This Silver Dragon Belt System

After reading the title and clicking on it, the idea seems pretty good... I just suggest that the character's IQ be improved. And there are some places where the connection is not appropriate and the transition is too abrupt. What can I say... In this case, as a writer, you should go into more details and add something else without going into details, such as the behavior of the people around you and the psychology and performance of the characters in the scene. But the premise is that the writing is passable, and the effort in writing is in vain. Your writing jumps and jumps, and I always feel that there are some shortcomings. It makes people feel weird... And the author's setting is not very good, and the logic is a bit messy. It is recommended to pre-set the world view and set up a big framework before writing the article in the future, so that it is convenient to fill in...

The protagonist's words and actions are still too human-like. Although he was transformed from a human, he is now a dragon after all, and the protagonist gives people a salty personality. Why did the elf give the protagonist a stone for free? Aren't giant dragons crazy? Besides, it's not fun to turn into a human being all the time. We're here to see the dragons in the first place.

Although it's not very good, I feel like this book will collapse sooner or later.

Uh uh uh... You just graduated from high school when you suddenly stopped having something to do?

The quality of a work can be seen from the character of the protagonist and the functions of the system.

I think the author may not understand what readers really want to read Other people want to read Dragon Dragon Dragon Dragon but don't want to read novels about shape-shifting people. Many of them have died

Alas, my friend, your dragon novel is meaningless if it involves transformation. You might as well write a protagonist who is reborn as a human noble. I think dragon fiction should have a dragon's perspective. I have always hated the idea of ​​transformation.

Open a new post, does anyone remember the name of the character? Format: Race Name Character Ability (fighting energy or magic) Introduction

The cheating Long Aotian Shenhao Xiaobai is a cool novel. The writing is smooth, and the protagonist is cool and awesome. If I were to be the protagonist, I would be happy, but when I watch it, I can't stand it. In my opinion, only when you have difficulties, limitations, and goals can you really enjoy yourself. If it is too smooth and invincible, it will be boring. In addition, it is said to be a silver dragon, but as a result, human thoughts, human appearance, and the identity of the dragon have basically become decorations.

Emmm, after reading the first few chapters, I found an obvious problem. The story is too blunt. In other words, the writing is not enough...

I still can't see it. My phone can't refresh it.