Passersby Are Unhappy

The beginning is very interesting. To be honest, this is the first time I've seen the crybaby protagonist. It's very fresh. The important thing is that I don't defend it, but I think it's a little bit cute. Because I'm tired of seeing protagonists who are decisive in killing right or wrong. The ones who mainly kill decisively by force, or force the Virgin are very awkward and the plot is very unreasonable.                                                                                                                                                          I'‑   ‑ ‐ ‐‐‐‐ well written. There is no chance of encountering beauties, school belles, or a genius girl in the devil camp, and there is no love-hate entanglement with these school belles and genius girls. Why do I say this? (Mainly because this kind of plot really makes me vomit)

Hurry up. . Really slow

It's interesting, but updates are too slow.

Brother, your update speed is really tear-jerking.

So pretty! ! Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

Very interesting! It's a setting from the Korean drama "The Day I Discovered by Chance"! What will a supporting character in a comic do when he realizes that he is a supporting character? At that time, I thought it would be interesting if I wrote it into a novel! Now it's finally here! The writing is sophisticated, the psychological description is very detailed, and there is a sense of immersion and expectation.

The setting is quite good, but the protagonist's personality is really that of a minor character. Let's see what the protagonist can transform into.

Greedy for coldness, greedy for coldness, greedy for coldness, greedy for cold soup

Wonderful. . Can't you make more updates? Grinding and chirping. . . Short and weak. .

33 Chapters in two months. It's too slow for such a beautiful book.

The beginning was okay. When I went to the doctor, I was amazed. The character of the protagonist is also quite interesting. After all, he is a 17-year-old boy. Everyone has a different personality. Even if you are timid, you can grow up slowly. The character Chu Sheng is well written. Although there is not much description, it makes people remember it deeply at once. Even after reading Chapter 17, my biggest memory is him. On the contrary, except for the protagonist and the protagonist of the novel, the other supporting characters in the training camp are a bit messy. The first 5 levels in the book should be the best to practice. After level 5, it should be the watershed. It is better to describe the protagonist's training here more. It seems foggy, and suddenly he breaks through. Then he will reach level 8. There is only Zhuang Gong, but there are no basic boxing, kicking or anything like that? That combat power is a problem. There are only 17 chapters at present, and I haven't seen any big problems yet. The writing is very attractive so far, and I'm waiting for your follow-up updates