Xiaotian, Duxue, Fengtian

After reading it... How can I put it, the introduction and the main text are the plot of the story, so it is better to change it to the first chapter. The suspense and contradictions in the opening chapter are well created, making people want to follow Xu Nian to the mountains to find out what's going on. It would be a bit too much for Wang Ya to kill the protagonist just to gain credit for being the village director. (Killing people in exchange for the position of village director. The extreme means used to achieve the goal are not symmetrical, which is roughly what it means.) The writing style is a bit straightforward and colloquial, but the sentences are quite smooth and the segmentation is OK. Come on, author!

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I woke up this morning and found that someone gave me two recommendation votes 😰 Thank you

Dear friends, if you collect it and let me know that you are not a robot, then your whole day will be happy.

It is recommended that there be not too much foreshadowing at the beginning. This entry point makes me feel that the pace of this book is a bit slow... The writing and plot are still acceptable, keep up the good work!

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Very well written, bookmarked.

It's okay, I think the scene transitions and character descriptions could be a little better.

Thank you for the invitation. I am in Mongolia... Well, I went to the wrong studio. I went to the wrong studio 😌 I just roughly read the book. Overall, I feel that the writing of the book is good. Is the whole book going to be in a supernatural style? I thought it was a fantasy book, like a ghost blowing out a lamp? It shouldn't be a cool book, right? However, I estimate that some people will definitely like to read this type of book, but it doesn't quite suit my taste. However, everyone has their own reading style, and there should be many people who like to read it. I hope you guys can cheer up and wish this book a great success! ! ! 🙏🙏✊✊✊ ps: Also thanks for the reply

Already collected, look back to collect Tianyelu