Infinite Worlds: Only I Know the Plot

I kind of want to abandon the book but also kind of want to read it again. . . First of all, the author's writing style is not a big problem, and the original character description and fan plot performance are also of a good level. There is only one big problem for the time being, but it is very fatal. I was originally thinking about saying that the combat power system collapsed, but if I think about it carefully, the collapse of the combat power system is only a small problem, and the big problem lies with the audience. But let me not talk about the audience first, let me talk about the combat power first. The first act of the hunter and the second act of One Man. I have watched both, and I understand them to a certain extent. You can ignore the original setting of the hunter, but the guild leader and the ant king have city-destroying level combat power even at the lower limit (temporarily applying the heroic spirit system). And under one person, the upper limit of the characters that can appear is probably to destroy the city. . . In this context, you write about a male protagonist who casually kills the city-destroying ant king. After gaining additional new abilities, he is shown off like a dog by several people who can't reach the city-destroying level. If this is not a blow to the combat power system, I don't know what it is. And do you really not consider the concept of a hundred times speed? This speed is at least several times the speed of sound. As for the characters below one person, do you think they can react? And then you told me how many times the speed of sound can be defeated by the army? (Nuclear bombs may not be able to keep up with the speed) But in fact, this article can force the author to make excuses. For example, different worlds cannot be compared, such as ignoring the first design and following the author's second design. Therefore, I say that the collapse of combat power is a small problem and can be rounded up. (But the author, you can see for yourself how high the likes are in the comments of so many people who hate this thing in the second act, and how low the likes are for your own explanation.) What is the audience for such a big problem? In fact, it's very simple. If you write a book for the sake of self-interest and don't care at all (see your comments, you care a lot), then you have to consider the fixed audience. For example, this is an anime fanfic, so the audience is most likely to be geeks. For example, if your first act and the early part of the second act are pure invincible novels, and it is the kind of grand road, the most complete template for invincible cool essays (not in a derogatory sense), then the audience will be invincible essays and fans of cool essays. You told me yourself that in this situation, you were suddenly forcibly pulled over and ended up being walked by a few bastards (for most readers, except for Lao Tianshi, the others are just bastards) walking the dog three or four times, and the male protagonist had always been invincible, but Lao Tianshi barely tied (and even won). Under this background, you were suddenly pulled over so many times in a row. Do you think it is appropriate? I can actually understand that the author wants to create some plot conflicts and brag about one person, but if you don't consider the balance of combat power, you should also consider your own audience. When you have fixed your subject matter to Wudi novels + anime fans, and suddenly switch to a frustrated plot that is the most conflict with Wudi, you can imagine the number of readers that this kick can kick out. But fortunately, the second act of frustration ends almost at the speed of light, but as the old saying goes, when a sufficiently terrifying poisonous point appears in the middle of a book's plot, no matter how perfect the subsequent plot is, it will not have anything to do with the people who left. The above subjective evaluation is not for reference. Jpg To sum up the above, until the middle of the second act, this is a very good invincible novel, and it bypasses almost all the novice points and more vulgar routines. However, several consecutive inexplicable frustrations in the second act directly lowered the perception to pass the time. Above.

The blended world of Harry Potter is a little ink-stained, and it would be a bit poisonous to have a little apprentice in the early stage. The first few worlds were obviously cool stories, but the style of the Harry Potter world suddenly changed. The purpose of coming here at first was to learn magic, but now I'm just doing it blindly. 😓

How many chapters do you think is appropriate for a world? Give me some advice

Brother, you and the hunter directly hammered away the ant king, and another person was suppressed and beaten. What happened? Even if the system is different, I have no problem with you being suppressed and beaten by the Heavenly Master, but you are suppressed and beaten by a group of dead soldiers who don't know where they came from?

I will incorporate the ideas from the previous Yan Lingshi, as well as the ideas of those who died young and were blocked from ascending to the gods, into this work. After all, Mufenliu is extremely tolerant, and the scene between Guan Gong and Qin Qiong is the most attractive part. It would be best to sign the contract early...

After reading Chapter 54, I didn't read the rest. It's not that poisonous, but it just doesn't make me feel good. First, cheating is not done randomly, there must be a process. The protagonist inherits the "legacy" of his parents, the first hunter world, and crushes it all the way. Just like among mortals, Han Li didn't care if he got the Sky Palm Vase. He also received the inheritance and became the Nascent Soul directly. Particularly abrupt. Therefore, I personally suggest that you can pave the way for a few worlds in the early stage. The development of bloodline also requires a process. At least the "legacy" of your parents can be used. Second, it basically has nothing to do with knowing the plot well. The whole journey was basically done recklessly, and so was the hunter, and so was one person, without any bright spots. Although some people like to read Mang, the title of your book is completely inconsistent with it, and it will definitely cause many book friends to abandon the book. It is recommended that you think about the choice of plot and world again, at least it will not make people feel that your communication with plot characters is a gainless lick. Third, there are indeed some problems with the setting of the combat power system. For multiple worlds, you must set up classes, otherwise it will easily lead to readers thinking, after reading it, the world of one person is obviously not as good as the Hunter World, why can you be crushed in the Hunter World, but you have been tricked by one person. Therefore, it is recommended to set levels, priorities, etc. Many of these settings can be ported. Finally, don't be misled by the title. This is a book that roughly follows the plot and goes right through it. If you want to see the prophetic flow, strategy planning flow, behind-the-scenes flow, etc., Please read with caution.

This is serious talk. On this subject, if I were to write it. At the beginning, the parents give three things. I won't give it a one-time thing, I will give it a permanent one. In terms of bloodline, I will give perfect blood, and more than one. In addition to personal use, you can also buy and sell, and do primitive accumulation. As for defense and attack, I just copied the King Arthur set, and I have them all ready. The sword of victory and oath. Cutting steel sword. There is also a distant ideal land. Imitation is 20% to 30% of pirated version. This really works. The ability is simpler, two seeds. Everyone is familiar with it. A super power stone that can run out of control, a super brain potion that develops the brain. I won't choose a hunter in the first world. First, it's outdated. Second, it is an unfinished work. The third and most critical point is that it is accessible to readers and easy to understand. Favorite work. It was possible a few years ago, but now in 2020, it's too late. This kind of infinite flow belt system is still globally unlimited. I will choose a world that gives readers a sense of immersion. What matters is not the world, what matters is that you are here, what goals you achieve, and what you get. What passed. Can resonate strongly with readers. Choose a world with this tendency. I would choose something supernatural and a bit scary. If it weren't for the iron horse, the dynasty would be fighting for hegemony. Or if you are trying to survive in the apocalypse, choose a game and use it as a dungeon to level up and gain experience. I would never choose an outdated anime, in my personal opinion. I would rather choose Sheriff Black Cat, or even the Hale brothers. This kind of world is difficult to write about, but it is easy to write brilliantly. The novel has made a good start. You need to set up an opponent and then set a goal to work hard for. Then in the process of hard work and experience in each world, only a complete, qualified and charming novel can be written. The disappearance of mother and father is a good target. I didn't look behind you. I don't know if you set it up. In the second world, if I were to play, I would make it slightly more difficult. Even sacrificing something to gain the price of survival. Living in this world is not easy, struggling to survive. But nowadays people generally live too comfortably. You have to show him something new and exciting. Only can stimulate readers' brain nerves and give them a surprising adventure. Then there is the plain welfare plot. Either a lottery draw or a treasure hunt. Then use and destroy all these things. Transitioning from boss to boss and deadly situation. By repeating this cycle again and again, it becomes a qualified, complete, and charming novel. Your settings are very good, and the beginning of Infinite Streaming is very good. But your core or the skeleton of your content. Still needs experience.

The setting is not very reasonable. Since the protagonist's advantage is knowing the plot, it should be set not to leak information about traveling through the world. Otherwise, think about the fact that at least tens of millions of people enter the plot world every year in the book, and this has been going on for hundreds of years. How many worlds are there that have not yet been explored? The others are not all mentally retarded, right? For example, in the protagonist's first world, the mission is a hunter's license. As long as you are not stupid, you will know that you can get it through the hunter exam, and then countless time travelers have entered it from generation to generation. Are you still unclear about this on the way to the exam? Then there will always be people who can pass the license exam, just like this, one by one, generation after generation, the further they go, the clearer the information becomes and the easier it becomes. If there are no restrictions, countless people, over hundreds of years, will know much more about the plot than the protagonist, and they will also understand the plot outside the plot

Don't brag, Nitro can already punch 10,000 punches at super high speed during the Ant King chapter in the Nitro anime, and the word spirit is not absolutely still, it just slows down very slowly. Have you seen Justice League , where Superman can come into contact with the Flash who enters the Speed ​​Force, something like that. And let me tell you one more thing, in the White King Chapter of the Dragon Clan, there is a head of the Eighth Family whose speech spirit is acceleration. He has accelerated to the ninth level and can already fight Angers for a while. Really, if you want to write a good work, please be reasonable and not strictly logical. After all, it is an infinite novel, but at least you must have the original character and reasonable situation concept. Just like the ball grabbing game where the protagonist enters Nitro on the spaceship, you enter as you say, who are you? Your feeling is like playing a game where everyone else is an NPC. No matter what other people think, everything will be done according to you. Then you still write that the world is real and don't underestimate the wisdom of people from other worlds.

My thoughts after reading Chapter 3: This pig's trotter's IQ is below average. I like giving things for free and licking supporting characters hard without any benefit.