Human Body Heaven

The author's writing style is good and the writing is stylish enough. Originally, the concept and setting were good. Although I borrowed from Gouzi, I can see that the author's writing skills are good. But what I want to say is, too much is not enough. It pursues style too deliberately, and what readers pay most attention to is the sense of substitution. The sense of substitution in the early stage is too poor. In the imaginary world, all the names of ancient places and celebrities are used. The first part is about Taoists, sects, courts, etc., And immediately after it is airplanes and mobile phones. Coupled with the ancient style of writing, it gives people a paradoxical feeling. It is probably because of the opening of the Xianxia column, but this way the sense of substitution is really poor, and there is no sense of modern society. After reading the comments, many people said that they couldn't read it clearly, which gave me the same feeling. You have to read it paragraph by paragraph before you can read it. As a fast food online article, this is considered a taboo, it is not simple and clear enough.

Well written and very creative, keep up the good work

1. The twist in the plot was too sudden, and I was confused 2. The timeline was confusing, and my future self was disrupted in the current timeline, and there was no sense of immersion 3. After reading 20 chapters, I didn't even have an understanding of the world background, which was a bit delayed.

It's okay, I haven't seen much, but I feel that this score is really unreasonable and a bit too low.

Anyway, I didn't understand it, I didn't know what I was writing, and I was transported back in time. The plot was a mess.

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Wasn't the token I went given scattered by the protagonist? Then there is a fight for killings. How does the protagonist feel compassion for others?

1. Original world 2. Fan world 3. Original + fan world 4. Modern or ancient Friends, if you have any opinions, you can tell me so that I can build a follow-up world view. You can express your thoughts or vote for one, two or three.

Bone Giant

"Fortunately, I, an ordinary person, became a recorder and manager of the Xingxiu Palace, which records the brilliance and glory of everything after entering the new era." The thin young man with an inch head walked in the narrow corridor, his black gown dancing with his footsteps, shattering the light sinking into the hall, reflecting the celebrity portraits and stone platforms inlaid on the walls. Maybe they are young, or old, or beautiful, or calm... The only thing that is the same is the pair of resolute and dazzling eyes, which seem to be able to contain stars and wrap up a galaxy of starlight. The young man came out of the darkness carrying a stainless steel bucket, fished out a clean white rag from the water, wrung it out with both hands, and wiped the impossibly clean wall again and again. The face of a hero is immortal and should not be stained by the filth of the world. He took the trouble to wipe the long and narrow corridors in the hall with his heart quiet. Every bump and every pair of eyes were wiped by him as brightly as a bright mirror. In the evening, the tourists had already left, and he was the only one left to finish the work. This was his job, a hard-won job. Late at night, the young man wiped the last stone wall from the inside to the outside. He couldn't help sighing, tightening the rag in his hand, and a trace of unwillingness flashed in his eyes. Who doesn't want to be a trendsetter of the times, making a splash in the great waves of history, forever embedded in human civilization, enduring through hardships, and remaining the same for thousands of years? Unconsciously, my fingers touched the first scene that seemed to open up the world, feeling the ferocious ruggedness, and I couldn't even imagine the stormy waves at the beginning of a new era. It was a huge ball rising from the endless waves, like the sun rising in the east, breaking through the chaotic twilight, shining flawlessly, and it was the first scene of a new era. He was lucky enough to witness that scene. The only stone wall statue without human presence! "The first act is what the world calls - the seed of development!" ... Thirty years ago, in AD 2222, the China Mars Research Institute announced a research result that shocked eight billion people around the world. "Recovery of Martian Life Spores and Study on their Properties." This epoch-making paper elaborates on the recovery process and detailed research of the genetic information of alien life spores extracted from the Martian ruins. Life on Mars has been named symbiotic beasts by Chinese scientists. They are a form of symbiotic life similar to slugs. They achieve the continuation of life information by producing spores. Their particularity is that they can survive alone, or they can form a symbiotic relationship with other species of life, mutually beneficial and win-win, and survive together. This kind of symbiont spore is a highly resistant sphere built from hundreds of undifferentiated symbiont primitive cells. It can adapt to extremely harsh environments. Even in an environment like Mars where the temperature difference between day and night exceeds 100 degrees, it can sleep unreasonably, waiting for the environment to be suitable, and then wake up. For humans on earth, one of the most important results of scientific research is that the spores of this kind of symbiotic animal can form a symbiotic relationship with life on earth and produce unspeakable and significant effects. "Mouse test, beagle test... Toxicology test... Partial results of the test are announced..." The results of a research are listed on thousands of pages of A4 paper, densely packed like countless ants crawling out of their nests, devouring the peace of people's hearts. "No known hazards!" "Significantly enhances the physical fitness, strength, nerve response, physical flexibility, physical resistance... IQ..." Countless scientists around the world have seen this report published in the Chinese "Future" magazine and the thick attachment thicker than a dictionary downloaded by scanning the QR code. "Ridiculous, arrogant, ignorant... How could there be such an unrealistic research report in the world..." One after another, the old foreign scholars sneered at it, then couldn't help but adjust their glasses curiously and looked at it, completely ignoring the cup of freshly brewed hot coffee. Time is passing, the night is pulled down from the sky, and the brilliant glow begins to shine. The coffee is cold, but the sky is about to break. Before they finished reading the attachment, the old professors rubbed their bloodshot eyes. Their golden lion-like hair seemed to turn white in an instant, and the muscles on their faces had already solidified in shock! "How... How is it possible... I seem to have seen... The future!" The pages of the paper seemed to release immeasurable golden light, illuminating the whole room and filling the room with fragrance! The person who was stung could not open his eyes, only tears were flowing! He couldn't wait to skip the research process and turned to the last few pages before the attachment, which explained the results of the test and its development prospects. "Injecting the spores of the symbiotic beast into the human body to form a human symbiosis, the results are unimaginable and unpredictable." There was even a suspenseful sentence at the end. "Practice is the only criterion for testing truth!" ... This paper hit the earth like a meteor, radiating to all regions of the seven continents and four oceans! It even spreads out from the boiling scientific research circle and explodes in everyone's heart. "Times are changing..." In the White Eagle Country, in the White House, the President looked at the well-dressed people in front of him with a gloomy look. He was wearing a straight suit and his hair was neatly combed, and he couldn't help but feel angry. "Who can tell me what's going on? Aren't we in the leading position in the Mars development plan? Why hasn't our ecological base been tested yet? All other people's Martian life has been resurrected... It's still the kind that can change the world..." "Could it be that we really lost to China and are going to be defeated? Are you being treated like a licking dog? " "Have you forgotten that two hundred years ago, we stood on this star, overlooking all living beings, holding the most powerful weapons and the most wealth!" Mr. President opened his collar and gasped hard, like a hunting dog that had bitten a ball, and a bright light burst out in his eyes. Continuously telling about the glory of the past, the most brilliant hundred years of the White Eagle Kingdom! Which country in the world is not its younger brother? It can take whatever resources it wants from the world! But this is no longer the past, the White Eagle Country is no longer the pinnacle of the world! The Kingdom of China sits at the center, with its heroes overwhelming all the parties. The White Eagle Kingdom is just a declining prince. It can no longer reverse the general trend of the world, make a war fortune, opportunistically, and lead the world. China values ​​balance and often says, peaceful development! What's wrong with this? Someone persuaded me at the next moment: "Mr. President, feudalism is unacceptable. The glory of the past is indeed glorious, but that has passed. Think about it, the international language has become Chinese, and you are still struggling!" The results of the spore research will definitely be shared." Mr. President jumped up from the pear chair in anger and yelled: "How can a group of guys who forget their ancestors and worship foreign countries eat what they have come to eat? I am ashamed and can't bear to be like you, huh!" After saying this, Mr. President walked away, leaving everyone looking at each other with helpless expressions. This patriotic president is very proficient in using Chinese idioms, and he speaks them without any awkwardness at all! At the same time, the land of China stretches from day to night, and lights illuminate the entire vein of China. Today in 2222, China has already become the giant of the earth and the leader of the country. It is undoubtedly the first in terms of development and happiness index. Under the Taklimakan underground, the Mars Ecological Research Institute is brightly lit. In this majestic underground building complex, there is no difference between day and night. You can only see people working in an orderly manner. At the in vivo experiment research base, dozens of scholars gathered at this time. They seemed excited, but also seemed unable to bear it. The masses of white coats created a sad atmosphere. "Nie Pan, are you really not going to change?" The old professor's voice was trembling, and his eyes were filled with relief and lingering sadness. The young people in the middle shook their heads with determination, their eyes were clear and firm, and they smiled and said: "There is always someone who has to take the first step and contribute to scientific progress. I will never look back. What's more, haven't the research results come out..." "After a hundred years of research and three generations, it's time. Ending. " "I believe in science and data. Maybe the first new human being will be me!" He ignored everyone's sadness, took off his clothes, and walked into the special room. The room automatically locked, the lights turned on, and the artificial intelligence in the base connected all the instruments, and the data was projected on the display. "Symbiote spore convergence test, the first time, begins!" A cold synthetic voice sounded, and all the researchers could only go to their respective positions and perform their duties, and they could not let down Nie Pan's dedication. Nie Pan, 32 years old, male, researcher at Mars Ecology Institute, professor at Xitian University, graduate tutor, and social elite. Today, February 2, 2222 at 8:00 pm, try the law yourself! As the saying goes, "If I don't go to hell, who will!" The first symbiote spore preparation was absorbed by Nie Pan's intramuscular injection. In an instant, the lights in the entire institute began to flicker, and the index in the instrument began to surge. "Quick, record the test data!" The researchers had no time to be frightened and devoted themselves to their work! "The spores began to divide and fuse, and the degree of fusion continued to increase..." "The activity of cells throughout the body continued to increase..." "The magnetic field began to mutate..." Boom! Suddenly, there was an explosion in the special room, and the smoke and dust flooded the room. It was impossible to see what was happening inside through the display screen and glass windows. "What happened just now?" Some people were surprised and looked at the data on the screen that continued to increase, even reaching the maximum calibrated value. "It seems that the degree of fusion of human symbionts is too high, higher than the results of tens of thousands of simulation data..." It seems that the results are surprisingly good! Bang bang bang! A big hand came out of the smoke and knocked lightly on the tempered glass wall, causing the thick glass to shatter. Everyone only saw a tall, naked man stepping out, looking at them with a gentle face, his eyes as bright as pearls, and his charming smile with big white teeth. "Success, gentlemen!"

The subject matter is pretty good, but the writing is not that great.

What the hell is he writing? Is it modern or ancient?

It seems that the first copy is similar to the first copy of Pei Tugou's Great Chronicle

The front is pretty good. Ever since I traveled through time travel, I feel a bit confused.

It was baffling to watch. Many details were not handled well. It felt like the main character was jumping around to do everything. The plot connection was not clear enough and it got to the next stage. It was confusing.

It's okay to read! There are too many great masters at the same time, is it the wrong time to be born?

The more than 200 comments are all written by the author, and the whole thing is too stiff and the plot is stitched together strangely.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁