Breeding House Development Plan

Come on, this x is the future Xu Xing

Is the doll alive?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งIt's important to study

Curse Doll

Found some awesome pictures

At that moment, I thought a lot...

Goal 1: Successfully complete the book "Not a Supervisor" Goal 2: Have 300 collections by the time it is completed

Fan fiction still has limitations, and players who have never read the original work will not be so interested. Pokémon fans, when I see the titles of many books, they are about trainers, simple and clear. The writing style is acceptable, but the sense of immersion does not seem to be very strong and it has no characteristics.

I like it, very good literary talent, I will accept it.

It turns out that the steward's horn is a spare food~~

Come to Zhihu, it's fate to meet you

I said at the beginning, the main author, well, I will read and subscribe to everything, but I don't think I can stand it anymore. It really hurts my brain. I'm sorry. What do you say about this book? It unfolds like a god, with no set outline, and Xiaoyan describes the emotional characters and dialogues of Mary Sue elementary school students. Really, what I read earlier was okay, but the more I read, the more embarrassed I became. I just kept jumping, jumping, jumping, jumping, jumping to more than 20 pictures from Chapter 56. I finally couldn't bear it anymore and I was about to give up. In the beginning, it was not clear how the character came out and the background was unknown. I made an x ​​in a mysterious way. If there was no system for self-setting, I changed it to a golden finger, the boss of the shadow doll. I guess I think it won't work out later, so I'll change the system. I don't know the specifics, so I'll have to wait and see. It was obviously a store at the beginning, but without explaining anything clearly about what was inside, a guy came out and pretended to be cool. Then two passers-by showed up out of nowhere to get an idea of ​​what was inside. Then out of nowhere, there was a plug-in, wearing a bear doll, with great transformation power, and easily killed the other party. No one investigated later, and there was no result. The character conflicts are inexplicable and awkward. Then it wasn't until more than 20 chapters that someone ran out and wanted to buy something, but the psychological description was really huge, embarrassing, and so on. I feel that I am weak, insignificant and unworthy, but I despise the other person and do not put good things in front of me. You don't watch much anymore. I'm really sorry for breaking my promise. I'm going to withdraw now. I can't watch anymore 😓

I just found out that you also write a book😓 Let's work together🤝

Collect bugs Collect various article bugs, such as inconsistent characters, confusing plots, incorrect answers, etc.

I was confused when I saw it, and I couldn't understand it. How many pig's feet were there? It was a mess, and I had no imagination. Different from the introduction.