Legendary Mamba

It is a sports novel. I was a little bit addicted when I saw that I started gambling with money. I originally thought that the author wanted to show that the protagonist was used to being poor and felt insecure. As a result, after winning the game, I was thinking about investing in Bitcoin. Buying lottery tickets was really a dissuadement. You might as well just make the protagonist the son of the richest man in the world and play basketball in peace.

As a senior (I think 🙂) basketball article reader, I finally found a basketball article that I really like. Here are a few advantages that I think this book has: The first point, and what I like most about this book, is the slow pace of this book! After all, the plots of most basketball novels become more monotonous after entering the NBA part. You will basically get tired of them after one or two seasons, and changing teams is more troublesome. However, the high school league is a bit too long. I personally suggest that the author shorten some of the NCAA plot and write about 100-150 chapters. The second point is that the writing style is quite good for a basketball article. The third point is that the era written in the book is new, but I hope the author can have clever ideas on how to solve this problem in future chapters if the era in the book exceeds reality. The fourth point is that the protagonist has positive energy and is in line with the core values ​​of socialism. There is nothing to say if zz is correct 😏. Then I would like to make some personal suggestions: 1. Appropriately reduce plots that have nothing to do with the basketball game. After all, this is a basketball article. 2. You can get a Chinese nationality for the protagonist, and later join the national team to participate in nationality competitions. 3. Update quickly╰（‵□′）╯! ! !

Has the author never understood the United States? I was so embarrassed when I saw it. If a minor is kicked out of the house and breaks the law, the parents will have to go to jail or be re-educated. Even if the neighbors don't call the police, the teachers in the school will call the police whenever they encounter people begging. Also, it rains all year round in Seattle, so how can we stay outdoors at night? . Truck drivers make a lot of money in the United States, so why is the economy so bad? . There are many flaws. No matter how discriminatory the teachers in school are, they will never ask you to take an English test before choosing courses. Do you think there is no such thing as a transcript? To be honest, the United States protects children and women many times better than other countries

Why the whole plot about being hit by a car? It's a bit toxic.

The protagonist is about to be written as a saint. With tens of millions of spinach bonuses, be prepared if your friend's father won't give you money. You don't know how to use money to test friendship. Also, with hundreds of millions of bonuses, what about taxes? To encourage Gary during the garbage time of the high school league is to provoke opponents, it is easy to fight in groups, and there are too many off-court chapters. I am really happy that a few people wrote it too awkwardly, and the time setting is too late. It will probably be 19 years before he enters the NBA. By then, the author will compile an NBA league by himself? Finally, since the game is set in the United States, don't think about switching back to Chinese nationality to kill everyone. Just be honest. If you feel comfortable writing YY, others will probably give up quickly.

When I saw Kobe's retirement ceremony, I thought of Duncan, Scene simulation: Duncan: "Hey, Pop, I want to retire!" Pop: "Yeah!" Duncan: "I want a tour like Kobe's!" >Pop: "No money!" Duncan: "For the sake of my dedication to the Spurs for so many years, just let me take care of it!" Pop: "Thank you for your contribution to the team, but the financial expenditure for the season has been used up, you know what I mean. Let's go!" #retirementday# Duncan: "As everyone knows, I am a low-key person, I retired!" Bobo: "It is known that Duncan is a low-key person. We spent tens of billions of dollars to take care of it, but he insisted. He doesn't want to show off, so we can only respect him who is so low-key! I feel so sad. Who, just you, come and help me take hundreds of bottles of red wine and record them on the team's account, just to write down the expenses for Duncan's retirement ceremony!" Duncan: "mmp"

I read 300 chapters and it's not even the NBA draft yet. More than 200 chapters have been played in a high school league. 50 Chapters have been played in the college NCAA league and they are still not finished. If this situation continues, will the NBA not be able to finish a thousand chapters in a season?

You write about basketball, and at least half of it is about financial investment and the like. Can't you omit it? Have you ever taken it with you? Writing about daily life is still interesting, but writing about leading a group of people to make money, telling this and that, this one trusts you and that one believes you, making billions and so on... He obviously writes so well about basketball, but if he doesn't write more, he will soon become a financial god... Doesn't this persuade him to quit? Let's return to the topic. If you feel that writing about competitions is too dry, you can write about daily life, the attitude of Chinese people after becoming famous, bringing glory to Chinese people, etc., And later solving nationality issues, etc.… Personal suggestion!

Damn it, I didn't enter the NBA until Chapter 351. . . Take your time and watch! I withdrew first. . .

I have read a lot of basketball articles. The current basketball articles from Qidian are basically the ones that brought the system to the NBA and slowly grew up, or they are the kind of pure cool articles that are all kinds of unreasonable tricks as soon as they enter the NBA. At first, I thought they were all good in their own way, but after a long time, I got tired of them. Although the pace of this novel is a bit slow, it is still quite comfortable to read. The refreshing feeling is also online, and the perspective is different. He became famous since high school, and there is a lot of foreshadowing. Although there are some small poisonous points, they are all acceptable. After all, in basketball articles nowadays, popular articles also have small poisonous points. What I like about this novel is that although the protagonist is very awesome at the beginning, he also slowly grows up. He has become dominant over various American geniuses since high school. Why do some people always say in other basketball articles that such awesome yellow people are not allowed? It's because it's sudden, at most it's the NCAA, and the preparation is not enough. In fact, who doesn't like to enter the NBA with a high profile from the beginning, like Yao, but it must be properly arranged. The only drawback may be that the writing about business and making money is a bit too arrogant, and it steals the limelight of basketball, so some book friends say it is a little bit toxic. After all, if you want to read about business, you will not read this novel. The emotional line is also relatively immature, but it is still readable, although I also know that the author wants to polish the branch line and enrich the content of the novel 😜. In the middle of this book, it may be more difficult to write about entering the NBA. After all, the protagonist's physical fitness is so good and his skills are constantly improving. If he cannot win the championship within a few years after entering, there will definitely be people who will criticize him, saying that the protagonist has been so strong in the past that he cannot even win the championship in the NBA. If you win the championship within two years of entering, the rest of the game will be boring and the novel won't be long. Finally, I hope the author will write well and not end up being an unfinished eunuch. After all, the timeline is too late 🤭 to arrange supporting roles for various teams. Moreover, the NBA has received less attention in our country due to xg anti-spending and the epidemic in recent years. If it starts from 10 years later, it should be much easier to write. Personally, I think the golden finger and growth of the protagonist are well arranged. It is not very brainless, but there is still room for improvement. Come on, author! This is my first post, I hope the author and book friends can see it. If it is rated out of five stars, I think it is okay to give this book a four-star rating.

Bullshit written

It's a pity for Roy and the Blazers. A healthy Roy, a healthy Oden, and a large number of bench gangsters in Adelaide. With a more reliable coach, three championships will not be a big problem.

Hurry up and start the college league. Little is known about the high school league, not much interest, and not many fans know it, let alone understand it.

He writes very well about basketball, but if he insists on writing about other things, he will be asked to quit immediately. Isn't it better for you to just write financial articles? What's wrong with having so much money? Play basketball? I really don't know how I thought I had so much money before I even played in the NBA? What you wrote makes me sad. It directly became a brainless and cool article.

What you wrote has nothing to do with the descendants of Kobe and Roy. What you wrote before was that Kobe and Roy taught him crazy three-pointers. You can't see the description of mid-range, back to the basket, and the basket. Are you the descendant of Curry, 10+ three-pointers per game?

This basketball novel is the most clumsy and verbose one I have ever read.

Personally, I feel pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. I wish it could be sped up a bit. Otherwise, if you enter N, it will be difficult to write new ideas! ! !

Most of the protagonists in basketball novels nowadays enter the NBA quickly. After the rookie season, they are basically the same. It's boring. Come on, author, don't speed up the pace. Just follow the current pace. I will always subscribe and vote 🤓

The writing is good, but the most important point is that in the 2019 draft, you won't be able to play for a few years. How will you get the characters in the back?

The book is okay, but it's really hard to be 17 years old at the beginning. I hope the author can write about 96.03.07.09 In his next book.

You can make hundreds of millions of dollars just by betting on football. What did you think? Are gambling syndicates all money-giving boys? I found a Chinese girlfriend, and at such a young age, my family easily came up with a fortune of 27 billion in cash. If you check the rich list, can Jack Ma's family be able to come up with it? If you randomly spend 81 million to buy Bitcoin, have you seen how big the trading volume of Bitcoin is? You can buy a team, so why are you fighting for hundreds of thousands of dollars in salary? I highly doubt that the author is a high school student!

How did 4 fans earn 60 monthly tickets?😰

I like it very much. Keep up the good work, authorヽ(ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ!

A very good basketball novel. The author has social experience. At present, I personally think that the plot only has a few poisonous points, and it is not very poisonous. At the moment, I feel like it's still a bit under-sold, but considering the author's promotional efforts, it's okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard, not change the rhythm too quickly, and write at the current pace. (ง •̀_•́)ง

I thought it was the Black Mamba!