Daqian Yulingguan

It is recommended to write fan fiction first, it can be semi-original. You can go read books like Reincarnation Paradise and Li Siyang. The content quality of your book is not bad compared to the previous one, but the name is not good, and it is not a fanfic.

Well written, keep up the good work and keep up the style

Forty or fifty heroines are enough, don't ask for too much

How is your writing? Any useful suggestions 😭

Looking at the title of your book, I feel that this book will not be popular, and the results are too bad to be a eunuch.

I feel like I know how to be a eunuch. If I want to be a eunuch, try to do it before putting it on the shelves.

The last person who wrote about Qin Shi Mingyue became so popular was to write an original story immediately after it was finished! Violent death! ! Later, I wrote several more books, and then came back to write Qin Shi Mingyue. After thinking about it, I decided to mention the name, Seven Star Fat Bear The reason why you write fan fiction well is because the animation plot is your outline, and you add supplements to the protagonist you wrote based on the plot! But originality is different. It is not easy to have a complete outline of the world, not to mention the bugs that even great masters cannot avoid

The author should probably write more fanfics. This one is very average, and Luo Wang's writing is great. I suggest you write more fanfics. Painting Jianghu is very good.

When will you push the first one? It's so slow.

I seriously suspect that this book was written by Luo Wangren. It has a familiar melody and a familiar taste!

Go write a fanfic👻, the previous book Luo Aman really became the Luo Family Army. When you post a Qin Shi girl on Douyin, Luo Aman exists 😂😂

To be honest, the previous fanfic was good-looking, and it can be imagined with the anime as a reference, and it has a sense of excitement. This one is relatively boring, and I still think the author is suitable for writing fanfics. Luo Wang said that it is suitable for smallpox class level (for me).

The original female protagonist has no real sense at all and cannot be yyable. It is recommended to write fanfics with ready-made female protagonists. Do not write about Douluo, Dou Po, etc. Domestically produced.

I admit that the author has done a very good job in shaping the female characters. This is also the most outstanding part of "Qin Shi Wang". But the emotional interaction between men and women is also very important. You can't have adult hormones without the throbbing of youth. Such a book is bound to be very pale later in life and difficult to adapt. You can use inner monologues to portray emotions. In addition, four or five female protagonists are most suitable, not too many, otherwise they will all be puppets in the later stage. Book lovers, don't try to say dozens of words of praise. If it really misleads the author's attention, the new book will be ruined. Come on!

Never want a harem, I won't watch more than 100 female protagonists😜

I hope the author can describe more about the interaction and psychology with the heroine instead of just bulldozing

With the frequency of your updates, it feels like you are already writing the outline of a new book.

I like my friend or the sister next door

The beginning was amazing. I thought I was in the world of heroines. After reading about ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was just a random account, with no main plot and nothing interesting.

Let's just write fan fiction, I think you're doing a good job in this way.

I think your previous idea of ​​harem was very good. Nowadays, mainstream harem texts are full of paradoxes. One person "loves" a group of people, and this genre is difficult to grasp. Isn't it Ji Cha and Guan Guan who are familiar with it now? Your ruthless harem flow truly meets many people's definition of a harem. A scumbag will be a scumbag as long as it feels good to watch. Create your own style

? ? ? I was fascinated after reading the introduction, but did I read the eunuch? ! What a joke! ?

No, it's just gone. 😭😭😭

As expected, my father-in-law decided, think about it carefully, and then open the next book. This one was indeed opened relatively hastily. There are many things to consider when writing an original novel. Please think carefully about the next book. Moreover, if your update speed and frequency continue like this, I feel that you have no motivation at all. If you have a fan base, update a few more chapters every day, and the results will become better. In short, go for it, think carefully about your ideas, and think about your ideas. It is our readers' honor to witness your endless potential being activated.

It's good to write about well-known Chinese or Japanese comics. Don't write about small audiences. Otherwise, you can write about comprehensive comics😊

. . . What happened? I still plan to raise one or two hundred people and then kill them.

If you write about Super Seminary, I will definitely book it all for you.

When will the new book be published? Even if you change your vest, let me know.

It's okay to write something original, using the story structure of the anime

As a reader, I still recommend writing fan fiction. Your first work is a fan fiction. Write a few more books and accumulate experience. This one is a little too confusing. I originally wanted to raise it. Suddenly ran out of food