I Was Left in a Hong Kong Movie by the System

Oops, it looks like I'm the first person.

I've only read a few chapters and I've already seen that I want to help this person and that person. It's such nonsense.

This is my first time writing, I hope friends who read it can comment more. See your own shortcomings and improve them.

I haven't started reading it yet because there are too few chapters. Please try your best to code the words.

The connection is unnatural and the writing is immature. Come on.

The story link is not smooth and it feels a bit messy. Infernal Affairs and Sha Po Lang came out too early, which will lead to nothing to write about later.

I saw a few pictures of helping this and helping that, and I was convinced.

The rhythm is too fast, the transition is unnatural, the time is too tight, and it seems formal.

Dark War, Two Heroes, Detective, Black and White Forest, Charge, Gunfire, Borrowed Soldiers, Disciple, Killer, The Fuse, Raptors, Eavesdropping Series, Anti-Corruption Series, Equator, Apostle, Eclipse Storm, Flying Tiger Series, let me give you some theme recommendations, I wanted to criticize you, but there are too few Hong Kong dramas to bear, so write well. . .

The promotion to officer is too fast. Now they are all supervisors. If we investigate a few more cases, wouldn't we become the first brother of the Hong Kong police?

Shapolang was born in 90s or 00s. How could you go there if you were in 80s?

The subject matter of Hong Kong movies is fine. I suggest you put a few names of classic Hong Kong movies and the names of the protagonists in your introduction. The effect should be better.

It's best not to have celebrity faces. Too many faces like Liu Tianwang's are very annoying, and it's even more disgusting to find a girlfriend with the same face. In addition, not every reader has watched all the movies, and it will often make people confused. Please try to introduce the content as much as possible. Otherwise, people who don't understand will feel that the pace is too fast. There are only a few chapters and one movie, and they still don't understand the content. Even the video introduction is not as good as

,,, Your timeline is all messed up, Infernal Affairs was set in 1983, I'm afraid Chen Yongren was still a child at that time. In 1991, Liu Jianming and Chen Yongren were only 18 years old. They faced each other at the gate of the police academy. Author, if you want to integrate, you have to follow the basic logic and time of the story!

The plot is a bit confusing, it would be better if the title was changed to a name

The plot is messy, the writing is poor, and the characters are not good enough.