Transformers from Cybertron

Chapter 16 has been slightly modified. I can only guarantee that it can be understood. This is the result of the author's efforts. If you still feel that it is not good, just skip that chapter. Awa

Author, the sense of existence of your book is almost zero. If I hadn't just read Bumblebee today, I was so excited and excited that I came to read the book about Transformers and I wouldn't have discovered it.

Come on, not many words🙂

The content is good. . . Updates are too slow

Give the author some advice. The author should write without the Decepticon and Autobot factions now. The main reason is that he has not been to the earth. The author is writing about robots. When describing the details, do not write about human expressions or pronouns. The sense of substitution is very strange. For example, when I was watching the section about buying engine oil, I wrote the three words "ordinary people". I haven't seen the back yet, so I don't know what the structure of the world is like, but I think it feels better if you change "ordinary people" to "ordinary body". What works to write should be based on the world view, era and setting of the work. When writing about Cybertron, I think it should be written in a technological way, such as a hospital, which on Cybertron should be called a maintenance room or something. Of course, the author still needs to mechanically imagine based on reality. I just give the author a suggestion. If the author thinks it is useless, then it can be treated as nonsense. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Read the introduction: A Human There are problems with the wording and sentences in the introduction, how could anyone read it?

I really like the novels written by you, the author. Help you get one step closer;800033🤤805!

Thank you for your support of this book. The book has reached the 52nd place in the science fiction list of newcomers awa

Yes, the author has started school, and this book may be updated randomly in the future. I will revise the rough chapters and writing style little by little, and will post every time I revise a chapter. In addition, have any of you not thought that the author is actually a student?

Please live, don't be a eunuch, why are there so few novels with such a good subject?

The update is too slow! ! Let's discuss whether we can update it every day,,,

Is your writing too messy? 😆