I Work as a Warehouse Officer in Cao Ying

I read more than 160 chapters in one go. Judging from my 10 years of reading experience, I can only say that it is a pity. Pearl milk tea is okay, and traveling back in time to ancient times and other modern things are okay. There are mistakes in some places, but they are acceptable. We are all human beings, and mistakes are normal (except for gangsters). It's okay to let Yu Jin and other famous generals leave early. These are normal in time travel novels, and they cannot be considered poisonous points. But the setting at the beginning is time travel + history. The combat power system in the first part of the novel is based on reality. Halfway through, multiple immortal cultivators are suddenly set up, which is a big taboo. This can dissuade many people. Either the combat power system is not close to reality at the beginning, or simply don't add it. The sudden addition of the immortal combat power directly ruins the novel. It was expected to be an immortal herb, but now it has become a poisonous weed. Hey, it is rare to see a very good novel about the Three Kingdoms. It is a pity.

Could milk tea have appeared in the late Han Dynasty? First of all, the source of milk was a problem. There were no dairy cows at that time, only scalpers for farming, and the number of scalpers was still under control. There is no milk at all, and there is no research on goat milk. After all, mutton is very common. Since sheep are used for meat, goat milk probably has nothing to do with it. Starch is not realistic either. Cassava is an introduced species. I suggest the author check the information. The tea of ​​the late Han Dynasty is not the tea of ​​today. Just because you think milk tea is good does not represent everyone's opinion. I am a tea drinker, but I don't drink milk tea. As for the twist mentioned in the book, I'm sorry to the author, but I don't think it's suitable to travel through the late Han Dynasty. It's possible to travel to the late Qing Dynasty. So whether the book is good or not depends on the author.

Why do I say it is well written? It feels like a routine article from a few years ago, and the writing style is average.

I started writing well and then ended up awkward when it came to milk tea. For tea drinkers who like to drink green tea, pearl milk tea is heresy.

The wording is not careful enough. In Chapter 3, the counselor surnamed Dong commented that Cao Cao was a hero in troubled times. Is this because he didn't die quickly enough? What boss can stand such a second-rate guy?

Well, the writing was okay, but I didn't read it. On the one hand, I don't like Cao Cao, and I prefer Liu Bei. On the other hand, I feel that the character of Liu Bei in this novel is completely different from the one in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. He is completely a black Liu Bei. Finally, the protagonist's loyalty to Cao Cao is inexplicable. It feels like repaying evil with kindness. How can you repay kindness with kindness? (In addition, Liu Bei has been criticized a lot, and I don't like Liu Bei as much as I did when I was a child. It's not that I think he is bad, but that he is too kind and righteous, but he doesn't take care of his family 😥)

Everyone doesn't like milk tea, and I personally think it's acceptable, but I really don't like that the heroine is also a time traveler and has a bad personality. Oh... I don't want to read it.

When I saw Chapter 160, the battle between Lu Bu and Xia Houen, and the author's explanation, I felt like it was useless, as if it was full of passion. It was like being showered with cold water suddenly, and the passion subsided. Since there will be no plot of cultivating immortals in the follow-up, I don't understand why such a setting was written. It is very awkward, and it suddenly breaks away from the sense of substitution. This knot will always exist, and it is very jumping. Originally, I read the novel for entertainment, and it has greater entertainment value. I think it would be a good idea to remove this plot and change the writing method to make Lu Bu's death more tragic.

A teenage grain officer? ? ? ? That's the logistics minister!

Well written! 🤭

Damn it. Pearl milk tea. I don't want to see this anymore. Give up.

I'm afraid the author didn't know that sugar was a luxury item in ancient times.

He is also a little kid in his 10s. He was a grain officer in Cao Ying back then. I don't know how old he was back then!

In fact, I feel that except for milk tea, everything else is written very well. It would be better if the milk tea in the front is changed to fried tea.

The writing is wonderful! ! Come and like it! ⛽

Wang Lang: "Is this Zhuge Kongming here?" Zhuge Liang: "That's right!" Wang Lang bowed on his horse in response. Lang said: "I have heard about the name of the Duke for a long time, and I am fortunate to meet you today. Since the Duke knows the destiny and current affairs, why do you want to raise unknown troops to invade our territory?" Kong Ming said: "I have been ordered to fight against thieves, what do I mean by being nameless?" Lang said: "The numbers of days change, and the artifacts change. It is natural for a virtuous person to return." Zhuge Liang: "Cao's thieves usurped the Han Dynasty and occupied the Central Plains. How can we call a virtuous person?" Wang Lang: "Well! Since Emperor Huan and Emperor Ling, the Yellow Turbans have been rampant, and the country is in danger of falling apart. I, Emperor Taizu Wu, wiped out the Liuhe and swept away the eight wastes; all the surnames fell in love, and the four sides admired virtue. It was not because of power, but it was the destiny of destiny. I, Emperor Wen, was the divine, cultural and holy warrior. I inherited the great rule, followed the laws of Yao and Shun, and came to China to guide all nations. Isn't this true? What is the will of heaven and man? Compared to Guan Zhong and Le Yi, today's Gongyun is so powerful that he must act against the laws of nature and against human feelings. Don't you hear the ancient saying: "Those who follow heaven will prosper, but those who go against heaven will perish." How can we compare with the thousands of good generals in the Wei Dynasty? The bright moon in the sky? If you surrender and surrender with courtesy, wouldn't it be wonderful if the country is safe and the people are happy?" Kong Ming laughed in the car and said, "I thought that as a veteran of the Han Dynasty, you would have something to say when facing the soldiers of the two armies. Unexpectedly, you said this. Such vulgar words! I have something to say, please listen carefully: In the past, at the beginning of Emperor Huan and Emperor Ling, the Han Dynasty was in decline, and the eunuchs caused trouble; Above, rotten trees are used as officials, and beasts and beasts eat their salary. As a result, the tyrannical people are fierce and servile, and the country has become a ruin, and the people are suffering. At this time of national crisis, what did Wang Situ do in his life? , I have always known. You have lived on the coast of the East China Sea for a long time, and you have been a filial and honest official. You should help the emperor and help the country, and help the Han Dynasty prosper. How could you help the rebels and conspire to usurp the throne? The crime is so serious that heaven and earth will not tolerate it! Wang Lang said: "You... Zhuge Villager, how dare you! " Zhuge Liang said: "Shut up! You shameless old thief! Don't you know that everyone in the world is willing to eat your flesh alive? How dare you chat here! Thankfully, God's will has not stopped the Yan Han Dynasty, and Emperor Zhaolie (Liu Bei) succeeded to the throne in Xichuan. I now follow the order of Si Jun (Liu Chan) to raise troops to fight against the thieves. Since you are a minister who flatters (chan three times) and flatters (yu two times), you can only hide and shrink your head, just struggling for food and clothing; how dare you make false claims in front of our army! A brilliant man! Cangbeard (two sounds of ran) old thief! You are about to lose your life to Jiuquan. How will you see the twenty-fourth emperor of the Han Dynasty? ! Second ministers and traitors! You have wasted 70% of your life. You have not made any achievements in your life. You only use your lips and tongue to help Cao Cao do harm! A dog with a broken back still dares to bark in front of our army formation! I have never seen such a shameless person! ! ! " After Wang Lang heard this, his chest filled with anger, he screamed, and was killed by his horse. Later generations wrote a poem praising Kong Ming and said: "When soldiers and horses come out of the Western Qin Dynasty, their talents can defeat ten thousand people. With a flick of his tongue, he scolded the old traitor to death. "

After all, Dong Zhao is also a first-rate counselor under Lao Cao, but he doesn't understand such simple principles?

This book really suits my taste😃😃😃

It's well written, and it's rare to see the protagonist being a counselor rather than a general. It's easy to understand but not a novice, and I haven't written much classical Chinese 😁 If I were to write novels in the same way as classical Chinese, I would really have a bit of a dyslexia 😅. The rarest one! The protagonist is a counselor in Boss Cao's camp! No more to say, come on, author!

The update is not active. I just gave you a recommendation vote and it's not interesting enough!

He's pretty good-looking alone, but here's one more...

After being defeated at the hands of pig's feet, does Lao Jia have inner demons? Personally, I feel that for Lao Jia, keeping himself and his family alive in this troubled world is everything, and the rest is just a cloud.

How long until Da Quan Xu comes out?