One Piece: The Demon Generals

I have noticed that there have been a lot of negative fans in the book review section recently, so I have prepared a section for everyone. If you don't like me or my books, I accept it. After all, it's impossible for everyone to like the same thing. You have the freedom to scold me. I don't want to read it. It is also my freedom to delete it. So today I started to criticize me in other places. If the words are unpleasant, I will delete them. I am not writing words every day just for you to scold for fun. I spend time coding words every day, but you don't pay anything. You just put honey on your little mouth, just close it and it's done. I accept all opinions and discussions. If you come to the group to discuss with me, I can chat with you. From novels to animation, from two dimensions to three dimensions, chatting is welcome. I will correct any typos picked out by readers and reply as corrected. At least I put my attitude here and I am very serious. Also please be merciful to those who don't like reading, don't argue with my book friends, and don't interfere with their reading mood. You can leave if you don't love me, but please don't hurt me. Okay, if you want to criticize me, please leave it here. I will delete it based on the situation.

I can understand that Ace doesn't like Akainu, but I hope that Ace and Luffy won't be allowed to run away just because of this! Ace became a pirate and must have killed a lot of people, including the navy. Don't say that the navy is full of garbage, but there are also good people. As an enemy, he will definitely kill many people, including civilians! And Luffy, he may have been an adventurer before, but since Impel Down he has become a pirate like Blackbeard! The pirates he released from Impel Down must have killed more people than he saved as an adventurer! Qing Pheasant let Robin go because Robin was innocent to begin with! But Ace and Luffy are not innocent! But Garp understands but disagrees with Ace as his grandson. His behavior is not worthy of the title of naval hero!

It's quite interesting, the fruit can be just like the Onmyoji fruit. What's interesting about this book is that it uses Shikigami's fighting scenes to increase the number of scenes in this aspect and reduce some other aspects. Really not attractive in other aspects

Tamamo-mae's most feminine skin

Didn't anyone post a picture? Well, I'll do it. I've only read less than 20 chapters so far. I'll add more later if I feel like it (I found the picture randomly, it's very unclear) Yukidouji Lord of Arakawa Onikiri Otengu

Fans are required to comment. It feels like the author has been going solo for a long time

I've never played Onmyoji, but I'm very interested in Pirates. I'm fed up with the darkness of Naruto fandoms. Pirates is better. There aren't so many plots and plots. It's not nerve-wracking.

In fact, this book is not very friendly to readers who are not gamers. There are so many monsters with abilities, including mine (I don't play that game either). After reading it, my first feeling was: Oh, this monster has this ability. In fact, there is no resonance at all. This leads to a problem: some fun is lost. Not only this, but also the requirements for the development of the protagonist's abilities. Whether the protagonist's abilities are unlocked step by step or achieved in one step, these concepts are very vague. I have read Chapter Fourteen, but I cannot have the sense of expectation of watching the protagonist become stronger step by step. Words of evaluation: Banshuangwen (the protagonist is not invincible from the beginning)

There is little foreshadowing, and some of the plots are abrupt. Suddenly Aoji takes the exam, when did he learn the armed color and Tamamo Mae went on a rampage. The writing is a bit rushed, and the natural bounty and the combat power of the two Shichibukai are a bit confusing. Slow down and be more rigorous, otherwise it will be flat in the mid-term. In the future, you can still write about the growth of ghost energy and domineering energy. Come on

Tamamo Mae is a bit awkward, and it feels like a forced emotional scene.