Turn the War Between the Heavens into a Game

"Making the War of the Heavens into a Game" was released on April 27, 2020. First of all, I read the introduction of the work carefully. The introduction is well written and the structure of the story is also good. The first impression is perfect. "Dancing with death, escaping from death again and again." Looking forward to it. Chapter One: Bad Luck Falls. After reading it twice, I would like to give you a suggestion: between the ages of six and ten, you can use a plain narrative and don't reverse it. I didn't understand it the first time and read it again. Readers don't have the patience. There are also explanations about bad luck in later chapters, so let's think about it in detail here. Chapter 2 is great, the beginning is exciting. The world the protagonist lives in now is well designed, neither ancient nor future. The three games are described in detail, making people yearn for them. My blood boils when I see this! After the later story unfolds, it is very attractive. I suggest the author to keep up the good work! This is my first time reading this kind of book, so please forgive me for any mistakes. This is the second issue of book review in June 2020 Friends who like it can also pay attention to the first issue of book review in June 2020 and their thoughts on reading "The Game of Heaven and Man".

For those of you who have read the book, can you please leave your thoughts in the comment area. After all, a book must have shortcomings before it can be improved. You tell me your shortcomings so that I can improve them.

Let me try the poison and see if I can keep it

I would like to recommend that new readers start reading from Chapter 5 or 6. There are some bits of irritation at the beginning, but as long as you can resist it, you can continue reading later and you can see that the author is making progress.

Hey, why are there still so few people?

When the National Day comes, I feel completely cold. To be honest, I am a cook in real life. To put it nicely, I am a chef. I am very busy during the holidays and have no time to update. I will update after the holidays, please understand.

Keep at it, there will be recommendations and there will be monthly tickets 😁

There are not many people... Once the recommendation ticket is put on the shelf, it doesn't matter what you use it for. Get a monthly ticket.

It's not the kind of thing I like. There's a lot of books to read.

I am a book hungry person, so I can read any novel🤓🤓

There are too many typos and grammatical errors. I've only read Chapter 7, and there are many paragraphs where I can't understand what they're talking about. My level 10 Chinese proficiency level just cannot read those parts. This is outrageous. Wouldn't the author read it before publishing it?

There are only 6 monthly tickets this month, two are for Han Feng, and one is for Wizard

Ah, the monthly tickets are gone this month. Congratulations on briefly ranking 516th and 36th in the game rankings 🤭

What's going on? Do you want to wait for a while before writing?

Do you want to try writing again after a while? I really want to see an ending, but I don't mind if I give up. After all, it's too difficult without your encouragement.