Tokyo Juggernaut Online Dealing

1. The pace of my book writing is slow, and there is no point in urging me. I may write a faster-paced infinite flow for my next book. This one cannot be changed, but this problem can be solved when it is published. After it is published, I will write 10,000 yuan a day for a while, and then I will guarantee a minimum of 6,000 yuan a day. 2. I'm new here, and my writing is average. If I'm annoying you, feel free to drop it. You and I are willing to write and read books, and I'm not forcing you to carry the poison and read it. It's a bit unreasonable to endure the poison, hold your nose and read, and get angry at me while reading. And I'm thinking about this free chapter. I'm not making money from you. The book is not to your taste. Just delete the book and leave. I'm not guilty enough to die. I really can't stand it. A few curse words are enough, but there is no need to say those too unpleasant words to prove that you have been here. Why are you leaving now? It's not necessary. To be honest, I don't care much about the opinions of the people who left, and the opinions of the important people who stayed. I will delete it when I see it. 3. I said it clearly, what the demon souls need is recognition, which is also a foreshadowing, but I think most people automatically bring recognition into the strategy, thinking that the demon souls are all female, and the male protagonist will accept one after another. I will not take the blame, and I am not afraid of spoilers. There are male demon souls, some female ones, some human beings, and some non-human ones. My male protagonist is not so harsh. 4. My emotional dramas are average, just skip them if you don't like them. The length is not much, and it will be even less after it is put on the shelves. But if you ask me not to write if I can't write well, is it a bit too lenient? I write books just to hone my writing and plot, and slowly improve. If I can't write well, I won't write. Aren't I a lifelong noob? Let's just say this. The first book in the starting point is mainly about accumulating experience. The results are quite satisfactory. I am not good at pigeons. The writing of this book is not to your taste. We have the next one. You may like to read that one. The writing is not good and it is not about murder and arson. I write my story for people who like to read it. There is no need to be too violent. I will come in and browse this post every day. If you have any discussion related to the plot, you can leave a message. I will reply if I can. If I can't reply, it means serious spoilers.

Followed the Invincible Flow label. There is nothing cool about being invincible. You can use the golden finger after getting it done. How many chapters does it take to show it once? Invincibility means that the protagonist is stronger than everyone else and is everyone. But the author's understanding may be that there is no defeat, that is, you can win every game you should win, and you still have to admit defeat when you should lose. Maybe it is to highlight the protagonist's character. Invincible means that I can lose to you, but I lose because I want to lose to you. When I come to him, I'm all pretending to be a supporting role. Just be convinced. Some people may have abandoned it after setting up more than 30 shops. In fact, it's not bad there. The most vicious scene is where Li Fuyao appears. I will reply with status when I get home soon. If I don't reply, I will drink herbal tea from the woman on the roadside. The protagonist said yes even after drinking. What about forcing a bond? There is also this kind of plot where other characters record the protagonist's every move behind the scenes. Don't call him Li Fuyao. It is recommended to call him Robin Li.

Ah, the novel is good to read, but it is a bit unsatisfying and picky. I have a few words to say to myself: Goldfinger, at the beginning, I said that there is no game like Baiwen Pai in this world, so Goldfinger comes with time travel. It is completely OK to say that. But you gave me another golden finger, and many demon souls ran out to find a compatible host... I traveled with your soul, why didn't your soul have a problem, but the system demon soul had a problem? A sudden change in the game resulted in dozens or hundreds of demon souls descending from the sky to bring good news to countless demons, ghosts, and humans? Even if you say that it is because of energy or other factors, you need to kill demons to activate the demon soul, or after activation, you have to fight the demon soul or get the demon soul's approval before it can be used... But I feel that this is also your outline, an important key factor linking the upper and lower plots, just like the Yingcao demon soul and the current Demon Sword Princess demon soul. It is estimated that this will be done in the future, the demon soul needs to be recovered. But this golden finger feels too complicated to me. What comes from the past life is what comes from the past life, and what comes after time travel is what comes after time travel. Don't have so many messy combinations. Clean and neat is what I want. So for me, this is not a big poisonous point, but it's still acceptable. The second thing, and what I cannot accept, is the character Li Fuyao. The first appearance of this person was when the protagonist was about to sink... When I think about it, I forgot, and I want to complain again, absorbing ghost energy is to charge the picture, is it absorbed by the protagonist's own body? At best, he only plays a role of transmission, so why should he sink! When you say that strengthening physical fitness has been filtered by the Golden Finger, it is the effect of the Inugami Card, so... You can't think deeply about it. I don't know why the protagonist is given this weakness, it's just weird. Let's talk about Li Fuyao, a beauty with a high degree of mystery when she appears. She is waiting for the protagonist who is about to sink in a bookstore. She prepares tea in advance and allows the protagonist to safely survive his first "unsolvable" crisis. She is calm, elegant, and intellectually beautiful. Maybe many readers think this is okay and just wait for the explanation of the reason later. If this is considered poisonous, then don't read the book. I... Think so too! But when I'm still looking forward to the follow-up... Bang! I have been waiting for a book of paintings, which is filled with the daily life of the protagonist... Why do I feel that this is a pervert? ? ?  …It's okay, although I feel a little uncomfortable, this is also very exciting. Maybe it's some kind of divine expansion? I was cautious and hopeful, and then the car stopped... What did I see? A gangster lady. . . Another gangster lady! This calm, elegant, perhaps perverted beauty, exuding mystery and intellectuality, was instantly in my heart. Her personality dropped more than a little, and her dream was shattered. Really, I was very sad. I just want to ask the author, in your eyes, is the gangster lady so high-level? The demon spirit of Demon Sword Princess resides in the daughter of President Dongwen, and this mysterious extraordinary woman who saved your life is also a gangster lady... Do you know how the mysterious woman you created earlier feels in my eyes now? She is just the daughter of a gang boss now! From mysterious and unknown to feeling like a street girl! Do you understand that I won't give you six recommendation votes? Moreover, I simply can't accept why Li Fuyao came to save you and monitored the protagonist so frantically. Didn't she have a reason to know? ! She is a gangster lady, and the protagonist is from a family of orphans. What is the reason between the two of them that makes Li Fuyao pay so much attention to him? Although you haven't written a plot to explain this part of the reason in the book, it's hard for me to accept any answer, because of the picture scroll? Because she has perfectly absorbed a certain demon soul in the protagonist's Golden Finger Hundred Ghost Picture, so she senses that the protagonist is born to be her boss? It doesn't matter, there are many reasons to explain, and I believe the author can also write very reasonable and wonderful reasons. But I cannot accept that this mysterious character is actually a gangster lady, and she is a gangster who the protagonist is about to join the alliance. This plot is far from my psychological expectations, and it is already much lower than the height I set for this character. Moreover, judging from this part of the plot, I have no love for the subsequent plot for the time being. I will not delete the book. I still have expectations for the author and hope that the author will write better and better. Come on^0^~.

What's wrong with the harem? Just write it without any problem.

The concept is good but the reading experience is a bit poor. Some of the plot twists in the book are not very good and affect the reading. In my humble opinion, I hope the author thinks more about it and the better. I look forward to the author's next book.

Look at you, the author. The title of your book is not very good, but your writing is really good.

Well written, good luck to the author! Recommendation vote has been cast

Xiancao, come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The article is good anywhere. The main character is the most toxic. He has always said that he will not fall in love, but now he lets the girl live at home. You might as well marry her directly. This is good for you and that woman. You don't have to look for a partner anymore, and that woman can rely on you for the rest of her life. If you don't like someone, make it clear. What I hate the most is this kind of nagging, thinking that I am good to others, but in the end, others misunderstand me and think that I have a good impression of each other. It depends on whether this is called a "spare tire" in reality. I hope the protagonist can grow some brains and live like a human being. Now the protagonist is already a scumbag. His character and outlook are really rubbish. There is a strange woman living at home, and he hasn't made it clear to her that he doesn't like her, so he has to look for her outside. It's really bloody. 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤

If you are testing poison and are on the verge of becoming poisonous, write it down before you die. Skip thirty, thirty-one, thirty-two, and you will be safe! I would like to inform future readers that the early content of this book is okay. Although it has minor flaws, you can still read it. The most poisonous point is that the content of these three chapters, Chapter 30, Thirty-one, and Thirty-two, is a lot of nonsense, the plot is shit, and it has no impact on the plot. If you are reading this If you read this review before reading the book, I suggest you skip these three chapters, otherwise I guess it will be difficult for you to resist this wave of poison                               ——Those who test the poison first

Every protagonist in Japan has a pitiful, helpless, and cute little white rabbit-like girl with a tragic life experience and personality who is like a little white flower, waiting for the protagonist to save her.

The writing is very good, but it has to be poisoned. Look at how good your previous writing is. , But as soon as they entered the police station, they all turned into idiots. Is this something humans do? ?

Can this story continue? Yes, but if you are busy recently, please ask the author to come out and say hello; if you can't, just simply announce that he has had the surgery. I won't update it quietly. You are so sorry to the readers who have been subscribing (including me)

The writing is very good, there is no pretense or pretentiousness behind the scenes, it is the most enjoyable to become stronger like this openly.

The author praises Wing Chun too much! The late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China were the golden age of martial arts. How many people knew Wing Chun? Why did Bruce Lee create his own Jeet Kune Do from Wing Chun? Isn't it because the actual combat of Wing Chun is not good in the world?

The author's writing style is not bad, but your routine is too old. You can guess the back by looking at the front. Forget it, what the hell is the protagonist's plug-in in the time-travel zone that merged with the natives or just escaped directly? One of the most interesting aspects of the time-travel novel is the collision between the power systems of different civilizations. As a result, the protagonist is fighting against his own cheat for a long time? And this also results in the protagonist not being unique! He has lost his specialness! ! The protagonist's abilities, strength, etc. In web novels will all have unique settings to ensure the protagonist's specialness and strength. But as a result, you have to feed the protagonist cheats? I suspect that the final enemy in this book is one of the hundreds of ghosts and a few demon spirits? Is the whole story a battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and his own plug-in? ! Can't you completely separate the protagonist's cheats from the natives? Why do we have to merge into the same power system? Forcibly increase the difficulty of improving the protagonist? Then wouldn't it be good if you wrote about mainstream abuse? You have to do this disgusting routine. . . Also, are there demon souls that possess people and need to be recognized? Can't activate certain abilities even if I'm not around? The protagonist's power should belong entirely to the protagonist! Do you want the protagonist to be Shido Itsuka?

When I got tired of reading, I came to the book review area and found a group of people criticizing the author and expressing their personal opinions. I have read half of the book and there is nothing special about it. I didn't feel the poison in Chapters 30, 31, and 32 mentioned in the hot reviews. Anyway, I skipped that large section of lines. Anyway, I already know what is going to be said. It's better to just read the free chapters to understand the plot. On the contrary, it looks better as you go to the back, especially the description of the battle, which feels particularly cool. Maybe I'm a middle-aged person? Anyway, I felt like I had a small climax up to Chapter 68 of Tokyo Raiders, which was very satisfying. Then let's talk about the author. No matter what the reason is, it's a bit arrogant to read it or not. This society is not black and white. There are some things that cannot be said. No matter how many reasons you have, it's your fault. How many people have you persuaded to quit just because of your words? I didn't read the book reviews before reading the book, and I would quit reading it if I wanted to. Moreover, the author reminds me of many authors who write well but have bad character to feed me, such as the old pigeon who said "I teach kendo in Tokyo".

The book is very poisonous, but it is not extremely poisonous. It is much more poisonous than this. I can endure it if I read more. The setting is not bad, and I can feel that the author has written with intention. However, the author is not good at writing and cannot express that feeling. The author himself is definitely numb with what he writes. After all, those who write novels have read a lot of novels. Who is not a troll and has never trolled others? At most, he only trolls in his heart without saying it out loud. But after starting to write a book, you will find that you have taken over everything that you troll others, and you are so poisonous that your scalp is numb. At least that's how I am. To be honest, it's not easy to keep writing when you see how bad your writing is, and this level is already above the standard among newcomers. If the author can persevere, he may not be able to become a great master. I just hope that the author can restrain his temper. There is nothing wrong with writing books and practicing writing, but you also need to learn how to deal with book friends. After all, online articles are commodities, readers are customers, and customers must be customers. Emperor, this should be clear. I don't ask you to treat everyone as God. That's impossible. But please don't say anything that will cause discomfort to the readers. Just don't say things like get out if you don't want to read. Although you say it tactfully, everyone can understand it, and it's useless to be tactful. ————Advice from a struggling author who has been on the street for two years

The biggest flaw of this book is that the author likes to slap the protagonist in the face. As mentioned earlier, the system only has a few functions and not much else. As a result, the protagonist has to save the girl the next day, and then the protagonist says he does not want to fall in love, and takes the girl home in the blink of an eye. . . . I can't hold on even if I have sex for free!

After seeing through Kyoko's tricks, she first took a step forward and said she wanted to live with the male protagonist, but then the male protagonist got embarrassed, then took a step back and said she couldn't hurt the male protagonist, and then the male protagonist relented. Is there any green tea bitch trick? Like and push me! ! The book is still very good, support it! ! It's just that the harem wants to complain! !

Chapter 30 is a turning point, if you can accept it, you can continue reading. Anyway, I vomited. The plot of Ryunosuke's organization was so clever that it exploded.

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it. The overall book was okay, but I felt very embarrassed when I saw the first female protagonist. At first, I remember the male protagonist said that he just wanted to learn to practice swordsmanship, but when the female protagonist confessed, he immediately couldn't bear to refuse. It gave me the feeling that the male protagonist couldn't walk when he saw a woman. When it comes to relationships, if you like it, you like it, if you don't like it, you don't like it. Where do so many things come from? Let's start with friends. I hope the author can make a lot of progress in the future.

It's well written, and the rhythm of starting a harem begins with Kyoko. Generally, people who write this plot have a mentality of being a loser. Kenshu's face was completely humiliated. Considering that it is in Japan, it is understandable. I guess the author has a lot of seed space.

A private school that has just opened and needs a good reputation. The top three students in academic performance are blocked at the school gate by delinquents from the same school and demand protection money... I don't understand the author's logic. In Japan, a somewhat ideal school, the top students are the lifeblood of the school. If you dare to collect protection money, the school will expel you, let alone at the school gate.