Predator Diary

Come on, I hope the author will write better and better in the future!

I like it so much, please keep it up. I will support it to the end. Come on, Oli.

Dear readers, I'm sorry, the recent update has a little impact, I will resume daily updates tomorrow

How can I put it this way? It's not bad in capital letters, it's long enough, and the settings are introduced in great detail. A few suggestions. I don't know what the writing style of this book is like. It would be fine if it was dark, but the protagonist currently seems to be a bit of a sandbag, which doesn't fit with the cruelty of the zerg in the article. The audience for novels may be a little small at the moment. Unlike other novels that cannot transform into humans, animals written about are pretty cool enough. Wolves and dragons are fine. I have never seen a tentacle monster with thirty-two tentacles. If it's similar to Mr. Ke's, then try to write about the environment as much as possible, don't write about this kind of character in detail, it's a bit unbearable if you really think about it. That's right, this is the only discomfort I see. It's not a human being, it's not handsome enough, I can't stand it, I can't stand it. Have you ever heard of a saying, whether you are strong or not depends on a version, whether you are handsome or not is a matter of a lifetime. This Zerg race value of 40 makes no difference to me, but the author, you wrote it in detail, I just feel that it is ugly... This is a bit unbearable, try to evolve to be handsome. What I think about now are Alien + Scythe, but it is still a bit... When I first read this Zerg article, I remember that the main line is evolution and it is written to be handsome. Even if you are a dung beetle, you have to shine like a perfect dung beetle.

1. After watching it, it felt like it was both a game flow and an apocalyptic flow. Well, it was a bit messy! This is the first impression. 2. The sense of immersion is not too strong. For me, it can be said that there is almost no sense of immersion. It is recommended to enhance the suspense and describe the plot, characters, things, etc. In more detail, but of course not too much. 3. Also, some sentences seem a little watery, and I don't know what to say anymore. 4. The introduction is well received and the background of the story is very strong. This is my favorite thing. ٩( 'ω' )و Encouragement

Isn't there too much detail, which can easily lead to reading fatigue? I hope the author can use it appropriately! But it's still very beautiful😊😊😊

The content is interlocking and the concept is clever. It is worth reading. I am still looking forward to the update. You are also welcome to come back to visit me. Thank you.

The author has novel ideas and original ideas. I have already collected them and will keep them fattened up. I look forward to visiting you again and we hope that we will learn from each other!