Darkness and Light at the Speed ​​Of Light

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Very well written, keep up the good work.

The writing is great, the plot is very attractive, but it is short and weak. Please update it soon!

It's so well written, I highly recommend it.

The writing is great, but it's just too little and not enough to read!

Waiting for your update😁

Very well written. . Big cheers. .

It's a bit interesting, but the protagonist's name is so immersive that it's difficult to write.

Well, it's still pretty good! The segmentation is very good. Unlike me, I can't stop writing once. The plot can be more perfect, and the writing style needs to be improved! Read more! Look back!

Author, is there no punctuation in your introduction?

It is recommended to add a colon when speaking. This kind of dialogue will look better.

Just reading the introduction, I was shocked. I thought it was in traditional Chinese, but the main text was in simplified Chinese My dear author, did you make the wrong choice? Just looking at the speed of light is a bit like science fiction Come on, do it well, don't be a eunuch, wait for the fat

The creativity and setting are very good, but the words, sentences, and paragraphs are a bit awkward to read. I also have to say that there are really too many typos. Not to mention the embarrassment of the characters' dialogue, the author has written "Tao" as "arrival" many times, more than once. Maybe I'm a bit venomous, but because I am also a newcomer, and although I may not be able to write well, I have basically revised each chapter more than three times and read it more than five times. Although it is still not good, I still feel a little bit wrong when I see the mistakes caused by the author's carelessness. I hope to correct them and let's work together.

1. Indiscriminate use of punctuation: "Tao" is used after speaking, asking, and answering, and a colon must be added. Try to add commas in places where colons are not used when speaking. It is not recommended to connect them directly. 2. The lack of environment, psychology, and character description leads to the fact that the dialogue is almost all about a certain way, and the character dialogue is pale. 3. There are many typos, and novices should also pay attention to these problems (it may be that I am too picky, so don't complain if you don't like it) 4. The number of words in the chapters varies too much, for example, the first chapter is only two pages, then it suddenly increases, and then suddenly decreases significantly. The number of words in each chapter is generally recommended to be 2000-3000.