I Have an Eye for Truth

To be honest, the author's Earth Travel Era has a good theme, but the writing style is too poor. It always feels like reading a primary school student's composition. The main and supporting characters' IQs are not online. They often suffer from settings and overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. Later, the author started to write exciting stories. The combat power and economic system completely collapsed. The female character he wrote was obviously very disgusting. It can be seen that the author did not know how to write female characters at all, but he insisted on writing a lot of space for the female characters, which made the protagonist particularly aggrieved. In the eyes of many people in the book circle (including me), it cannot even be called a cool article, which is unpleasant. In my opinion, the overall evaluation is inferior to Xiaobai. It's really a pity that such a good subject and creative writing are so messed up, otherwise the results wouldn't be so bad. I hope the author of this book can write it well, and don't start writing yy again. Don't make the protagonist and villain's IQs look like idiots, and write as little female characters as possible. Also read more book circles and read more suggestions, otherwise you won't be able to write ten thousand books well. If you write books just for fun, then just think I didn't say it.

You should read the comments first and forget about describing Xiaobai. After all, most authors are like this. So won't the character He Yingxue die? Will you die if you don't write female characters? In the early stage, the protagonist just came through and asked about everything, which showed that he was mentally retarded. Not to mention that after killing the monster, he still had peace of mind. This woman was a failure as soon as she came out. She was poisonous, and the protagonist was described as annoying. The more annoying she became, the more she licked her, right? A very good subject was ruined!

Carrots and cabbages each have their own preferences. Anyway, for me, an old bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, I can only read fifteen chapters of this book. I really can't stand it anymore. Apart from other things, are there still idiots in the army who want to recruit people into the army and do it without consent? Are the troops just decorations? There is not even such a small amount of binding force, and this army has not finished playing?

This can be regarded as an author who is as productive as a cow 🤭🤭🤭

I'm curious why the introductions are always from these books? Have you guys rented this place together? Hahahaha

I don't really like the characters in it. Liu Xiao is okay, but Li Mang and those gangsters are not well written, and the plot of those women is not good. Can the protagonist go out and work alone? Being with them is firstly a burden, and secondly, secrets are easily exposed. As soon as you come, they will tell you that you are not a normal person and have no common sense at all.

Tell me what you think 💡 The failure of this book First, the protagonist is like a licking dog. He licked He Yingxue at the beginning. Please🙏🏻If you like the protagonist, just write it. People who read it will feel aggrieved. Secondly, you said you should keep your abilities secret, but later the whole team knew about it and reported it to the military. . . In fact, is this team of any use to the protagonist? I saw in front of me that I had to fight Yalong to get a knife and some common sense about cultivation. . . I vomited when the captain asked someone to be used as bait without consulting the protagonist at all. Ni Ma, why don't you go and do the protagonist yourself and then cover you from behind. . . Also, you thought the protagonist was dead, but you didn't suspect it and didn't use your family's power to investigate. I can only say that the protagonist was never considered a teammate from the beginning, like a reserve cannon fodder. . .

If you don't know how to write female characters, you have to write them by force.

The author insists on writing female characters. It would be better if the female characters were deleted. The female character is very boring and very bitchy. Just like the God Interpreter.

It makes my balls ache to watch the team-up, it's just violent. I feel like you can't write without the heroine. Look at the book "There Is a Monster", which is so popular even if no one has a heroine. Don't team up all day long, girl, it's so annoying.

If nothing else, this author is diligent. I read two of his books and seldom stopped updating them. He basically doesn't know how to be a eunuch.

The heroine is not as good at handling it as she was in the previous book, and the writing in this book is a bit cheesy.

In the early stage, it felt okay, but in the later stage, I felt that the protagonist was turned into a tool man. Like licking a dog.

I hope it can be as beautiful as the earth in the early stages and not be so boring in the later stage. . . (Thinking)

Are you sure you don't have a master-servant relationship with the heroine? I'm still willing to be a licking dog and get used to it,

After seeing your profile, I want to read it. If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. It's not easy to write a book. Why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "Add Immortal Lord", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Martial Tomb", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Drunken Immortal Gourd", "Invincible with Eyes", "I am the King of the Summers", "Don't mess with that dragon", "White Dragon Lord of Winter", "Zombie Evil Emperor", "Mechanical Latitude", "This Lord is not easy to mess with", "Killing God", "Demon Sky Chronicles", "Rebirth as a Tree", "Super" "God Refining Factory", "Carrying a Mist World", "Nightmare Corrosion", "The First Emperor of the Human Race", "Spirit Login Device", "Huntian Star Lord", "Ancient Games Invasion of Reality", "Ji Dao Fist Lord", "Global Spiritual Tide", "God of Killing", "Zhang Sanfeng's Journey to Another World", "Soul-Eating Book", "Road to Heaven", "Ping Tian Ce", "My Savage Tribe", "Ji Dao Monster" and "Bring a Lottery Panel with You"

What this team writes is really disgusting

The protagonist's mind is no better than that of an elementary school student. This may have a lot to do with the author's experience. The protagonist, let alone being decisive in killing, doesn't even have basic ideas. The description of his strength is extremely vague, and there is no sense of satisfaction at all.

Brother, can't we go to the dark side of a profession? The long-range talent is so good, but if we have to engage in melee combat, the mage will be squishy? Do you want to know about Shield+Flash?

It's really outrageous and there are all kinds of inconsistencies. He said that he would not join the team, he was snobbish and wanted to go out and have fun on his own. In the next chapter, a woman invited him to join the team and he agreed. . Just because this woman chatted with the protagonist in the previous chapters. Then on the way to join the team with that woman, the woman discovered the protagonist's ability. The next day, the woman made all the counties they passed by know about the protagonist. The protagonist was not interested in her, but he was still obedient. It's really outrageous. Shouldn't she be killed as soon as her secret is discovered? Is the author a boxer?

The mage writes so many attributes, all of which are used for attacking, and there are two that attack the soul. Can't you think about it if they are all reused?

The subject matter and type are good, but there are too many poisonous points, and almost no characters have online IQ, which is a pity. .

This author's writing is second-rate. He also likes to write plots of intrigue, but he doesn't handle it well. Chapter 230 is too poisonous. He is on the verge of death after being attacked by his own forces. He doesn't know where his team's cooperation is, and he still has to struggle to survive. Later, when the city is trapped and the guards are guarded, they still have to go to the rescue (whoever dies is not dead, saving the enemy is too holy). The level of the book has not been high 😳😳

Ha ha! Recently I discovered a good book called "Spiritual Gourd"

This book is pretty good. It would be better if the female character had a more likable personality (purely a personal feeling)

IQ is not online, and I don't have any background.

I just read a few chapters and there are a lot of bugs, so I say goodbye.

Come on, why don't you apply for it? Now the investment has failed.

I came from the time when the earth traveled through time, but I can't stand this book. I'll give it a try with the author's new book.

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