I Have a Magic Castle That Travels Across the Sky

This book is of unlimited flow, but it is best if it has characteristics of fantasy, science fiction, and fantasy. Romance and love stories... The past will only ruin the show. I personally don't tend to do this. Even if I write it, it will inevitably lead to collapse.

I was very disappointed after reading these chapters. There are many questions! Below I will briefly mention a few issues that I think are more important. 1. The story world goes by too fast, and many places that can be explored are not described. I just go through the original plot in a hurry, without expanding the world view at all. 2. There is almost no difference between the development of the plot world and the original work. I think there are still some places that can be explored in the traditional Japanese fantasy world view, such as the world of gods, and you also discovered it but you just mentioned it and passed it by? 3. The choice of plot world is too jumpy. For Wankailiu, the choice of the first few worlds is particularly important. It plays an important role in determining the development path of the protagonist and determining the tone of the work. And you initially chose a fantasy world and then followed it with an apocalyptic world that was not helpful to the main line? As far as I can see, it is completely an entertainment world, and the main function of this world is to provide readers with leisure and entertainment chapters to relieve stress after completing a main chapter... 4. The style of the article is extremely inconsistent, and the positioning of the golden finger is vague. I originally thought this book should be a light-hearted work, but then you gave me a post-apocalyptic life, and the main role of the golden finger was not clear. I originally thought it should be like the farming golden finger in Small World, but you gave it to me, but I felt that this setting was to be cut off. For the time being, I will just say this and add more when I have time. Maybe I have too high expectations for you, and it is really annoying to see so many newbie questions.

To be honest, the protagonist's castle, called Magic Castle, is actually a super-dimensional sky city. I have always wanted to see the scene where the city in the sky breaks through the sea of ​​clouds and is revealed to the world, but I have never seen it. Following this title, who is here to see the protagonist pretend to be B? We all came to see the dreamy Sky City. The protagonist can only be regarded as a tour guide.

Am I the only one who thinks that I have a magic fairy castle that travels across the heavens?

If you have any worlds you would like to visit, please leave a message and choose to join depending on the situation.

This book would be much better placed in the light novel category

There are 15 characters, 10 of them are female supporting characters, and most of them are from Academy Apocalypse. How much does the author like this anime?

I have seen a divine book before, and the subject matter is similar. The protagonist travels through the two-dimensional world, takes a girl to his personal world, improves the girl's strength, and opens a harem. In the end, God unfolds the story. When the protagonist fights the big boss, he is exhausted and unable to defeat him, so he completely refines his own small world. He uses a big tonic to resurrect the harem girls, including their bodies and souls. After being resurrected with full blood, he fights back and finally achieves the supreme throne... The author may have left the house emmmmmmm.

It's too little. Let's fatten it up first and then kill it.

It's too little. Let's fatten it up first and then kill it.

It is recommended that girls be equipped with personal teleportation devices to teleport away when they encounter fatal danger😎😎

Anyway, depending on the situation, this is more suitable for the classification of light novels.

Name: Arya (Flower Fairy) Race: Mythical product Gender: Female Talent: Healing, controlling the growth of all plants Skills: Mastering natural magic Quotes: Do humans want to master the mysteries of nature? Character: Black-bellied, decisive Symbol: Blue rose Favorite things: Protagonist and flowers Image: Wearing a flower crown, with ribbons on both arms, petal wings on the back, wearing a violet blue starry skirt, with a rain of petals accompanying her when walking and hundreds of flowers blooming Introduction: A flower fairy who was born with the blessings of nature and the best wishes of mankind, met the male protagonist by chance again, and had a romantic relationship with him The protagonist signed an equal contract and became the male protagonist's partner The handsome author saw my supporting role introduction and replied to me, thank you. The following is the image and magic introduction picture of my supporting role {"NickName":"The World is Unparalleled, I am the King","UserId":311522921}

I'm leaving! In fact, I could leave silently, but I feel a bit pity. The writing of Wonderful World and Apocalypse is really good. Although there are many bastards who don't like it, and there are many magical changes, it is still okay overall, but letting Aqua go is still fatal to me. (Although I don't know if I will accept it later, but I have been with Kazuma for too long) I came here for the beautiful world. The writing is good, but there are not many details. The apocalypse is a bit awkward for me to read personally. I would rather kill the protagonist myself than force a coincidence, but the heroine's personality is written out, very clear, and well-shaped, unlike other fandoms where ten heroines have one personality. The author's writing skills are still very strong. Maybe his ideas are different from mine. Congratulations! Congratulations! !

First, the engineering and scientific research type, responsible for the research and development of magic objects and magic modification types, which will be roughly introduced in the subsequent inventions and launches of the castle. The second one is the vanguard troop type, responsible for sneaking into a certain world to collect information and supplies. Their abilities are currently limited to magic soldiers. Lin Feng is similar. Third, a certain big man with a certain background appears in subsequent resource transactions. Such as businessmen, mysterious witches, scientific research monsters, and a certain old time traveler. They appear less often, but they may also be used for a long time. Character format Name, Race, Ability, Background, Development tendency, Example, Name, Lin Feng Race, human Ability, martial arts expert, late martial arts master, likes to use magic to reproduce martial arts and fantasy skills. Background, a former native of the earth, who traveled to the world of the Apocalypse and practiced martial arts for many years. He was an orphan. He thought it was a parallel world. When he was traveling, an accident happened in Kitakyushu, and the dead bodies broke out. The plane was forced to stop in Bedlord City, only to find out that it was a fantasy world. When the protagonist arrives, he joins without hesitation. Currently, the soldier in the magic army has the qualifications to be the captain. Development tendency, leading soldier type, responsible for advancing small dungeons, that is, having treasures but not being known as world spies, or being a stronghold manager to obtain subsequent world information for the castle, etc.

Well, this book is pretty well written, but the first few chapters don't seem rounded. For example, why is the magic tower not slowly damaged over the long years, leaving only the energy for one time travel? Also, when selecting a world, only the world of Aqua is searched, and there is not enough time to search other worlds. The beginning is still too stiff.

Author, have you seen "The Legend of the Legendary Hero"? There are many explosive artifacts in it, and there is also the so-called "Complete Analyzer" compound eye. Only the main character's compound eye is as abnormal as the other compound eyes of the Complete Analyzer. There are many key artifacts.

Look at this character, the protagonist has finished the Academy Apocalypse in one go

What is your relationship with Ye Wudao😃

Let's finish the Wushuang series in one go, although I haven't watched it yet...