I Am Konoha's Sword Saint

Tsunade

A common problem in Naruto fanfiction is that they grow up too fast and quickly distance themselves from their partners. So many God-like works have their own protagonists. Many novels focus on the strength of the protagonist and leave the partners behind in a few pictures. Then they only focus on getting stronger along the way. Although they are very young, the protagonist is written to be the mainstay of the entire article. Especially among Naruto fans, almost all of them already have elite jounin or kage-level strength by the time they can master the Three Body Technique. It looks so uncomfortable, and I don't know how to read this book, after all, I've only read a dozen chapters. It wouldn't be bad if the protagonist were reborn as a 16, 17 or 18-year-old ninja and had such a fast growth rate.

If this knife were replaced by White Fang, then this wave would be a sure kill, but it is a pity that it cannot be replaced.

I don't understand. If you don't want to write about ninjutsu, don't write about it. You can't say what ninjutsu you want if you know how to use the sword. Obviously, in the early stages of swordsmanship, when the ninjutsu is not enough to cut open, you can just hold back the ninjutsu. He was obviously very sensible at the beginning, especially when he discovered the spy before he became a genin, and the six of them cooperated and killed him.                                           When I was taking the Chunin Exam, I couldn't bear to be "shit" all over my body, which caused some chakras to be blocked and so on. At this time, let alone being a veteran, at least he has some experience, and at least he needs to be a little vigilant. This is a typical example of ignoring rationality in order to lead to the subsequent plot. Is there no other way? It has to be like this. This does not make people feel that they are abusing the protagonist, but that the protagonist suddenly changed and their IQ dropped rapidly. Moreover, that psychic beast can smell its own scent from a kilometer away, but cannot smell the smell of people who are very close to it and are covered in mud? If it is covered with mud, it may be two meters away.

Newbies can read it, but old bookworms shouldn't read it. This book is very self-indulgent. Moreover, he committed a taboo in online writing. In order to draw out the consequences of the plot below, he forcibly found the cause, which resulted in a serious mental deterioration in the Chuunin exam. This book has persuaded at least half of the people to quit.

I hope the author's strength upgrade span will not be so long. Naruto is very long, and the strength increases too quickly. There are too many plots in the later stage, and the plot can easily collapse, such as changing the fate rope technique of some minor characters, because the heroine seems to be Tsunade. If the author wrote it in an emotional drama You can give it a try if you are a good-looking author. If the emotional drama is not good, I suggest you have a single female protagonist, or don't write it. Don't lick the heroine's content. Basically, single female protagonists are very stable. Come on, author (the rope technique was accidentally stepped on and exploded to death). Personally, I feel that she is a minor character.

Build an official supporting building. Interested book friends can write down the original characters, blood successors, skills, etc. That you find interesting. Coconut Juice will choose some excellent ideas and put them into future plots.

The biggest problem with Naruto fandoms is watching a group of 7- and 8-year-old brats fighting back and forth, without any sense of immersion. Every time I see the protagonist having so much fun with a group of brats after time travel, I can't understand. Is the emotional intelligence of everyone who has traveled through Naruto dropped to the level of a 6-year-old child?

The most annoying thing about system flow is that all the actions of the protagonist revolve around the system. The protagonist is like a puppet on strings, without any substantial spirit of resistance. Unfortunately most system flows make this mistake! Therefore, it's not that there are no good works in system flow, but that most people can't write well!

I haven't read it yet. The protagonist uses a knife. In fact, I don't think there are any fancy knife skills. I just use basic knife skills to increase the protagonist's chakra. Attach chakra to the knife, add sharp cutting to the attributes of chakra, and then improve the physical attributes of strength, constitution, speed, and nerve response. In the future, when encountering an enemy, you can slash flatly. Refer to the character Shinigami - King of Flat Slashing - Kenpachi Zaraki.