The Sword Is Sharp

Why do I write more than you but don't have a single comment? Is it because you have done a good job in publicity?😐

1. The description is not detailed. Since you classify your work as traditional martial arts, the description of martial arts must be detailed. However, I have never seen detailed descriptions in your work. The characters are poorly drawn, and the movements and expressions are lacking. The picture that comes to my mind is that of a few stick figures having a conversation on a piece of white paper... Those who say it is well written may not have read it carefully. Attached is the opening chapter of Mr. Jin Yong's "Xia Ke Xing" for comparison. 2. The plot is too weird. Since the people in Ruichi's time travel have the best food and are the most favored, how can they be insulted by others? In a big family like this, normally, no matter what the favored person does, as long as it does not touch the master's power, even if he kills his own brother, he will be forgiven. This makes it too late for others to curry favor with you, so why bother pushing others down the wall? Aren't these a bunch of mentally retarded people? In a big family, competition for fame and fortune often leads to a person's gloomy character. My sister, I was also drunk. She framed others and told the victim the truth. No one else has such an IQ... To put it bluntly, your cultural level is definitely not high. This book is already very good. It is best to go back and remake it, otherwise it will be really hard to read. Even if someone gives a recommendation vote, it is only a courtesy and no one will do it out of sincerity.

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QAQ, I feel so pitiful in comparison.

The writing is passable, I will read it from time to time.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, it's good, I feel like I can continue to follow it, and I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot. The plot design is very interesting and attractive!

If the recommendation ticket reaches 20, I will keep updating it. Dear beautiful and handsome readers Brush up! Get your recommendation votes! It's best to swipe several pictures in a row 😀😃😁😁🤠💪🤪 ✍️✍🏻✍🏼✍🏽✍🏾✍🏿

The new author has done a good job, keep up the good work.

He is my classmate. He writes well. Keep up the good work, Xiaokang.

Thank you for your support! Update today!

Dear readers, there is an update from Yilian. 🤪🤪🤪🤗

Don't blame me for speaking hastily, the writing style of this book is a bit poor. At least the adjective makes me dream back to my elementary school days.

Support! Very well written. . . I just hope the author can update it soon. . . Looking forward to the next content!

Big! It's so beautiful, don't stop updating it.

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Thank you for your support I will seriously correct the contradictions! Improve the quality of your novels! ! Thanks ✍️✍🏾✍🏼

Okay, okay, the writing is good,

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Thank you for your support, the work has 70,000 words! Thank you all

Be careful, I will continue to chase you!

Support the author greatly and have voted Use more action points to describe! It would be better to have more braille😁😁

Come on, let's grow together!