Dust Falls into the Sea

Investment road review: 5 points for individual items This rating is based on personal feelings and for reference only Environment 5 points Scenario 5 points Plot 4 points Logic 4 points Investment 4 points Chasing investment 0 points Writing 4 points Characters 3 points I recently reviewed a book and came back to read it again, and found that it is really a masterpiece, but it is a pity that there are too few words. The subject matter is novel and the world view is unique. The only shortcoming is that it is not suitable for the current reading environment. It is a novel that needs to be read calmly and slowly. The opening chapter is described in the form of literary prose, which can be said to be a model. It then begins to transform into a novel. People who read it for the first time cannot see the pitfalls, and they will only discover them after reading it for the second time. It could be said to be a hit 10 years ago, but now it is a bit pitiful. Come on.

The author's world has a huge framework. It is a new world that is completely different from other novels, and its positioning is very clear. There are no realm levels or skill levels, and there are only three rules. I started following it from the beginning. As the chapters increased, the entire hazy pattern began to unfold, and the characters became extremely rich. It is not like a single-protagonist novel. The introduction said there are six people and six protagonists, but it seems that not all of them have appeared yet. But because it is a new fantasy, I suggest you make a graphic introduction and draw a picture of the characters and camps. Otherwise, if you read too many cool articles, people who read systematic articles will not be able to remember so many characters.

Not only does the large text open up a lot of imagination, but the careful reading also has strong social significance. As the saying goes, literature conveys the truth. Great literature is not just ordinary fantasy novels. I also wanted to write this kind of novel when I was in school, but as I grow older, I no longer have such a big imagination. Thinking is also limited to realistic writing. This is my regret! Come on, don't give up. Will continue to pay attention.

Let's look at the last paragraph of the author's writing. From my understanding, it expresses four kinds of people's attitudes. One is the bitterness of having knowledge but never using it for life; the second is the ugliness of whipping war; the third is the helplessness of ordinary people who say great truths and no one will listen to them; the fourth is the conclusion that thousands of human natures are just the drama of life

[Newbies, read this before reading] Chapter 1-6 of this work are composed of short stories. Some name the characters' past lives, and some describe the rules or social relations of the current world. They are not the traditional main line form of a single protagonist. Introductions to some of the characters that have been released will be released slowly in this post. Readers are welcome to fill in the blanks based on their own feelings. Protagonist The dust has settled The first reborn, the second child of the Six Heavens team, heroic and a little childlike Bo Ya The first reborn, only Qin and his wife are in his heart Little A Mute, mysterious girl, strength Abnormal God Newcomer, lunatic, gangster Supporting characters Ben, Teherbos, Jie The original reborn person, library boss, mediocre on the surface, greedy for pleasure Lu Di Well-developed limbs and simple mind, previous life Proclaiming emperor, Cheng Yaojin is similar Sri Lanka Princes in previous lives, coveted beauty, and valued people by their looks Lu Wangtian Head of the Lu family, Emperor Lu, overlord Che Yisheng The thirteenth bishop of Wantong, the city is extremely deep Lv Gui Jackal Also known as the Ghost-Faced Jackal, treacherous and ruthless Smart 1028 God of Cooking, a chivalrous and righteous man who does everything he wants Benifa A century-old God of Cooking, soft on the outside but strong on the inside

I read thirteen chapters in one go. Delicate ingenuity and magnificent background are intertwined, simple presentation and profound philosophical thoughts are intertwined. The origin of human nature and the fantasy final chapter complement each other. A good book is not only better than the arrangement of words and the exquisite plot, but also lies in the exploration and reflection of history and human nature.

There's nothing to say about the writing style, it's simply divine. But... Others also said that the description is a bit too much. It is not necessary to have gorgeous descriptions and rhetoric in every sentence. Some sentences can be simplified. Otherwise, if they are beautiful, they will seriously slow down the plot, so some sentences can be cut off. In addition, there is no need to use parentheses when explaining, just write down. I like the writing style very much, and the setting also makes people want to read on, so I will accept it first Come on!

I discovered this novel from the beginning of the book. I was attracted by the plot at the beginning, and then I bowed down to the extremely perfect description of the apocalypse. In fact, the first part is a short story, explaining the past lives of the characters, the cruelty of the other world, the origins of the characters, and the social situation. Of course, I was blown away by Chapter 6. I almost cried. The boy is so pitiful and very strong. The author did not even give him a name. Warning you, hurry up, otherwise the votes will be lost.

But I am uneducated, so I can conquer the world with just "I rely on you". It's very much like the capable style of "Zhu Xian", praise!

The pen and ink are concise and mature, the big scenes are depicted with majestic momentum, and the details are very delicate. There is really nothing to say about the writing style. The diction is magnificent and suitable for careful reading. He has a very powerful imagination and likes this kind of apocalyptic literature😁. But in terms of storyline, it doesn't look like a novel anymore, but more like a narrative prose. The plot develops too slowly, and the characters have very little dialogue 🤐. I think it's good to go as far as describing the environment, but otherwise it would be counterproductive. The above comes from a small writer of female videos who both watches male videos and writes slow-burning articles. They are just suggestions 😂. The writing is great, come on＾0＾~!

Very well written! Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

The writing is great, and the imagery is very strong. Come on~

[Update time] The first update is usually early in the morning. The author will post it directly when he gets up. If there is something unexpected, it will be scheduled at 12 o'clock. The second update is usually at 8.9Pm

It's too late for the author to write a book today. The writing style is very gorgeous and the description of the environment is very detailed. However, the length may need to be controlled. Overall, it is very brilliant.

The writing style is mature, the ideas are novel and unique, and the story is very interesting. It is a good fantasy novel. The processing of some details needs to be strengthened so that the sense of immersion is better. Come on~ Looking forward to the update

I've been talking about it for a long time, so I'll write it down seriously today. First of all, give me a compliment as usual. The author's writing style is good. The first three chapters describe the end of the world and are very colorful. There is nothing to say about the plot setting. Although there are some minor flaws, it is generally very natural, especially in the first three chapters. Furthermore, it's not a good place to talk about personal impressions. One is that the rhetoric seems too deliberate. Looking at the author's overall writing, the problem is actually not big. The main flaw is that there are too many literary words, and some words are a bit unclear when placed in the paragraphs (I will not mention specific examples. After all, this may be the author's style of writing, and there is no need to deliberately change it just for my small dissatisfaction. Just a little reminder, the literary voice is not bad when written in a fantasy novel, but it will appear a little deliberate, wrong, etc., And it is easy to be dismissed.) The second one is the prologue. In my opinion, the prologue is unnecessary... As a whole, I feel that it has little to do with the following articles, and the writing style highlights a strong secondary style. Compared with the unique descriptions in the following articles, it can be said to be a failure... (Slightly venomous, I hope you can understand. The suggestion here is to either delete the prologue or re-describe it - preferably the latter, because the author must have some purpose in putting it here. I haven't read it all yet, so I will just make this small suggestion) That's all. The author keeps updating.

This work will open a new book "Please Let Me Rebirth" The subsequent character relationships and power relationships in this work will be very complicated, requiring character introductions and relationship structure diagrams, so a new book will be opened close to the novel system. The outline of the new book has been drawn up with 1.6 Million bytes. Tired Tired Begging to sign the contract

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At least one investment is completed

Let me know before signing the contract, I want to pursue investment and make some extra money

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Isn't that the case? They are all trolls. They are written like this and there are a bunch of standard praises...