Pokémon Kati Dog

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and came with a set of hot pancakes and fruit, tofu curd, fried dough sticks and soy milk, fried steamed buns, surrounded by a large book, and a big call for the author, ^_^

Let me ask, you found a trainer, and in the first battle, she didn't know anything, why can't you fight yourself? Do you have to wait for an order?

Oh my gosh, you really made so many typos. I can't stand it anymore and want to correct it.

Aren't red and red the same color?

Earth elf... Seriously? Has the author watched Pokémon?