The Legend of Light and Darkness

This book really surprised me. I rarely read novels with few words. I came across this book accidentally and clicked on it. It was the most correct decision I made. How can I put it this way? The author of this book portrays the characters very well. The master of the protagonist is informal, the protagonist practices swordsmanship diligently, respects the master, and cares about his junior sister. The best thing for me is that the author describes Yu Xuan's feelings for the protagonist very well, without any embarrassing parts. The background in the article is also a major attraction for me. It is novel and interesting, and the characterization of the background is also quite good. I sincerely hope that this book will get better and better and become more famous. I hope more people will see this rare masterpiece.

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The plot and writing are pretty good, but I think it's pretty cool to give a necklace to a woman she meets for the first time. . Emm

Come and Leave a Claw ~ The genre is very good, but don't impose too many settings on readers at the beginning. It is a good way to gradually penetrate through the protagonist's whereabouts. The writing is very smooth, and it is great for the first time on the Internet. The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please delete it ~ Welcome to "Ru Shi Lan"

The description is very good, keep up the good work! However, the use of emojis is not suitable for a story with a fantasy orientation. You can write more psychological activities to express the views expressed in emojis~ Welcome to visit again

The writing could be more delicate, the book is pretty good

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Let's talk about it in general first. Well written. The introduction is not as long as possible, it is best to be concise and concise. You can look at the introductions of the great writers. In just a few sentences, they name the central idea of ​​the entire novel. There is also a paragraph that is too long. It is recommended to subdivide it. In the era of mobile phones, one glance can have ten lines at a time. You will make readers dizzy. Please give me a warning. Then the prologue is not very appropriate, it should be a wedge. I made the same mistake as me by laying out the map settings from the beginning, so it's easy to quit. Because you are not a master, you cannot write whatever you want. Overall, it's pretty good. Pay more attention and it's still a well-written novel.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like I should add some more guidance at the front.

My favorite stories include dragons, I want to follow them! 😁