Time Is Gone

How should I put it? Although this is a new book, it can be seen from some aspects that you are a new writer. I am not trying to **, I just want you to work hard. I guess you are a student. Why are you so tired every day? Isn't it? Finally, add Damn, kid, I believe in your work, and I also recommend you to read the online article "Ruffian Chen Jiu". You should be able to learn something, and I hope Yuda Da can read it and reply to my comment, thank you🙏😁😁😁

When do they cross and when do they appear? Just because someone has met. The number one scholar was forced to go to Liangshan, but the scholar laughed and laughed. How many lives can be drunk with a pot of sake? The only truth is: there are green mountains everywhere in the world. Weapons meet, but they all turn into a flash in the pan. No! It's just the passing of time, the change of human nature. In the end, I just hope that the flash in the pan is not a flash in the pan. Looking back again: We clinked glasses there again and met for the first time!

Complicated writing can show skill, and people who appreciate it can be like-minded. I hope the author will read it~

Your title is really good and has an ancient charm, although I can't understand the meaning 😰

The content is okay, but one serious problem is to pay attention to the paragraphs and not to make it too long, which can easily affect the reading experience. If the segmentation is good, I believe the others will be better, just take it step by step and encourage each other. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Maybe there's something wrong with my understanding, or poor logic. In short, don't describe things too complicatedly. It's difficult for ordinary readers to settle down. Although you don't need to break things down, you need to explain them, otherwise it will be difficult. The description is a bit thin, but it's okay for a newcomer. Come on.

The details are great! I just saw a comment saying that the narrative is too complicated. In fact, if the story can be made more profound, it will attract many readers. The writing is very good. The scene transitions could be more natural or divided into chapters directly. The plot has a little splash but is still a bit bland. In addition, the introduction could be better. A good introduction can attract readers. Overall, it is very well written. Come on, support it!

Keep it up, the writing is very good

1. The number of words in each chapter is too few. This kind of time travel article should have new ideas and not follow the routine. The key is to write something that can catch the readers' attention. 2. As someone commented, the names of each chapter are more beautiful and thoughtful than the article, so the author should put more thought into the content of the article! 3. Describe more details, the expressions of the characters, and the environment of the scene, otherwise it will look too empty!

It's so well written, come on 😆😆😆

Thank you all for your great recommendation votes, thank you

It's too little, please speed up.

Ahem, brother, I'm sorry. My parents gave birth to a second child a few days ago. I was fighting for the family property. I got drunk and it ended. It was so embarrassing. I will publish another book.

Here we go again‎|•'-'•)و✧