The Only Sword Immortal in the Tang Dynasty

Thinking can do it! It's Rory, right? Commonly known as water! People have already written it down and made it onto the list, so they dare to be careful with the water! Are you getting wet right now? This is the first time I have seen an author who is so capable of committing suicide.

I** actually saw reimbursement in Chapter 89! To reimburse? ? ? How can you get reimbursement for your fictional history? I didn't say it before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, it was extremely poisonous☠️ A lot of modern vocabulary makes people have no sense of substitution, and now it's not updated... I'm fine with it, okay?

As you can see from the part about flies, they don't pretend to be smart in fighting, just like Naruto in the later period, people understand why they come to make trouble, but the protagonist wants to take care of them (take care of them thoroughly!), But only hurts and knocks them out (is the protagonist helping others or cheating them?), And waits until they are poisoned before fighting back! This street-fighting ruffian is just as stupid. When he encounters someone he can't beat, he just kneels down and licks him. The protagonist leaves the old and new accounts to settle old and new accounts with the landlady! (The protagonist also said that he wanted to live in this guest village, haha, unless you really set up camp here, otherwise...) Now that I'm gone, I really can't stand this book.

The writing of this book is okay, but the plot is dragging. It's been a few chapters and it's rather blunt. There's also the issue of dynasty. Soymilk has been around since the Western Han Dynasty, let's not talk about how it spread. And rice rolls are from the Tang Dynasty, which is more confusing. If the author is making excuses, just pretend that I didn't say it. The main plot is unclear. What do you think an ordinary person will do after picking up a martial arts secret book and practicing martial arts for ten years? You don't say anything. Now the protagonist is just an ordinary person with power. If you write it this way, at least there will be more "events" in the protagonist's travels so that the protagonist can change his mentality. It's really embarrassing to pretend to be b. Finally, I wish the author better and better. Remember to follow me if he becomes popular (If there is anything wrong, please correct me)

I want to ask if the author read it himself after writing it! Are the sentences smooth? Lots of typos! The plot is procrastinating, the writing is vulgar, and the performance is extremely poor. The character dialogue is just a random word count, and after more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The character design of the protagonist is also inexplicable, so I had to be cautious in writing it but couldn't write it well. It's like the normal IQ development is incomplete along the way. It's too cheap right away. It's uncomfortable to watch.

The beginning of this book is really a good start without bragging. As an old bookworm, I find it very attractive. When I look for books, I always look at the title, the introduction, and the first few chapters. If I find it good, I add it to the bookshelf, and then delete it from the bookshelf after reading it as a whole. This book is the third new book to be kept on the bookshelf after the update of Qidian. Com this week. I have been reading it so far, and I want to say something personal. Small thoughts: I don't know what the main plot of this book focuses on, whether it is the normal righteousness of family and country, cultivating a world in the Tang Dynasty, or a narrative about appreciating the elegance of the Tang Dynasty. But my current plot has the flavor of a romance harem novel, with all female characters portrayed. When a young man goes down the mountain and first enters the world, don't focus on the hero saving the beauty (chan ren jia shen zi), respecting the old and caring for the young, robbing the rich and giving to the poor, and treating illnesses and saving people are also traditional virtues of our Chinese culture.

I have only read Chapter 17, and I will tell you about my reading experience for future readers First of all, let me say that this book is not recommended 1. I forgot the name of a young lady from a certain family. I suspected that the protagonist was using a beauty trick to get close to him, and wanted to defraud her family of money or plot against her father, so I asked the protagonist to go with her. I wanted to see where this guy came from... Why didn't I check my own brain circuitry? 2. The protagonist is seventeen chapters in, and he still can't see that there is no internal power in this world. He thinks that the masters are well hidden, and there are masters in all of Yangzhou. You can't see through any of them? To be honest, with this brain, I haven't even mentioned your name as Wu Chi, Sword Immortal? Immortal? You don't think that you can be called a swordsman because you are the best in the world with swords, do you? Furthermore, our lady is in deep boudoir and there is no news about the world. I agree with what you say. Where is the housekeeper? The housekeeper doesn't even know anything? There are no rumors in the market! A patient with advanced hypochondriasis

I don't know why, but I felt very awkward when I read Chapter 73. It makes sense to tell the swordsman that swordsmanship is a killing technique, but when it comes to the emperor, he first says that swordsmanship is not for performance, and then he can perform it again? Then he said that he couldn't perform because the sword required blood, so he couldn't perform... Are you asking the emperor to ask the emperor to draw the sword without seeing blood? After that, the Prime Minister didn't say much, and he showed off various sword skills to cut off this and that... According to the progress I saw, when it came to attracting other immortals in order to become famous, you were even said by the emperor to be an immortal alive. The Prime Minister didn't believe you and suspected that you were a liar. If it were really an immortal, would he take you seriously?

The idea is good, but I personally think that we should just set up an imaginary dynasty. The author's writing skills are good, but he has no historical background. Writing about the Tang Dynasty is very confusing. It would be better to create a parallel time and space with an imaginary dynasty.

Apart from few updates, there are no other shortcomings. Good luck, author.

After watching it, I recommend that people younger than 38 not watch it. A novel that can destroy one's mind, make people upset, and the writing style is only C grade. The author should be the kind of person who sits without pressure and has no life goals. Or he may just think it is a tool to make money. He does not have that kind of mood and artistic conception. To put it simply, the writing style of C grade, the conception of C grade, and the standard running account. It may be that I am confused and cannot calm down.

The subject matter is very good, but this kind of subject matter should be happier and more life-like. The first 20 chapters are quite good, but I personally don't like the style of the rest.

Chapter 3: Persuading you to quit, you are really a fucking talent.

Is this book good? I personally feel that I am short of books. Still worth seeing. I read a lot of bad reviews. How to say it. Maybe I had too much expectations at the beginning. Secondly, is this book an invincible novel? So far, it's OK, but what he wrote is different from other invincible articles, attracting too many readers who have invincible strength and invincible momentum. After reading it, I must say that it is not my favorite style after all. It can be regarded as pastoral style and secular invincible style. What else can I say, reading this book, I really didn't feel the main line, the only one looking for a like-minded person. This line is written too deliberately. But it didn't feel like it was the main line. I feel like the author is the same as the protagonist, one doesn't know how to develop. One doesn't know what to do. The short story is okay, but the long story seems to be easy to break down. Here I think the author can read a similar novel, "I'm Clearly Super Fierce". Although the author's writing is a bit awkward now, the idea is pretty good. As for what the protagonist is saying, he will dance with the sword for one moment and then the other with the sword. I think that comment is fine. You don't even know who the protagonist is dancing for. Although somewhat deliberate. But he also has his own ideas. Beneficial to oneself. Should the protagonist kill everyone? ? No one likes it. Number one in the world? Are you saying that you no longer have the demeanor of a strong man? What is style? Arrogant, right? This book is purely in the dark. There are many people who talk about Xiaobaiwen. Just look down on it. Internet novels are all written in such depth. Do you understand? Do you have time to savor it? Where does the sense of superiority come from? Up to this point in this novel, there are some awkward spots, but they are not that big and the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. The protagonist is well portrayed. The other characters are also very vivid. Not to mention what a rare and good book it is. But so far, it is still a work that can be taken a look at. I don't know if the author's outline is finished. I hope the author can sort out the main plot as soon as possible. Write clearly. For example, when wandering around the world, looking for historical materials or folk rumors to resolve injustices in the world. Write interesting and strange things about the Tang Dynasty. Or open a dungeon, the Tang Dynasty is unknown, it is a world of inner strength.

This is really water, a waste of time

I've read Chapter 160, but I'm not sure about the specific issues. The free chapters are very detailed, the plot doesn't drag out much, and the problems aren't big. Judging from the protagonist's emotional line and writing style, it seems that it's a female writer. Starting after the paid chapter, the plot begins to drag on. The protagonist's emotional line is not clear and straightforward, and it seems very unpleasant to hesitate and drag on. If you want to reach more readers and have a wider scope, you can include all the female characters in the harem or no heroine. Write more decisively, and it seems to be a good article. If you want to write something like Nirvana in Fire, it doesn't matter. There will always be certain people who like it. If you have your own writing ideas, please stick to it. If not, please write more decisively and crisply. Romance is not like romance, martial arts is not like martial arts. Happy grudges, okay, the emotional line is about to be a success or failure.

Originally, the theme design of the story was okay, but the level of plot arrangement, character setting, and text writing was really intolerable. All the characters were "slightly startled" and "hesitant", and all had slow and hesitant personalities. The story progressed too slowly. This book is probably for eunuchs!

How many chickens and pigs should be killed? How many? One pig is enough to feed a hundred people

What is the main line of this book? It feels a bit bland.

Goodbye, no more. The protagonist's diagnosis of snake essence disease has been completed.

In these chapters, I feel like the protagonist is an actor, performing swordsmanship for Li Bai, swordsmanship for the emperor, swordsmanship for generals, swordsmanship for the prime minister, and at least for Taoist priests in the future. I wonder if he will perform swordsmanship for women? Will you show swordsmanship to the imperial concubine? Sword Fairy? That's it?

Judging from the title and introduction of the book, it seems that it is a historical text that is more relaxed and entertaining, and I have this tendency after reading all the chapters. But come on, this is a historical novel. Your characters' behavior, language, and way of thinking all tell me that this is a modern urban novel disguised as a historical novel! Two points here First, the way of thinking of the characters in the book actually reflects the author's way of thinking. I have one thing to say about the characters in the current book: you think too much. So I have only one thing to say to the author: You think too much! There are so many scenes for one small character, represented by the gangster and the boss lady. I don't know if this is the author's writing style or because he wants to improve the word count, but this way of writing really loses favorability. If the author wants to make money by writing a book, to be honest, the number of words will not make much money, but will affect the quality of the book. The choice between them depends entirely on you. Second, the plot is protracted and mysterious. The plot of pretending to be cool is indispensable for light entertainment articles. It can be said that the time required to pretend to be an excellent pussy is very short, it can be said to be just a moment. Pretending to delay time will not make people feel good. It is a fart that they want to let out but can't. It feels uncomfortable to hold it in, but they just can't let it out. If readers feel uncomfortable, the author will not want to make money. I have never been taboo about talking about money. Writing a book without talking about making money is called pretending to be noble. If you want to make money, you have to please your readers, otherwise why would people pay you? It's just to buy satisfaction. Why does Doupo make so much money? It's not because he said, "Don't bully young people into poverty." It's because people know how to show off. They never delay when showing off, and they do it one after another. Sometimes they pretend to be awesome, sometimes they pretend to be awesome, and readers are attracted by it. It's so cool! Feeling happy in my heart, but showing humility on my face, lying on my side on the bed and suppressing a smile, this is what a human being is! That's all, I hope it can inspire the author.

It's so fucking boring, the whole outfit of an inn is six chapters long and I haven't finished it yet.

If one day I have a knife in my hand, I will kill all the dogs in the world.

This book would have been disgusting to readers even ten years ago, right? The title of the book is really good. After thinking about the plot, I should read it no matter whether it is showing off to others as a saint or wielding a sword to the end of the world. It turns out that the author is really awesome, so I suggested that the title be changed to The No. 1 Dog Servant of the Tang Dynasty.

I was drunk when I saw that Li Bai was from the Western Regions. . Li Bai was born in Shuzhong, don't write it randomly

This book should be called The Monkey Wearing the Sword Immortal's Coat in the Tang Dynasty🐵🤫

The subject matter is good, but the character, behavior, IQ and EQ of the pig-footed character are not worthy of the Sword Immortal. Moreover, the author does not know how to write pleasantly and is always secretive, and cannot write about the value of the Sword Immortal at all. The three themes and main lines conflict with each other, and they don't feel like they appear in a novel.

Sooner or later it will hit the street, which is a pity for this subject matter. The main character is a bitching virgin bitch, and she has a lot of words, which can be compared to the number of words in a water dragon. Learn from the five-party loli update model. You don't care who is cool, and you have problems with your attitude and emotional intelligence. The word cool is for you.

The writing style is average, the kind that does not give readers a negative reading experience. Standard version. In terms of plot, rather than being as plain as water, it is better to say that the protagonist Jiang Tingyun described by the author is too immortal. In terms of cultivating immortals, his state of mind has reached the state of ancient wells without waves, so he treats everything in the world with the mentality of an ordinary person, but Jiang Tingyun is not an ordinary person. This sense of difference brought about by strength and mentality will make readers feel very uncomfortable. Because most of the readers are ordinary people, there may even be many very angry people, and there are also some angry youths who believe in Han chauvinism. Therefore, there is no way to have a sense of empathy for Jiang Tingyun's mentality of dealing with others, so I will naturally feel uncomfortable after reading it. As for Jiang Tingyun's strength, the title of the novel is Sword Immortal, but after reading it, I didn't find any evidence related to Sword Immortal. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist is just an innate master if he is exhausted, and the sword energy he releases may not be comparable to that of Hawkeye's Shichibukai. Also, there are deficiencies in the description of fighting and using swords. Readers cannot imagine how strong Jiang Tingyun is just by reading. As a result, his name is Sword Immortal, but his performance is just that of a congenital master. Finally, what I want to say is that there is almost no fun in this book. The most important thing about a novel is the excitement, or climax. After all, the story in the novel is a game of life. You can't give readers a real immersive experience by using boring real scenes. After all, everyone who reads novels hopes to experience another kind of happy life. Conclusion: This novel is only suitable for those who have rich life experience and tend to be dull in their dealings with others. It is not recommended for people whose starting days are less than 2000 days to enter the bookshelf