Mechanical Swordsman

The writing is good, and the fighting is precise and graphic. You can feel that the author wants to create a troubled world and a knight who fits the troubled world The villains we fought against in the early stage were not bosses but were overly painted, which made the protagonist seem to have the upper hand but was dragging his feet. Wow, it lacks a sense of fun The character setting is a classic setting, there are no mistakes but it is difficult to have highlights, and it is not very attractive (this is also why I am more picky about characters) A newbie is just talking nonsense, the author only writes what he wants to write, that's enough, come on

The main character is so miserable that I can't stand it anymore. Please reply to Lich's Bradaka

Not bad, not bad, it looks like the old "Dororo" at first glance, and he also carries a defective version of the "Seven Stars Return" with a thousand blades of the magic sword. The setting is too familiar, please forgive me for not reading it and adding another sentence here.

Thank you to all readers and I hope you will support me more! What a recommendation! This is really important for new authors, thank you again!

The content of the novel is wonderful and very attractive. Come on!

I have read a few chapters carefully and the writing is good. I like the first sentence at the beginning. It is not easy to write words. Keep up the good work!

The writing style is so fluent and the writing style is also good. Come on, support it!

It's very interesting. I read the first five chapters and I feel like I want to continue to follow it. Would it be better to add more psychological descriptions? My personal opinion is that I am just a newbie, so just listen to it casually. By the way, I would like to recommend my book "The Spring Breeze Is Not Warm and Run to the Sun".

Robot Warrior, I'm here to support you. Come on.

Already collected, watch slowly. Come on!

Well written, a perfect beginning to the article, beautiful and interesting.

The author's writing style is quite good, and the plot is good, but you may need to pay attention to homophones. I saw a few typos 😥.

The characters are well described, the supporting characters are not verbose, and the main characters are distinct. The protagonist is a bit miserable, but the setting is also quite unique. Keep up the good work, the author, and stay tuned 🌹