Three Religions and Nine Streams in Mountain Streams

Was forcibly persuaded to withdraw. . . The themes and ideas are good, but the writing skills and some knowledge reserves are a little bit behind. I don't know if the teacher didn't teach you well when you were learning a lot of things, or if you have your own ideas and want to bring in private information? But before you quote ancient poetry, you must first understand its original meaning, right? Extended citations also need to be self-explanatory, right? It looks really awkward.

It's the same old routine with no innovation at all. Seeing the embarrassment coming out, it was fine 3 years ago, but now it's all written down, the vindictiveness has turned into a horse, and there are too many brushes.

I feel relieved after seeing so many people complaining.

When I first read the chapter "Buddha Jumps Over the Wall", I thought it was just a dish at first, but I suddenly woke up when I read the next chapter. "Buddha Jumps Over the Wall" is not just a dish, but more of a desire. The reason why the Buddha cut his meat and fed it to the fish is because the Buddha has great power and cannot die. Ordinary people who practice Buddhism also have desires. They want to survive in death. Human instinct, if you jump over the wall, you are a Buddha, and you are just a human being.

I think some plots should be written in more detail, rather than being covered in a few sentences, and should be more lyrical. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Really well written. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

One update is not enough. Two updates a day will gain popularity faster.

The pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot is similar to the plot of a novel called "Shan Ye Miscellaneous Family"; it's not fresh, so bye.

Even if you live in the deep mountains and old forests, there will be people who come over to give you a slap in the face. The key is that every time they work hard, and they are professional, and the character descriptions are all without any small thoughts. They are all people with a red heart facing the sun and a head full of knowledge. Tsk tsk, you can follow the character template and write a million words without repeating it.

Wood carving, painting, a routine of passers-by kneeling down and licking, it looks very embarrassing and has no resonance.

After learning sculpture, someone comes along who understands sculpture. After learning Chinese painting, someone comes along who understands Chinese painting. He learns winemaking, and then someone comes along who understands winemaking. Do you need to be so deliberate?

It's promising in the early stage, but less promising later on. The times are progressing, and we do not deny the contribution of Confucianism, but the ancients are not always right. The wisdom of the ancients cannot be fully accepted, such as the round sky and the square earth. Therefore, the ancient knowledge you have learned is also wrong. Don't just recite it, otherwise it will be speechless and make you mentally retarded.

The protagonist's mountain is so lively! There are so many people visiting!

This book is exactly the same as the book I read a few years ago (now I have read Chapter 45). That book was also written in a systematic way, and it also had three teachings and nine streams. The entire storyline is exactly the same. I don't know if it is considered plagiarism 🥵🥵 But I don't remember whether the book was The Eunuch or I lost it 😅😅

It's a bit poisonous, just take it if the system gives it to you. The main character must be written so that he looks ugly after being fucked. While talking about how bad the system is, it still smells really good. If you don't have a tofu heart, it means you are qualified to be a sharp mouth If it's good, it's good, if it's not, it's bad. Life is already very confusing, but in the book you are still struggling.

He clearly said he wanted to be a hermit, but he kept pretending, and it was so embarrassing to do so.

After a brief look, I saw that the author advertised his book twice in the book. It was very entertaining. In the future, as soon as the protagonist showed some ability, professionals appeared immediately. The plot arrangement was too rigid! ! ! I feel like the protagonist doesn't have the style of a hermit at all, and it's as embarrassing as a mudslide for a newbie to pretend to be cool😓

No one has seen me anyway, I am a sand sculpture

To be honest, it's a bit annoying To live in seclusion and be so public

There is a novel "Mountain Miscellaneous Family", where the eunuch is already a eunuch, the routine is the same, but has he changed his vest?

Let me first talk about how remote my hometown is. How long does it take to reach the province, how long does it take to reach the city, how long does it take to reach the county, how long does it take to reach the village, and how long it takes to reach the mountains. Then he wrote about how many great people there are in the remote county in his remote city, and how awesome this boss and that master are and how awesome the protagonist is. There are golden phoenixes in the ravines, but talents are always concentrated in central areas. It's not Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen, it's not the provincial capitals, municipalities or even a city. It's funny to think about this boss in a remote county 🤫

It's very similar to "Mountain Miscellaneous Family", but the writing style is too different and too stiff.

The traces of routines are too heavy, the writing is not enough, and the forced literary youth is also terrible

I like this type, please add more.

Come on, author, I like this very much and hope to write about that feeling

Big cheers for the author, I like this feeling in the book

Emmmmm it's interesting!

I still like this taste better