The Ninth Asian War

Keep writing, and take your time with the first book This book is very thoughtful in terms of setting, and the use of words is also relatively smooth. But there is a problem with stacking settings. The core of online articles is the story. The story in the first few chapters is basically not advanced, and there are a lot of dazzling settings and names. Moreover, many settings are introduced from long dialogues, which is not friendly to readers. You can try to use the perspective of the protagonist to introduce the plot, and slowly reveal the settings in the plot. Be sure to make a good outline of the story and guide the emotions from the reader's perspective to enhance the sense of immersion. Don't give up, there are people who read books written by Buddhists.

Why didn't the author write anymore? . Is it the eunuch's rhythm? XX