Ancient Mountains and Seas

1. You must also understand the paragraph question! Although the book is finished, I still recommend revising it. 2? Here's this book! It looks messy (maybe because of the paragraphs), so my thoughts are not clear, which destroys the natural and fresh feeling that the article should have. 3. I like the words at the beginning of the chapter, they are very interesting and have their own unique style. In the book, I saw the charm of culture, really. Just the reading experience makes me speechless. ٩( 'ω' )و Come on! It is recommended to divide it into paragraphs.

I feel a little emotional, and I don't know why. . . . After a long time, I thought of this book again, because the name is still very attractive. I read the new chapter and was impressed by the amazing length. The more I read, the more familiar it became. Yes, the writing method is somewhat similar to the Journey to the West book I bought before. The author must have felt this too. It's a pity that I can't read it, because I may not be able to calm down. I mostly just talk on paper. I hope the author doesn't mind. Let's talk about why this book is not popular. The subject matter is relatively unpopular and niche, and there is no other means of exposure other than book lists. In today's reading environment, people are destined to like books with elements such as "fast-paced", "refreshing" and "interesting". Even if they are exposed, they will not be able to retain people. If you want traffic for niche themes, you can only start with characterization (character characteristics), plot and story (not boring, at least there is a sense of expectation), and a background setting with complete logic (self-justifying and attractive). The author greatly wants people to see the world he created. I can see it from the length of one chapter. Come on, author. On paper, I can only give vague directions. I am just a keyboard warrior with theories (laughs) The author should not accept clear plot direction guidance, it is likely to collapse, just like some books. . .

Not bad! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

The closer you get to the back, the more thrilling it becomes! I can't help but sigh!

Pineapple asked me to come, 😁 took a look and left a comment. The main problem is the segmentation. Make it more detailed, otherwise it will be really depressing. The article uses a lot of ancient words, you can learn from them 😁. It was very depressing to read, and whatever is weird is just weird. I usually like "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" very much, and I will read about the Classic of Mountains and Seas. I have to say that your article is really a bit depressing. As for the knowledge used in it, there is no problem with what I know 🙂. The author is still very stable. Come on🙂

One day is too much to update. When it comes to new books, 2,000 a day is enough. If you update more than 100,000 in three days, do you still have manuscripts saved? Try to sign a contract now or when you reach 200,000 words, and we will update it when it is released. There is no need to write so many words a day now. There is also a problem with the paragraphing. The paragraphs are too large and are not suitable for reading on a mobile phone screen. It can be seen that the writing is very good and the preparation is very careful. If it's purely for storytelling, you can ignore my suggestion. But your update frequency and segmentation are really not suitable for online articles.

After reading the first five chapters, I realized some problems. To confirm, I jumped to the back. Some issues are summarized. One: On the issue of paragraph division, things cannot be said in such detail, there must be choices, so that people can read more easily. Two: The third person is very common, but there can be more changes in the person, which is a little strange when I read it. The psychological changes of the characters are an essential way to flesh out the characters. Three: I don't know what to say. . . My vocabulary is a bit poor. There is always something strange when you explain events, such as the part about those people making sand, the image of so-and-so---so-and-so. It can be more vivid. That's all for now. My vision is not very good. If I said something wrong, I can point it out and accept it with an open mind.

I am the author Cao Min Ziqi. I welcome all book friends to give evaluations and comments on my works. Your support is my biggest motivation 😁

This is a story that needs to be calmed down to go deep into it, otherwise it will be a bit unclear. In fact, the author's logical thinking is very clear and very detailed. It is difficult for readers to take it back, but once you read it, it is still very thought-provoking. All in all, I was hooked and stayed up all night to read it. Being a fan is not easy~ Tired~ Haha~ Fans also ask for encouragement! 😜

Maybe if you divide the paragraphs into more detailed sections, you might be able to read it. There are too many large paragraphs. Others are pretty good

The stories are well written. Each paragraph is too long, which is not suitable for online reading habits. Many people read on their mobile phones. A more detailed breakdown will also make it easier for readers to write this chapter. Come on!