Tianyuan Saint Ancestor

Good books need to be praised by everyone. 😊😊

The plot of the story is exciting, and a story introduces a lot of characters, which is very interesting.

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The author's writing style is very good, the story setting is good, and it is advanced step by step. It can be seen that the author is very careful and maintains it well. It will definitely become a masterpiece. Take good care of you!

Very strong writing skills! The story and writing are wonderful! It's as smooth as flowing water!

The author writes fluently and has rigorous conception.

Watch it every day and gain something every day.

It's really awesome. You're bragging about it. Why don't you invest if it's so good-looking? 😡

I feel that the author really wrote it very carefully and it is beautiful!

The author has good writing skills and attracts attention. Vote!

The stories are intertwined and the votes are ups and downs!

First, you have a big problem with grammar, that is, simple writing. There are many confusions in your expression, such as the opening: full is a verb, and the verb cannot be followed by an adjective. What the hell is full of magic? You should add the suffix "place" after magic Second, the way you tell the story is wrong. For example, if you are asked to describe the real world, how would you describe it? Are you from nuclear bombs to instant noodles or from the Antarctic to the North Pole? All background meanings are relative to the story, and only have practical significance under the story itself. What is a story is an event experienced by an individual. The necessary elements that make up the interest of a novel are contradictions and conflicts. The continuous advancement of explosions and reconciliations creates a fascinating and engaging atmosphere. Suggestion: Pay attention to grammar writing and think about the relationship between characters. Only by using accurate language and describing vivid and interesting characters and events can readers be gained. Look more, think more, come on💪 Don't deceive yourself and others with wrong perspectives and attitudes!

I was shocked by the heat. So many book reviews, recommendation votes Author, can you give me a reply? Support your readers!