The Steady and Sensible Senior Brother

From these two chapters, it can be seen that the author is a little anxious. The style of writing suddenly changes and the plot is vigorously promoted. This is good in itself, but the first twenty or so chapters have exhausted everyone's hearts The most important thing in writing a novel is the first ten chapters. The style and highlights of the novel must be clearly written For example, the author should want to write a relaxed, daily, slow-burning novel at the beginning Then you have to think about how to write this kind of work so that it is interesting and makes people want to read it Rather than having a sudden change in the style of painting every time when the g point is reached, it is not only intellectually depressing, but also inconsistent with common sense For example, if you buy an island movie and go home to watch it, both parties are ready for everything. At the most passionate moment, the style of painting suddenly changes, and both parties stop their movements and sit on the bedside to drink tea and talk about the Heart Sutra Relics, color is not different from emptiness, emptiness is not different from color, color is emptiness, emptiness is color... Do you think you will be happy watching it this way and have the desire to continue watching? The author himself is really not suitable for writing daily humorous articles It is too daily without excitement, and at the same time it is too serious. It can be said that there is no humor and laughter, and even the last bit of tension is gone. It is like an ordinary diary. It is not interesting, but it is better than nothing, but it will be annoying if you read too much Personally, I feel that the background of this novel is a It's a very good subject. I just need to change the title of the novel and make the content more serious. Fight when you need to hit and don't stop when you need to be nervous Don't stuff good things into the protagonist, and the protagonist doesn't want to take them away after you are done. Such people are disgusting There is no need to follow the trend or anything, wouldn't it be better to write a style that suits you? Wouldn't it be more suitable for you to just write an alternative mythology?

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Author, give up. You probably haven't conceived this book, otherwise you wouldn't have been writing chapters that are unimportant and uninteresting. More importantly, the layout of the book is too small.

Author, don't be too similar to your senior brother, otherwise you won't be able to express feelings. It's better to be a little more colorful.

There are so many people leaving comments, but the ticket price has not increased. I am very worried for you.

After a year of experience, I have reached Buzhou Mountain, and I am still in the Nascent Soul stage. This prehistoric period is too small, right?

Where do the decent villains come from in Fengshen Yanyi?

Just don't be like his prehistoric novels. The protagonists in other prehistoric novels are very selfish.

The character of the protagonist before time travel should be that of a person with little social experience. He has only been working for a few years and has not paid much attention to online literature. His impression of Fengshen Yanyi is based on the TV series. I hope that the author will never let the protagonist know the inside story of Fengshen very clearly in the later period, because this will easily cause inconsistency.

Waited for 18 hours but no update😅