The Extra Tenth Person

I really like this kind of subject matter, but I still can't explain it. As an ordinary person, arranging this kind of game is a bit beyond my ability. This is not a problem that money can solve, nor can it be completed by one person. It is better to write it as a fantasy to be more acceptable.

Generally, the author could write better. The main line and development of the story are still very good. But there were two bright points that made me unable to continue reading. 1. The description of the emotional line is blunt. The first five chapters start to describe the contact between the male and female protagonists, but the soft touch, very good hand feeling, etc. Are far-fetched. In the rather terrifying environment given by the author, the direct appearance of such words will make people feel emotionally naked. 2. When Zhang Zeyan showed obvious strangeness to the little boy, the author's description of other people's behavior was: it was too late to care about him. When time is tight and clues are scarce, normal logic should be to ask existing insiders first. Regardless of whether Zhang Zeyan is willing to talk about it or not, the author can write about this process. Otherwise it will look very flawed.

It's so beautiful, the ending 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

It's over. I don't know what to say. Let's spread the flowers. I really like this kind of open ending.

I have been raising them and want to keep them fat. Suddenly I found the update list. This book has the words "finale" written on it... This... I thought it was a eunuch, but it turned out that it was really finished...

Is the author planning to write a short story? I saw that everyone was almost dead, and then was it the end?

Wuhu ~ prosperous and in a trance hahahaha

Ah? Dayao, did you change your vest to accompany me in suspense? I was so moved that I cried. You opened the book without even saying a word. It's okay if I come to celebrate.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I recently like this kind of infinite horror and similar genres. I think your book is really good and it is a god in my heart!! I feel it's on par with Kisaragi Station in Doomsday Land