The Night Parade of the Hundred Demons in the Heian Era

Go ahead and kill the author!

If you write about a famous monster at the beginning and waste the character resources at once, you will generally not be able to write for a long time. It will be difficult to write the subsequent plot. It will be difficult to write a million words like this.

The writing style is too weak. As a big monster, the protagonist feels no different from a little monster. He can't do anything straightforward enough. He always feels that the weakness of the high school student in his previous life has always been with him, even after passing Mount Tanba. Later, the protagonist said that he changed his name to a big demon. Why did the author still use the name Shen Qing? If he changed his name to a big demon, he might not be so weak.

Ibaraki Doji's dream was to become the man of the Oni King. Later, he met Shuten Doji and admitted that he was the Oni King. Then he realized his dream and became the Oni King's man! \ (◎O◎) / !

Ahem, after following dozens of chapters until now, I actually still have some thoughts. To be honest, this book is probably the best I have ever read on the same subject. I have to say that I was a little proud when I discovered this book when it was a seedling. I remember when I discovered this book, I said in the book club that this book would be a hit. Also made some bets. . Hahaha😃 Down to business; thoughts, I feel this book can be popular, after all, the subject matter can be said to be very good. However, the author's updates are a bit weak, and the plot in one chapter is a bit lacking, but I believe it will still be popular in the later stages The writing is average, but I always feel that the battle scenes are a bit lacking, making people less enthusiastic. To be brutal is to be weak, and half of the blood is gone. I think it should be strengthened. The scene description is very good. The refreshing feeling of the living environment is instantly there. This writing style is enough for me to write a 56-point essay. The character description is still a bit lacking. In fact, it's okay. All kinds of character descriptions are okay, but the protagonist and heroine alone feel a bit vague to me. I don't know how to put it. Anyway, I just feel that the image is not clear and lacks charm The storyline is slightly better. Because I feel that the main plot is still not outstanding, but the story is still okay. The stories behind the monsters and Onmyoji are all refreshing to me, and it is very good Overall, it is very good and worth enjoying. It's very interesting. I hope the author can continue writing!

I read part of it and made some complaints. I welcome corrections if I'm wrong. It's not a big problem that the protagonist is too cowardly. After all, he is a modern person. But it's a bit discordant to have the protagonist do all kinds of weak behavior despite Ibaraki's identity and strength. And it feels very weird. I understand that the protagonist needs to change his mentality step by step, but there are many places where I feel that the protagonist has grown up and things are still the same as before, which makes people feel indescribably uncomfortable. . There is also the creation of supporting characters. For the role of Sakura, I think the protagonist has sacrificed a lot for her, and a snow girl died conveniently. But after the protagonist saves her, I feel that she still dislikes the protagonist. Maybe it's because I have no feelings for tsundere, but more importantly, I feel that it's a bit too tsundere. It stands to reason that if a person pays so much for you, his attitude should always be better. . I ordered all of them, and I don't mean to criticize anyone. I just saw it and wanted to complain a few words.

The author can try to give the protagonist a ghostly name. The Chinese name is a bit awkward.

The protagonist, a part-time onmyoji, doesn't do a very good job. He seems to have burned other people's guardian angels as if they were weird. It's half a bucket of water.

After so many chapters, it's unclear what the protagonist's abilities are. There's no sense of tension at all. Why don't you first figure out what your situation is when you travel to the past?

Now that the protagonist has retrieved Ibaraki's hundreds of years of memories, I hope to be able to write about that feeling. At least his experience, eyesight and abilities can reflect the identity of Ibaraki's great youkai. Don't burn people's patron saints as youkai like before 😭

I don't understand why the protagonist was initially told by Hashihime that he was a great demon. In a dangerous era where humans and ghosts coexist, he doesn't think about how to improve his strength, but instead competes to be his younger brother. Furthermore, he fought with the Mountain God for a long time, but the Ghost King failed to succeed, and in the end he had to rely on Shutun to save him. Why do you look so frustrated? It's like having the qualifications of a great emperor, but he likes to be a little brother, and he also plays a good hand of cards. This is a confusing human behavior.

? ? ? There is a logical question. Shen Qing saw Ibaraki's memories, Ibaraki's memories of hundreds of years. Shen Qing didn't change at all after reading it? He used his strength when fighting Naraku, but he didn't show much in front of Mount Tanba. Even Mount Tanba even knelt down as soon as he started showing off? And then drink to save people? I looked confused, where is Ibaraki's power? Is it because I have limited talent and knowledge and don't realize that Ibaraki is actually weak?

Let me talk about my current feelings after reading 1. I don't understand whether the protagonist is a time traveler or an indigenous person, and there is no sense of substitution Ibaraki's identity is assigned to the protagonist, but Ibaraki or the protagonist's abilities are not clearly explained 2. The protagonist has no own main line I feel that the protagonist is moving along with time, watching historical events happen and basically having no effect, just making soy sauce here and there, and in the end being powerless. Sometimes the whole scene is supported by drunkenness, so that the protagonist takes second place, just like the protagonist in a historical novel who is a courtier. 3. You said you had foreshadowing for the rest of the story, but I no longer had a sense of immersion in the story. I lost the pleasure of watching the protagonist grow step by step, and also lost the main line of the protagonist establishing a certain force to dominate the world. I don't know what role your foreshadowing will play in the rest of the story? Even if these foreshadowings allow the protagonist to make friends with one or two more big demon SSRs/SPs, we don't know the difference in benefits between "when the protagonist doesn't know them" and "after making friends with them", so it feels like it's hard to write about it 4. Because we are not familiar with the history of Heian Kyo, I don't know if the protagonist has changed history or changed his fate against the will of nature. Now I only know that the protagonist is not invincible, and he is too weak to face many big bosses and forces. But Onmyoji is a popular game after all, so it gives me a feeling that Shuten will still be killed by Minamoto Yorimitsu later, and the protagonist will sacrifice one of his hands to resurrect Shuten... Then he will be plotted by Orochi and beaten by Otakemaru of Kaiguo with a eight-foot magatama... (Onmyoji plot) It feels like a sadistic novel...

I feel that if it comes to the end, I hope that the protagonist can end with a bang in that era. Then I woke up again just after telling 100 stories, just like a dream. I found that the people I cherish are gathering together in this era. Rather than the protagonist spending these long years.

Write about my personal feelings. This book truly brings the protagonist into that era. This book makes the protagonist very real. There is no golden finger. He is just an ordinary monster who is constantly struggling and enjoying life in his busy schedule. Reading the latest chapter gives people the feeling that this is life, maybe it is dark, but everyone can always find the beauty they want in it. The author uses the protagonist as a clue to tell us various joyful or sad stories about monsters and people in the Heian era, showing a fantasy picture. In fact, this writing method was very popular when Internet articles first emerged, but few people write it now. It may be that the author finds it difficult to write, and it is difficult to get the attention of current mainstream readers, so I hope the author can stick to it and try to maintain this writing method. At the same time, some details in the article are not enough. Why was Ibaraki possessed by the protagonist? What is Ibaraki's ability? The story of each monster is too short, and the plot is not explained enough, resulting in a weak appeal. These are my personal opinions, just take a look😁

I have read more than twenty chapters... How should I put it? The writing is a bit too bland, and the protagonist and supporting characters are too weak. If you write a daily drama, there is no problem, but this is the Heian Era, an era where ghosts are rampant. In a background of weirdness, war, and hunger, the daily drama itself is not normal.

. The top demon whose soul penetrates Ibaraki. It was extremely frustrating to read through dozens of chapters. A group of monkey cubs were allowed to throw their daddies several times and they still managed to endure it. When the m attribute is full, Japan has a tradition of defeating the following. But how can you, a snow girl, be able to trick Ibaraki? Yuki-onna can be insulted even by ordinary monkeys. Even though your soul has penetrated, your body can actually endure it. Do you really think that you, an ordinary college student, can compare to Ibaraki's original physical instinct?

Can you replace Shen Qing? It seems really inconsistent.

Is the author planning to write a Japanese chat room? Feeling pretty good

After several months, I finally finished the book. After thinking about it for a long time, I would like to give you a few words~ Due to the subject matter itself and my own writing skills, the results of this book "Hundred Ghosts Night Journey" are not very satisfactory (well, it is mainly because my writing is too bad), but with the support of all readers, I did not choose to finish it. The book is over 400,000 words long... In fact, the Japanese light novel itself should be this long... All in all, I hope that the next book can bring you a novel world and interesting stories. Anyone who is interested can join my reader group: 1074846366. Finally, thank you again to all readers.

I want to curse, but this is just over a hundred chapters long. The author has been taught bad lessons by Japanese light novels.

It's over. . It feels weird. .

I saw that there are more chapters, so good! Especially the protagonist is so trashy. The protagonist of this book immediately brought the book down.

If there are no accidents, the book should be finished within ten days~ I can get here, thank you all for your support~

Ping An Jing

Come on hhh, blessings from the author of the novel Ace Pigeon on the same theme! ! ! ε٩(๑>₃<)7з

After reading the first few chapters, I thought it was okay, but when I saw the sofa and the little yellow duck puppet in Gao Nu's house, I was confused. What is the background of this book?

It looks so messy! There is no logic at all. The further back you look, the more so. At first I thought it was the same bland style as Natsume's friends, with no super powers in daily life, but it was still acceptable. But later on it became inconsistent and unacceptable.

What are you really touching update ah speed speed

I just spent 477 points, and after 11 chapters, you're telling me it's over?