Ming Lu

The work is well written, please keep up the good work💪💪💪

It's my first time writing a book. It's a bit stiff. I suggest the author break up the sentences a little. It's a bit uncomfortable to connect them together. Also, the protagonist's heart is too big. Ordinary people should think about their family first when they travel through time. The world view is quite good, but I don't know if it will make a mistake later. Please give your best to the author.

I was attracted by the author's name and avatar