Danzo Shimura Is Actually a Good Person

The front part is pretty good, but the back part doesn't feel good.

The good guy system, plus the title of the book, this is a story called Shimura, I feel it has a lot of potential, plus the author revealed, is it a comprehensive comic series? There are a lot of tragic anime, such as Black Bullet, Iron City, etc. Maybe as a post-90s generation, I am too old to watch tragedies, and Wen Qingwen, after studying and working, I like to read some happy novels. Many novices in comprehensive comics like to copy the original text. In fact, reasonable secondary creation based on the background of the original work is better. It's not that no one likes Long Aotian, but it's that the writing is good and makes people feel handsome and passionate. There are too few. Many people have written about Long Ao Tiantian, but they don't know what stories to write without fighting monsters and upgrading. It can highlight the story, interest, invincibility and strength, such as Gu Aotian and One Punch Man, and it can also become very popular. Relieving stress and refreshing

Shimura Danzo One of the must-hit rankings of time travel novels

Can you perform the full attribute list in two chapters and three times? It's really cool.

The author has his own ideas and has written a different Danzo. Although some people criticize him, this is still the author's own idea after all.

I remember that Danzo is of the same generation as Sandai. Why doesn't he look older?

Since the protagonist is Danzo, he definitely cannot be as sinister and sinister as before. A different Danzo can actually attract readers more.

No matter how miserable Danzo was, he would never treat Naruto like you wrote. In the original novel, Naruto's identity as a Jinchuuriki was revealed, but the identity of the fourth generation son was concealed. All Naruto ate and drank were instant noodles and expired milk, and he couldn't even afford Ichiraku Ramen. Then many fans blamed Danzo for this. If you want to take the blame, you should also put it on the third generation. Who is most beneficial to Naruto doing this, it is obviously the third generation.

A lot of people have mentioned the protagonist's identity. I'll open a new thread to explain. I didn't have an identity in my previous life, and I don't know what identity it is. Anyway, if you're awesome, you can do anything. I used to write about an ordinary protagonist who travels through time. Logically, it requires a mental journey to adapt, but many people thought the protagonist was stupid and discouraged me from quitting. I am good at writing about anything now. A few paragraphs of descriptions show that he was awesome in his previous life and adapted quickly. Why do some people guess who the heir to the hidden family is... I have traveled through time. His identity in the previous life is not important, as long as you know whether he is awesome or not.

Why do fan authors now like to directly overturn the settings of the original works and write the third generation as a retard or a conspirator, while ignoring the original settings? This is a common problem of many fan authors, which is to write novels with a fantasy setting in the skin of Naruto, Danzo and Sanzo. Dai is all about quarreling with the protagonists, and completely writes them as mentally retarded. They are completely clueless when it comes to things about the protagonists. And if they defect, they have to distance themselves from each other. It is all because Konoha persecutes them. It is a fantasy novel with the name of Naruto. Most of the characters written are not the ones set in the original work. Whenever something goes wrong, Danzo is blamed. It is all Danzo and the Third Generation's fault. Danzo is the one who takes the blame. . . . Three generations of conspirators. By the way, fans also like to write about brainless Uchiha and Hyuga villains. This book also likes to criticize Danzo. Anyway, it is all the fault of the third generation, and Danzo is the one who takes the blame. . . . I'm really convinced

The problem record post was updated on 2020.06.16. I decided to go full-time and make preparations from today. Let me talk about a few issues 1. For newcomers and new works, I try my best to check Baidu for setting issues, but the level of research on the plot timeline may not be as good as some of the big guys. After the big guys pointed out the bugs, I tried to correct them as much as I could, but there was no way to change them. I really couldn't tear down the entire book and rebuild it. 2. Some of the chapters in this chapter say that I use software to write books, so I don't need to think with my brain. Well... I refer to some of the plots based on the reviews of book friends. I have never used the software, but it shouldn't have such a good effect in filtering and editing based on book reviews, right? 3. There is often a problem with the number of water characters in the attribute column. I will try my best to improve it later. (It has been improved. I will put the author's words in the attribute column after it is put on the shelf) 4. Personality issues. The protagonist is a modern man in his thirties, not influenced by an old man in his seventies or eighties, nor is he a cold, ruthless, cool and amazing dream character. After being the boss for so many years, he is a good person who talks about people and ghosts. 5. The issue of the heroine, age and seniority are there. Logically speaking, there should be no one. It depends on whether you want to have one. (Because of the age issue, many people directly said in this chapter that I was going to write a harem story, but in fact, it was also because of the problems in the previous book that I gave myself a chance to make changes, so as to avoid later readers being dissatisfied that there is no heroine and the age and appearance of the heroine are very abrupt. But at present, it seems that the situation without a heroine is relatively large) 6. When giving opinions, please describe it clearly... Some of them I... Don't quite understand the meaning. 7. Regarding the issue of the sedan chair in Chapter 1, Tsunade can sit on the sedan chair, but why can't I, Danzo, sit on the sedan chair? It's a pity that I don't have enough fans to publish the book in the first chapter. The picture is below (reviewed) 8. The timeline of Xiao Li's introduction to Kai was due to Danzo's introduction. When Xiao Li appeared, he started talking about the timeline problem, because you didn't see the next page. That's right, just turn to the next page and there will be an explanation. 9. Regarding the issue of passive skills, it has been corrected to a passive halo-type skill that can be turned on and off according to the readers' suggestions (modified, and for readers who have already read it, I will explain it in the author's words in the later chapters) 10. If you add a malicious spoiler comment, I will delete it. It is really baffling... ... Also, I have a good mentality. The whole comment area was full of comments about the last book, but it didn't affect me. (Because no one looked at it at first, and I didn't know I had touched a bad point. I wanted to change it later and couldn't change it anymore) That's it for the time being~~~

Bensi's uncle would like to share some knowledge with you. The focus is on Naruto fans who have never read the canon set. Let's talk about some information that everyone knows first: In the beginning, probably in the 1990s, Kishimoto first created the character of Naruto. It was a short comic. Naruto was a demon fox who used magic. Later, Kishimoto got inspiration and felt that the drawing was too short and unsatisfactory, so he planned to go bigger and wanted to draw a novella. However, he couldn't stop it, so he created the long-length Naruto. At the very beginning, the third generation was drawn as a villain, and there were many clues in the early stages of the foreshadowing that Naruto was the son of the fourth generation. Everyone knows these, and I don't follow suit. When the back figure of the Akatsuki organization appeared, it was once said that Payne was the fourth generation, which shows that Kishimoto's settings have been changing. Naruto's early experiences, such as life, the eye-rolls he encountered, expired milk, etc., Would make absolutely no sense when placed on the son of a hero under normal circumstances. But considering that the third generation is the boss behind the scenes, it is completely understandable to suppress the descendants of the heroes. If the situation is not preserved, Naruto must be removed to pave the way for the Sarutobi family. These are normal routines of Japanese comics and can be seen in countless works. Kakashi's experience, or more specifically, White Fang's experience, is completely justified in this context. The lord is the villain. Don't make it too simple to trick your hero to death. It's completely reasonable. However, after the comic was released, the popularity of the third generation was so high that Kishimoto had to change the setting and let him die in the early stage. But here comes the trouble. The plot of the villains has been buried for a long time. The readers are not fools and cannot be fooled easily. How to break it? So the Pot King Danzo came into being. But these conspiracy foreshadowings are all tailor-made for the third generation. Now that Danzo is forced to carry it, there are always some things that are not justified: How did you, an elder, bypass the third generation and two elders and force White Fang to death? How did he hide this treatment of Naruto from the Third Generation and the other two elders? Even if the other two elders are pigs, how can we break the third generation of Naruto who observes Naruto with the crystal ball every day? The only reasonable explanation is that the other three immortals acquiesced in his actions, otherwise it would not make sense at all. This fundamentally destroyed the first layer of golden body that Kishimoto had whitewashed for the third generation. Then the follow-up question is, what are you doing to Naruto like this, Thirdai? What's the picture of forcing White Fang to death? Why do you care so much and acquiesce to Danzo's actions? This unintentionally portrays the weakness of the third generation from the side. Coupled with what happened to the Hyuga family, the third generation was also labeled as cowardly. Why is Naruto called the Little Sun? In fact, looking at Kishimoto's original plan, Naruto must avenge the third generation because of the injustice and hatred he encountered. However, with Kishimoto's change of course, Naruto has no target for revenge. It's like he has selective amnesia, forgetting his humiliation for so many years, and the people of Konoha also seem to have forgotten how they treated him harshly before. The twist is so blunt that it makes people speechless, as netizens often say: If I were Naruto and knew the truth, the first thing I would do would be to slaughter Konoha. If the matter ended here, Sandai would not be so controversial. At most, he would be a cowardly old man with a bad portrayal. But in the final battle, the Sarutobi family formed an army and collectively used the traditional fire escape of the Uchiha family, almost completely ruining any possibility of clearing him. If Danzo preserves his own strength in order to seek the position of Hokage, then what is the position of the third-generation Sarutobi army that uses the Uchiha family's escape techniques? They have preserved their own family's strength to this extent and openly used the escape techniques of other families. When thinking about the annihilation of the Uchiha clan and the death of White Fang, it is difficult not to make people think more. I really don't know what the purpose of Kishimoto's painting is. . Sandai is indeed a kind old man, a good father and a good grandfather, and he can also be called a dedicated Hokage in protecting the village. But if you want to whitewash other places, then you really have no choice. To paraphrase: no matter how much RMB you spend, it will be NMB in the end!

Among the Naruto fics I read, the only one who completely whitewashed Danzo (probably) into a positive character was Yasuo Hatake.

The early stage is still okay, and the creativity is good, but the more you write, the more you write. Although the protagonist's system is called the good guy system, the more I read it, the more I feel that it should be called the hypocrite system. And it has a brainwashing aura. As long as the protagonist talks about his ideals to others, he will be brainwashed. 😅

(I saw a sand sculpture picture today) What is Tencent Cloud? Let me tell you what Tencent Cloud is. I dare to publish what your Baidu Cloud dares not to publish. I dare to publish what your Baidu Cloud dares not to publish. In one sentence, I dare to publish what Baidu dares to publish. I dare to publish what Baidu dares not to publish. I dare to publish it first and then give the boss permission!

I probably know one of the reasons why the results are not so good. It's the book cover picture. It's too weird. I suggest changing the cover. If the next book can maintain this quality, you will be the one next door to Kaze no Daimaru. By the way, why don't you open a character building? Didn't meet the requirements?

I only read the first chapter and stopped reading. Why? Didn't anyone notice Danzo's age? At the same time, the three generations of sons are probably in their teens? Danzo is only 21 years old? Are you sure it's soul penetration? You penetrated flesh and then transformed into a human being, right? Rejuvenation means becoming younger, not turning back time, not understanding it, nor wanting to understand it, for fear of being poisoned.

Very good idea, average writing style, but the more you go on, the less effective it becomes. . .

(I just have nothing to do, don't worry)

I sincerely doubt that Naruto has been raped by another god. After being treated so cruelly as a child, who in his right mind would want to protect this small, broken village?

The writing is very good, and it is interspersed with the plots of other characters. The teacher said that the results should be better. At least it is no problem to be in the top 20 of the light novel section. You have great potential. Trade more with the editor and ask for a few more recommendation slots.

There is a saying that there is a relationship between the strange power fist and the Thousand Hands Cells? Have I lost my mind? Sakura also had her own body modified?

It feels like many people have never seen Naruto. It's strange. Naruto's treatment is already very good. For jinchūriki, all villages are the same. Gaara has been treated as a monster since he was a child. No one plays with him. The only uncle who takes care of him is given an assassination mission by his father to kill him. Gaara kills him, just to test Gaara's endurance, because the sealing ability of the Wind Ninja Village is not strong. He appears directly insane, humanoid tools, several other villages basically operate this way. Because he is a fourth-generation child, Konoha does not have as many trials as cultivating humanoid weapons. Although no one plays with him, there is no direct beating of him. Moreover, it can be seen from the appearance that Naruto is very naughty and dares to graffiti on Naruto. Isn't this an indulgence? Maybe I didn't show that kind of care and care, but since I became a Jinchuuriki, I would definitely have some restrictions! Comparing it horizontally, I understand everything I know. Only those who haven't seen much, I feel, will have such an idea.

As the son of the Hokage, even if the fourth generation dies, it won't be a problem to hire a few people to take care of the remaining family property, right? In other words, most of the money was lost to the village. So, as the Hokage's son, it wouldn't be a problem to have servants to take care of him, right? Class issues exist everywhere, right?

Well, to be honest, I haven't finished watching Naruto, I just took a rough look. This chapter's remarks and comments have been discussing the issue of logic. I think there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers, and anyone can recognize it as long as the logic is self-consistent. I think the attractive features of novels are generally logic, excitement (pretending to be 13), and laughter (interestingness). To use an analogy, these three metaphors are length, width and height. The attractive part is the area of ​​length, width and height. There are no obvious shortcomings (width). If there is an outstanding part (length), it is a good novel.       ，（，，，）       ，，      ，，，？ I read a chapter every day, although I feel that the author is dumb again, but I still find it very interesting, and there is also the fact that Gu Aotian of Mushroom does not need a sister (very funny, this is really my favorite book, I am blown away, the books of Mushroom are very good, and the eunuch of Gu Aotian can be compared) enmm, the last thing is the evaluation of this book. There is no big problem with the logic. It feels a little refreshing. What attracts me to the fun is the reversal of Danzo the Potato. Generally speaking, it is just average. The author may have to spend more time on logic if he wants to attract book lovers who are interested in logic. You can start with the feeling of pleasure or fun, and look at the author. I deleted this book after reading about 30 chapters before, and now I have read the latest chapter. I saw a lot of book reviews saying it was poisonous, so I made a post. I don't think it is poisonous, but it is a bit ordinary and not attractive enough.

. . . It's been too watery these days, right?

If I wouldn't have read a book with this title a few years ago, but now I suddenly hate the third generation and sympathize with Uchiha, then I can also read Nabekage's book.

After more than a dozen verbose words, I still didn't make a move. . .

Didn't anyone watch it? Then I'll quietly make a bubble

What's the name of the other novel that the author has published? I'll go check it out.