The Legend of Li Chunfeng in Lingjian Mountain

1. In terms of martial arts, you can not only add a level of proficiency to Qi and blood, but also add some difficulties in practicing martial arts in the text. 2. The first few pictures are too jumpy and have a single content. Some fragments of life should be added, such as childhood sweethearts or trivial life events. Although they are common, they can make the article more colorful. 3. The progress of martial arts is too fast. Although Lingjian Mountain is about cultivating immortals, the difficulty level of folk martial arts is also very high. After reading the beginning, I feel that folk martial arts can be practiced casually. 4. Your worldview is not described. Not everyone has seen Lingjian Mountain, and you have to write a book so that readers can understand it. 5. When writing a novel, don't be too close to the original text. It should show the influence of your characters on the development of the plot, but the general direction of the original work cannot be changed casually. . . . Just think of it first, come on. I still quite like Lingjian Mountain Tongwen.

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