Black Hole Arena

Anyone? Show your claws😎

Is it well written? What I wrote earlier is terribly messy, and the most important point is that the word count is too obvious, and there is so much water in the early stage. Is it really good?

The completion does not highlight the role of the golden finger. The so-called unlimited upgrade requires finding the purchased price skills to upgrade. Can it also be called unlimited upgrade?

Refill. Very well written. . . I really want to see the development of the plot later,,,

How many people are there in your world if you can eat hundreds of millions of blood at every turn? Speechless, speechless,

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel a bit less immersed. 1. Without an introduction to the world view, there is no general understanding of the world. 2. There is no introduction to the game and I don't know much about the game. 3 There is no description and introduction of the protagonist himself. 4 To be determined, I haven't finished reading it yet, so I don't know what's next. If the author has information, please post it and take a look!

A Diwu was written as a fantasy by the author🤭🤭🤭🤭

The idea of ​​the book is good, but I don't know why. I just feel awkward and can't read it. Like Black Tiger Bully, I feel like they all look like actors. They are just there to go through the motions. I don't know if it's a problem with the author's description or something. The whole thing is very abrupt and full of dissonance, but I can't tell what's wrong. Does anyone know why?

If the root bone is low, don't you have the Yijin Meridian, the Marrow Cleansing Meridian, and the Nine Yin Bone Forging chapters? How can I improve it to 5?

I just read the first chapter and found a problem: The introduction is about the protagonist traveling from the 20th century to the 30th century, and a century we are talking about is 100 years, so the protagonist should travel from one day in 1900-1999 to one day in 2900-2999. However, the author wrote in the first chapter: The protagonist traveled from 2019 to 9102, spanning more than 7,000 years. Then the question comes: The first point: 2019 is the 21st century, not the 20th century; The second point: The 30th century is 2900-2999, not 9100-9199. So, author, is this wrong in your introduction or in your main text?

Passing by! ! ! Come on^^. . .

I like it so much. . I beg you to continue to do more. . I will like it till the end. Come on, Oli.

After watching the first few pictures, I lost interest. The protagonist's personality is erratic. When he meets Brother Tiger, he covers his mouth with his hands at first, but then he becomes very tough (even if his life is in danger, the change is too fast). And if you have the courage to take action, why not take action earlier and wait for the old man to cut off his hand? Come and take action again (I personally think it is unreasonable for the old man to amputate his own arm, but it is barely acceptable). If you have to wait for the old man to pay the price before taking action, you can write that the old man has ridiculed (or otherwise) the protagonist before. Personally, I think this is more reasonable.

It feels like there aren't many people around. Don't you like this?

Come on, author, it's very interesting. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. Although the content is a bit messy, it still made me feel lonely when I read a master! ! Come on＾0＾~The recommendation vote has been cast

Shan Jiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

The writing is a bit messy and I can't understand it.

Isn't this a game for you? What happened?

Even after chasing for several days, I didn't finish a single battle... Not even half of it. It's a little too slow.

If the setting is not good, it is better to use spiritual energy to revive martial arts, or to travel into the game. The virtual world is of no use.

There is nothing to say about using black holes as energy. With this technology, if you don't engage in scientific research or military development, you can engage in games. Staff in government departments in various countries are all Internet-addicted teenagers, right?

Author, what's going on with your new book? Why did it suddenly disappear? I didn't read this book very much. The new book's ideas were a bit interesting. I also voted for it as a regular recommendation, but it suddenly disappeared.

By the way, what is the approximate power level of this book before it can enter the real world?

After reading the latest chapters, it seems that the book is about to be finished. Has the author decided what to write in the next book? I feel that this theme is very novel, but starting from Ascension is too off track. After all, in a game novel, the presence of players can provide a lot of jokes. The existence of many memes can provide an element of relaxation. After ascending in the later stage, it basically falls into the category of infinite flow. When separated from the game, it feels a bit too bland.

I feel a little boring when I read the Flower and Leaves chapter. I have no idea what this chapter is about. I was in a hurry to go to the Excalibur Villa, and then suddenly went astray. It's like a brave man who is obsessed with the branch plot and forgets the main plot. The question is, what is the use of the protagonist of this branch plot? I helped out a few times and then offline more than a dozen chapters. Isn't that disgusting? The protagonist knew that the girl had committed a murder and left, but the author should at least explain what happened after the protagonist left? Are the readers here to watch the sad drama? That's all. What I wrote before is not bad. Why did it suddenly take a turn for the worse? I don't understand…