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Support, the writing is great, I really want to see the development of the story later,,,😖

Very appetizing. Cheer up the writer,,,😁

I've read it and written it many times, and the boss personally asked me to help me read it, so I'm here anyway. I have written it many times but am still not satisfied. I am too talkative. I am not teaching you how to write, or I am just talking about why it is so bad. I don't care if I don't say this kind of rubbish. I will ask a few questions. Read one yourself and compare it with some of your favorite novels. Do you feel that your novel can meet your needs? Do you like reading this novel you wrote? If you like it, you can ask yourself which fragments you like. You can also record some fragments of your favorite novels and think about why you like it. Which clips you don't like, why don't you like him? If you like those protagonists, why do you like him? If you don't like those protagonists or supporting roles, why don't you like him? When you understand these issues, people who also like your books will come here on their own. The games that everyone plays are not necessarily good games. The games that you enjoy playing must be good games. Only in this way can you gather a group of people who also agree that this is a good game. If you don't love yourself and you are confused and don't know the direction, then no one can be your beacon! The lighthouse will always go out, the only long-term solution is to shine by yourself!

Big. . This is excellent,,, don't update it,