I Open a Martial Arts Gym in American Comics

It makes people speechless. The heroine is very poisonous. As soon as the protagonist does something, she appears. She blocks and makes trouble for various reasons. It is not impossible to have a heroine. Let her appear and participate in the plot in a reasonable way, not in this way. It is too poisonous.

The writing is really bad, I don't want to say anything. Not recommended to watch.

Keep reading, except for the heroine who feels a little uncomfortable, the rest is acceptable to me, a newbie.

After reading a few chapters, the visual quality was okay, but there was too much trash talk, and I felt like I was just talking about water. Then I felt that the protagonist's IQ and EQ were not very good Not too toxic, but still a little bit. Farewell🙏

Yes, if you raise a wave, don't be a eunuch.

You can use those background boards from movies and TV shows, and your combat power will be improved. There are also Hong Kong comics: Wind and Cloud, Dragon and Tiger Gate, Nine Suns Manual, 9 Suns, Magnetic Field Rotating One Million Horses, Tianma Meteor Fist, Hong Kong Comics Yi Jin Jing Golden Bell Cover, they are all awesome.

It is recommended that you don't have any contact with Iron Man and Coulson at first. The writing is terrible. If the writing is not very good, a lot of people will leave.

The descendant of Huang Liang, Ip Man's apprentice, Huang Liang is a 15-year-old physics genius who studied abroad and determined to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen. My parents run a pharmaceutical company in Hong Kong. I love the ancient Chinese martial arts and am in the introductory stage of Wing Chun. I unexpectedly meet the protagonist and become my teacher. Talent, ancient martial arts physique, and "Immortal Will Body" will become stronger the more desperate the situation. The mantra "I can". With a cheerful personality and good-looking appearance, he joined the school's Chinese martial arts club. He learned Wing Chun from his grandfather since he was a child. He worked on the basics bit by bit and entered the initial stage of Wing Chun. The idol "Bruce Lee" later met the protagonist and gradually became the protagonist. How can you not admire the systematic protagonist? Ancient martial arts killing skills, punches are necessary to kill.

Belle

If the early stage was pretty good, then the poison started to spread the moment the heroine appeared. It was completely shoehorned in. It appears unreasonable. Joining the team is unreasonable. It's very unreasonable for the male protagonist to even have a crush on her. The two of them spent less than two days together. And then the male protagonist is a quasi-legend who has a system to win prizes. He was attracted to the heroine. Not to mention, it's full of flaws.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, the protagonist shouts every day that he is not strong enough and is too weak. Are you really not strong enough? Is it really weak? He doesn't use his brain, and he can defeat the enemy easily. He doesn't use his brain, but insists on fighting hard, punching the head with secret force to kill him, insisting on stabbing his throat with his index finger, breaking his own finger, and saying that he is facing a powerful person. If the opponent is stronger, he can't even run away. Aren't you going to be invisible? If you can't defeat it, you won't be able to become invisible. Can you sneak attack again depending on the situation? The top Yongchun boxing, coupled with Jackie Chan's movie Tuxedo, has such a huge advantage. If you don't take advantage of it, you have to use Yongchun boxing to fight against the stone man's hard steel with super high defense. You must use your own shortcomings to attack the enemy's strengths. Then he shouted that he was not strong enough and felt like there was something wrong with his brain.

The martial arts gym is of no use! Then why do you want to open a martial arts gym in American comics? Why not call it a lottery in Marvel?

If we follow American comic movies, basically the martial arts in Legend of the Emperor can be done sideways! If you follow the American comics, the arrival of Emperor Huang Tian is almost the same

If I were in American comics, if I had the ability, I would definitely add fuel to the troubled American empire.

When I saw the self-created heroine, I just want to say you are NB. You succeeded in making me sick to the point of being disgusted. This self-created heroine was so damn hard to persuade me to quit. When I saw this, I just thought that the author couldn't think of it anymore and forced it to be added. This is really disgusting. I thought it was okay in the beginning, but I have to poison a group of people.

Let the author study how to write dialogue. Putting the plot aside for now, how can it retain people just because your character opens his mouth and the dialogue is instantaneous? Who would say this when questioning an enemy, "In this case, I have no choice but to..." When I really read this, I rolled my eyes, like shit, this, this, this, this... I won't say too much, every word is a trap. What are you doing? This is not a problem of your literary writing ability, it is simply a problem of not learning Chinese well in middle school.

Ip Man is a heavy smoker in reality. Although he knows Yongchun martial arts, he has never done anything significant. The Ip Man on TV is all a lie! Stop reading it. If you don't believe me, search it on Baidu.

Chapter 119 is really unbearable. I fell in love with a girl inexplicably within a few days. There was no life-or-death crisis, and there was no way to save her. The woman is the boss's daughter, and she will be given benefits at the end (it can be ruled out that the protagonist was plotted, but if the boss uses his daughter to seduce people, let's talk about it). And why the boss is called the boss, because he can deceive the protagonist's system. The boss pretends to be a mortal being surrounded by wild wolves, and the protagonist completes missions, but a mortal mission comes out (if the boss didn't hide it from the system, either the missions would not be available, or the mythical missions would come out).

If you can't stand it, come here to share how many chapters your poison resistance is?

What kind of emotional line should I write? It's so embarrassing. It's better not to have a female protagonist.

After reading a few chapters, this book gave me the feeling that it is another mindless book. The attributes are based on superposition, not self-cultivation, no Qi and refinement, no skills, relying on the attributes provided by the system to break the limits of the human body. In my opinion, it is a waste. For a real warrior, the protagonist, the system only provides the entry path, cultivation experience, natural materials and earthly treasures, that is, the things of the wealthy couple. If you only rely on the system to provide attributes and do not have your own way, then it is garbage. Those who only pile attribute points will never be on the table.

There are still sword and stick techniques in Wing Chun, but have they been eaten up by the system?

You really talk too much, and are pig's trotters licking dogs? They talk a lot when they meet any hero, they like to meddle in other people's business, they have to interfere in trivial matters, and why do you have so many apprentices? You accept others when they come, and you have to lick them when you meet a hero. I have done nothing all day long, just to give to you. The apprentice has become a nanny with this hero, what about you? You are not straightforward at all, you hesitate, look forward and backward, wash your hands with a hammer, really write whatever comes to mind, you are writing about the city, just like an old woman, it is really smelly and long, I have read dozens of them, I really can't stand it anymore, leave

When writing about mutants, just write about mutants properly, and when writing about Women's Federation, just write about Women's Federation. Marvel itself can't even figure out how to mix them together. It's so difficult to deal with the power of the two, and no one has been able to write a good book so far.

I didn't want to read it once it was written about the heroine. I didn't get to know the protagonist through thick and thin, and it had no merit other than being good-looking. He accommodates her every day and doesn't like to increase his strength. The protagonist also reads with her every day. I really don't know what the heroine is for.

In the early stage, using the index finger to hit the stone man felt very stupid. Anyone who has read Ip Man will know that Ip Man used the index finger to wipe his eyes when there was a huge disparity in power 🙂. A martial arts master doesn't even know the basics of fighting and still discounts his hands. If you are faster than him, can't you use the index finger to insert dark power into the eyes? Also, Logan felt like he was being hypnotized and started to behave like a dog. Kingpin, a villain, knew from the beginning that you were not simple. His first thought was not to figure out the source of your power, but he would also hire you to learn martial arts, but he started licking him regardless? Kingpin has always been a power-oriented person who can improve himself. Will he turn a blind eye? Is this system mission serious? Would a normal person forget to issue a task just for the reward? And this is called a love line? This is obviously a forced match between Greedy Beier's body, and she falls in love with her after chatting for a while without any emotion at all? Too poisonous

The heroine is very abrupt, it only takes two chapters from the time we met and they got together

Belle is really useless, and there is nothing between the two that enhances the relationship between the two of them. Then they get together after seeing Beauty. It's really uninteresting.

The heroine is too poisonous. The protagonist keeps trying to increase her strength, but it never works. Author, you can at least write the heroine to have some effect. What is the difference between this and a vase? It is still a vase that has no strength but is naive.

How could anyone named Huang Wen sound like a fool. It's better to call you Zhang Wen than Huang Wen.