, who is a relative of Ye Fan? The power of the protagonist's aura.

From my personal point of view, everything that Ye Fan can become the Emperor of Heaven is due to the halo of the protagonist. Otherwise, why would Ye Fan be able to kill the Supreme (the Supreme can ascend to the great emperor) even though he is not yet the Great Emperor? He can ignore the enlightenment time of the previous generation Emperor Qing Emperor. Gai Jiuyou and Qing Emperor are at the same time. More than 9,000 years have passed and Gai Jiuyou is still a quasi-emperor. How can he break the curse of the Dacheng Holy Body that he cannot become an emperor at all? The previous eight generations of Dacheng Holy Body have not become emperors.

In fact, the content is okay, but the pace is too draggy, and "Ten Thousand Dragons' Nest" drags on for too long.

However, the god-king body of the Jiang family is a woman 🤭

On why I wrote this book: Interest is one thing, but the most important thing is that the book next door I am following, "I Will Become the Overlord in Covering the Sky", is actually a semi-eunuch. It may be that the author wrote about Emperor Chendong, who is also in his later years. In memory of him, I would like to offer flowers 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 Slaughter the fat pig and offer it 🐷🔪🐷🔪

Many people say that Ye Fan was able to reach this point only because of the ruthless emperor. The ruthless emperor gave Ye Fan a lot of help and resources, but there was no need to belittle Ye Fan so much. As one of the strongest trio, Ye Fan reached the level of quasi-immortal emperor in the later period, mainly relying on himself. Besides, the book does not describe the experiences of the ruthless emperor when he was young. How do you know that the ruthless emperor never relied on others? Anyway, I don't believe that she could reach this point from a most ordinary little girl with no resources on her own. To get to the point where Ye Fan is ruthless and Wu Shi and the others, the resource of "companion" is indispensable. I hope everyone can analyze it rationally and don't brag or make nonsense.

There are still quite a few poisonous points: any secret is exposed to the eyes of the old devil, 9 secrets are given casually, and he actually uses 4 types + one technique in exchange for Hua Yunfei's secret technique (I have resisted it in the previous article, but I really can't stand it when I read this)

The protagonist is really pathetic. In order to build friendship, he always gives away the Nine Secrets of the Emperor's Scripture and the elixir of death as soon as they meet. Seriously, do you know him or her and you? I was also drunk when I gave him something as soon as we met, and I also wanted to make friends with some powerful people. Do you need it? This protagonist is really humble, extremely open-minded, and horribly lacking in status. No matter how awesome those geniuses are, are you as awesome as you? Just thinking about how awesome those people are behind the original work, you can lick them and give them money?

This protagonist is so cowardly. He still dares to dream about enlightenment and becoming an emperor. He thinks about how to get something for nothing every day. He is afraid of this and that 😒😒. The passers-by in Zhetian are better than him.

Boss, the plot is so well written. Why was it named like this? Jiang Zhong----It feels like the name of a domestic servant. This will dissuade a large number of people.

Wang Mang is a time traveler, a son of a plane, but he was destroyed by the great magician Liu Xiu. The protagonist should not be too dissolute.

There is a reason for the poor performance in the book. It takes so much fairy gold to practice a tattered halberd. The more difficult it is to practice, the more powerful it will be. The more you practice it, the more useless it will be. The halberd is used for charging in battle formations. Who in history has used a halberd as a weapon alone? The few people who are famous for using halberds have other short weapons. If you are cultivating immortals or reading fantasy novels, there are not many people who use halberds.

Writing this is a hammer. I have experienced hundreds of battles and withstood all kinds of poisons. Unfortunately, I couldn't withstand three chapters. It was so poisonous that I bought a watch last year.

This book should be very watery. When I looked at the table of contents, I saw that I had written 8 chapters for the Dragon Transformation Tribulation. I haven't finished it yet. It's too watery. I advise you to quit.

Yes, yes

Those who said that Ye Fan relied entirely on ruthless people, let me tell you how much ruthless people helped Ye Fan. First, the holy medicine laid the foundation for Ye Fan. Second, the source of the mother energy of all things in the Bronze Immortal Palace. Third, the Immortal Treasure Picture of Ten Thousand Dragons' Nest. Fourth, the first dark turmoil resurrected Ye Fan with tears. Then it seems to be gone. The rest is all up to Ye Fan himself. If you think about what ruthless people have helped Ye Fan, let me add it.

If we follow the plot of the original book or change it, we have to add some kind of ghost, which is really superfluous.

Fan fiction is cool writing, making up for regrets, creating new ideas, filling in loopholes, overlooking the original work, and recreating legends. You said your book is not a good book, but I just want to know why you wrote it? Isn't it true that fan fiction, no matter how tragic or comical it is, must eventually become a simple life-style enjoyable novel? The original work is tiring enough. Just take the essence and discard the dross and bring it into the reader's perspective. Otherwise, why read the fanfic? Your displeasure is fatal! ! !

Was it so vicious from the beginning? The first is that his life experience is that he was adopted. In the fourth chapter, the old devil feeds him poison, and he goes to the Northern Territory to grab the resources arranged for Ye Fan by the ruthless people. . . . Ye Fan has been making plans since he was born. The protagonist is looking for death if he seizes his opportunity like this.

Jiang Zhong... Who are you loyal to? This protagonist's name makes me feel like a scumbag

Just looking at the name of the main character will make you want to quit. What's wrong with calling him a slave? He has to be called a slave.

The old devil is a failure, or he is extremely poisonous. He is really unbearable.

Looking at the date, I could calmly say that my old age is unknown.

Everything else about this author is fine, but the name is too bad. If you want readers to like it, at least the name must be acceptable. This name (Jiang Zhong) will drive away half of the readers. If you choose another name, it will be better than this one. …Jiang Zhong, Jiang Zhong, Jiang Zong, Jiang Zhongxin, Jiang Ritian…are all better than Jiang Zhong

You've written five hundred chapters and haven't become a saint yet? Not even a king?

Damn, are these pig feet? It's so bad that you have to hug your thighs the whole time? Rubbish

I stopped reading when I saw the protagonist enter the Purple Mountain, save the God King, and take the Original Heavenly Book. The author's most basic logic is wrong. As a time-travel fan novel, since you know the plot, it means that you can't easily touch the original protagonist's opportunity, because if you move, the original plot will be changed. Then the plot you know will no longer exist, and the protagonist's advantage will no longer exist. Especially in the opening of "Shading the Sky", Ye Fan's rescue of Jiang Taixu is an important means for Ye Fan to cross the four-pole tribulation and break the path later. The origin of the Heavenly Book has a greater relationship. In the early stage, Ye Fan learned the Origin Technique and obtained the seeds of the Kirin Medicine by cutting the source. He found out that the Holy Prince had a relationship with the Dou Zhan Clan Shensi Clan. So in the early stage, Ye Fan was able to live well in Beidou even though he was the enemy of the whole world. The relationship behind him still played a role. In the later stage, it was because of the unknown age of the Yuan Tianshi that allowed Ye Fan to have a connection with the underworld. This allowed Ye Fan to understand the reason for the curse of the Holy Body in depth. This is the relationship between the underworld and the Holy Body's life and death enemy. It paved the way for the subsequent destruction of the underworld. The Kirin elixir is the key to Ye Fan's second life. The protagonist has snatched such a crucial opportunity. Then where is Ye Fan behind? Will it still cover the sky? From another perspective, Ye Fan of the Late Saint Ruins has become an Immortal Emperor. Through the long river of time, he discovered that there was a person who didn't know where he came from and was robbing him of the opportunity to become an emperor. Would he think it was sent by a strange party? Would he slap this time traveler to death?

After reading three pictures, I felt a bit depressed Inexplicably, I gave it to an old man with a golden finger. If Bixue recognizes the necklace and doesn't react in any way, he can still continue reading. What era is this? You can still see an old man emerging from a drop of blood.