Yuanzhouxing

The writing is quite interesting, I have collected it, read it slowly, keep at it, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

The writing is okay, but there are a lot of small mistakes!

Let's take in each other, come on, come on! 🙏🙏

I play alone every day, so lonely

Not bad, I'm looking forward to it, I've given you my investment!

No more sofa? It's okay to grab a bench🤔Already collected

When you come to my place, can you still sit on the bench? 🤤

Come on, collected 🙂

The new book will make you fatter, come on, the author

1. Both the title and the introduction of the book are somewhat fairy-like. I especially like the line about drunken dreams, falling snow and flying flowers. For some reason, the title of the book reminds me of the introduction to "Yangshen". 2. It seems to be a slow-moving novel. The protagonist is a child in the first few chapters. You need to grasp the rhythm and use the time accelerator well. 3. The writing style is relatively smooth, but the writing should not be too colloquial, otherwise the reading will be distorted, which means it will be too down-to-earth and novice. 4. Pay attention to punctuation marks, as well as the way characters talk and narrate. Any dialogue with "" basically has no period or other symbols. It is always placed at the beginning of each paragraph. Come on