The Sword in White Clothes Travels to the End of the World

Very well written! The explanation and rhythm are very good, come on!

1. The punctuation used is somewhat irregular. 2. It's still a routine article. After reading the above, you basically know the following. When the spiritual grass appears, you know that there is a monster guarding you. If the supporting character is not strong enough, the protagonist will appear and kill you with one move. 3. The paragraphing is quite good, and it is very experiential to read. 4. The first three chapters did not explain the background of this world. They only talked about the structure of this world, which was not very detailed. 5. The names of the first three chapters are very bad. Besides white clothes, they are still white clothes. The second one mentioned the name of the spiritual grass

I've coded a little bit, but I haven't finished it yet. I'm really sleepy 😢 Get up early tomorrow and continue.

It's quite confusing. I suggest you change it and delete some nonsense. Then the plot arrangement should not be so deliberate. Remember to pay a return visit.

Magic smile+😁😁😁

Except for the sudden change from the background of the world to the male protagonist, which is a little abrupt, everything else is good. The writing is good, a bit slow to get started, and the male protagonist is also well-shaped, so please do it! I'm optimistic about you (✪▽✪) (´-ω-`)

Beep, melon-eating crowd card 😁

Come on (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

Because I have successfully signed another book, I need to stop updating this one first. Of course, in order not to be blocked, I will update it once a week. (After this time, I also learned a lesson and will definitely save the manuscript before writing next time!)

😰😰What did I hear😰

Five days ago😐

Your scheduled deadline has come🤓

I only read the first three chapters and am completely confused.