
Martial Arts Time Travel Begins with Looking for Qin Ji
武侠穿越从寻秦记开始
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- Completed
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- 2.1M Words
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 8mo ago
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- Qidian
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What kind of thing is written? Luo Liba is so verbose that both humans and dogs can chatter for a long time.
The Condor looks very awkward. You, the protagonist, don't look like someone who has conquered the world twice. If you don't want your eldest brother to be in trouble, then stay away. Now you are no longer connected with the family. You can't even guess your eldest brother's thoughts even though you are a member of the third generation? I have lived three worlds in vain.
Looking for Qin Ji, Huang Tian is above, I and gambling and drug addiction are sworn in. ✊
If there is too little pleasure, what is the use of the protagonist's practice? Anyone can fight the protagonist for hundreds of rounds. Although the protagonist wins, he feels aggrieved. . It reminds me of the Shaw Brothers martial arts films of the 1960s and 1970s, one fight at a time. .
Was it illegal to kill bears in ancient times? ? ? As long as the bear doesn't come out and hurt people, it's good, but why should we protect it? ? ? Is the protagonist biased toward the Virgin? The writing says that the protagonist is not the Virgin, but in the end, she becomes the Virgin after killing a bear. And door-to-door delivery? What's the difference between this kind of behavior and selling tens of millions of real estate for millions, and also doing things yourself to pick up and drop off customers to please them? Bears in ancient times were much more valuable than they are now, because they were bought with their lives or paid a huge price for human hands.
It's a bit poisonous. Be careful. Don't forget the original work. Is it possible that the character of the real Zhao Zheng after time travel is still the same as that of the fake Zhao Zheng? Then why did you save the real Zhao Zheng? Not to mention Xie Xun from time travel. He started to be wary of Cheng Kun when he was only 5 years old. He also said that Cheng Kun is still a good person and learns martial arts from others. Don't care about Cheng Kun. Such pig feet are disgusting. If you don't make changes, they are all dead. You have to rely on the original work. Don't you know how to write? When you travel back in time, Ouyang Feng still has to find a way to get his sister-in-law to give birth to Ouyang Ke. Didn't you write that pig's feet are good people? That's it? The last world is more outrageous than the previous one, and it becomes more and more outrageous after that.
After reading the introduction, I realized that these days there are still people who can travel through time and not be themselves. When someone else's name is mentioned, it feels weird.
Although Xun Qin Ji and Yi Tian were quite poisonous, they still managed to survive. The ethical drama of Shooting the Condor directly knocked me out. I really didn't expect that a male channel would have a male author who understands Qiong Yao's dog-bloody spirit so thoroughly. I'm sorry.
The main character is not likable, and the purpose of fan fiction is to be enjoyable. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to watch original martial arts? I feel frustrated when I read the fanfiction books. I think they are all rubbish.
Others are getting better and better the more they write, but the more you write, the more rubbish you become! Let's not talk about martial arts. Anyway, individuals have to fight hundreds of rounds. In the end, he really didn't kill me when he should have, and he looked like a bastard, which was really disgusting!
Are you sick? You have unrivaled martial arts skills and become a soldier in the Ming Cult? You want money and people, why don't you train the direct descendants of the Haisha Clan and the Giant Whale Clan, but instead train the Mingjiao bannermen? They even eat and live together, which is really sick. The Haisha Gang first grabbed an outer island as a base to develop sea trade and train soldiers. In less than five years, there will be direct troops. What kind of Mingjiao are they doing?
The biggest shortcoming of your book is that the wrong characters are chosen. Xie Xun, Ouyang Feng, Bai Tianyu. You are writing a prequel, and there is no sense of immersion at all. You can even write Song Qingshu, Ouyang Ke, and A Fei. Don't you think there is something wrong with your writing?
Shortcoming
In the first chapter, Looking for Qin, I regretted choosing to travel through time and become Xiang Shaolong, but I was reluctant to change it at the time. This led me to be most afraid of being too close to the original work when I was writing it, that is, copying it. The second chapter of Yitian is because I am impatient and covet the Nine Yang Magic and can't wait any longer. The opening chapter was not well written, and I found it a bit boring. The third part, "Shooting the Condor", was more of a struggle. Choosing an absolute villain was the most controversial and the most difficult to write.
Swordsman is too poisonous. In the original novel, Lao Yue can defend it no matter what the reason is. You are a master who has been through several worlds and is hundreds of years old. Even if you still have reincarnation experience, Swordsman is not a world of high martial arts. If you can't defend Huashan, how are you different from a waste?
Damn, what a loser. He has lived for almost hundreds of years and still acts like a fool every time! It's so frustrating to watch, I gave up.
I didn't make it past the first chapter. First, know that you are going through time. Go to practice fisting, and the image of being brainless is suddenly embedded in the reader's impression. You should memorize some home-made steel-making methods, the Barefoot Doctor's Manual and the like. This thing is much more useful than muscles. Second, the protagonist's tool-man flavor is too strong. It's written like an expository essay. Give up
It is not recommended to read the paid chapters. He has lived two lifetimes and has countless women. When he was reincarnated, Ouyang Feng was still as immature as before. He has been a general, a king, and an emperor. He was so indecisive that he frequently caused misunderstandings.
What the hell are you talking about? As a time traveler, my life is no different from the original version. It's such a waste.
The Condor Shooting was very exciting to watch, and the frailties of human nature were vividly written 😂
It took twenty years to prepare for time travel, but it was true that I didn't learn the official language of the Qin Dynasty at all. Instead of practicing the Qin sword, I wanted to practice the Miao sword. Didn't the Qin Dynasty all use bronze swords? The iron swords are all swords that cut iron (bronze) like clay. How can anyone have one of them?
Thanks for the recommendation
I have been quietly posting for more than two months, with 500,000 words, and the number of collections has only reached 300. On the first day of recommendation, I added more than 200 collections, and then added more than 100 collections every day. Today (the seventh day of recommendation), I was notified that it will be put on the shelves. I'm so grateful that so many people are willing to watch it.
Isn't it good for a clueless author to travel through Yue Buqun for the first time? Then in "Xun Qin Ji", Xiao Ao Li's imagination is wide open to hunt for treasures. Only in Xun Qin Ji can he use his imagination to his advantage. Can he beat Lao Xiang with his bare hands? ? ?
I can only say that the author has overwhelming fighting power. The Nine Yang Divine Art and the development potential of the Great Shift of Heaven and Earth should have the power of ten thousand catties. You only have the power of one thousand catties, and you are not as good as Zhang Wuji.
I saw that the Condor was the most rubbish, and I was finally poisoned to death by you.
I was really convinced by what was written in Swordsman. Is anyone capable of fighting a pig's trotter? And is the martial arts skills in Swordsman comparable to those of Lu Xiaofeng and Yitian?
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Updated again. 😍😍
Didn't it mean that it was published after the Tang Dynasty chapter was finished? Why is there only one chapter updated?