I Have Mastered 999 Sword Skills

Can you write more to see if it's not enough?

This introduction is from "Full Time"

After reading it, I realized that it is an alien urban fantasy novel with a DNF core 👍

Since being recommended, although the exposure has indeed increased a lot, it has been followed by a lot of negative reviews. To be honest, I was still a little bit shocked, ~QAQ This is my first time trying to write a web article, and I am inexperienced. Many times I feel that the handling of the rhythm of the plot and characters is indeed not adequate. So I would like to ask all readers for your opinions and suggestions on this book. It's okay to be harsh. I have read what you posted in the comment area before, and now I want to collect them together. Faizhai will listen to opinions with an open mind and strive to write a qualified story that will not disappoint Brother Meng. Speak freely, you can say anything! Writing novels is a small career that I love. I really want to write good stories. Thank you everyone🙏🏻

Author, your combat is too game-like.

The protagonist is so stupid and completely useless. The strong point is that the system has nothing to do with the protagonist. In other words, the protagonist cannot even use one percent of the system. It is too slow.

If you don't know how to write about women, just concentrate on writing settings and plots. It's better not to write this whole disgusting thing. It's so poisonous to watch.

The realm system has collapsed terribly... Swordsmen can cut down swordsmen, sword masters, great sword masters, and even strong men in the sword shadow realm... Will it collapse? Also, the heroine died in front of the protagonist as soon as she appeared, and a romantic drama was staged, which was equally nerve-wracking. I hope there won't be similar plots in the future, it's too bloody. Wishing the fire.

Let's not talk about how it was written. . After watching more than half of it, it gave me a few feelings. . 1. Your fighting ability is a bit broken. . . The protagonist casually beats up people and monsters several levels above him. Invincible? ? ? Then what is the purpose of hierarchical stratification? . 2. Maybe the humor is forced for the sake of humor. . Some of the protagonist's mysterious behaviors and language make readers extremely embarrassed. . Although 3. The character development of the protagonist is very problematic. I think the author might want to create a high school boy who is a bit funny and a bit of a middle schooler. . But somehow I saw that the protagonist's character is a bit selfish, does not care about the opinions of others and friends, and is a bit of a 2b loser. . . IMHO. . New authors should still be encouraged. But your character is really not well developed. . Then, since you have divided the combat power into different levels, you should be more rigorous. . Although the protagonist has an aura that allows him to leapfrog levels, he shouldn't go too far. . Otherwise, it will be very easy to break down later. I feel like I'm breaking down even though you haven't written much. .

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The two chapters from May 14th to 16th are too cliche. Once again, Niubi's parents disappeared for the country, leaving the treasure to Pigfoot, and then Pigfoot embarked on the road to find his parents. It obviously started well, but the gap is too big

No, it's too thin and needs to be fattened for slaughter.

How should I put it? The writing is okay (I can read, especially I am good at driving), but the power system is too problematic and completely broken.

The subject matter is okay, the plot is sloppy, but the power system is a big hit. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I have discovered the people around the protagonist. Automatically lowered a level. At the beginning, a swordsman dealt as much damage as the swordsman. No one suspected it, and then he was called a boss by a swordsman. The same swordsman was just to set off the protagonist. He was the leader of three major mercenary groups in a city. He didn't have any Xuan-level sword skills, and he was called a boss by an E-level villain. Blame for bullying, how stupid this is, I guess the protagonist has been hacked and played all the way up to Sword Master C level, and the one about Castle in the Sky, forget it, you can read it for yourselves, I can only say that the author wanted to write a logical and exciting article, and made the protagonist awesome, but his writing and brainpower are not good enough, the protagonist is awesome, and everyone around him is cut into pieces ,

…? Why do so many novels now begin with an unrelated sister or sister? ? ?

Cross cut, wood cut, tic cut, and forest cut. These sword moves must have been improved instead of adding to the burden? Did Shen Nong test the poison?

I have been on the way to show off, deliberately depicting the plot of showing off, it would be nice if it was more practical, slap in the face, show off, slap in the face, show off. The supporting characters are mindless. The connotation of the system is to slap in the face and pretend to be cool.

The professional levels feel so unequal. The monsters that the swordsman dare not kill are killed by a swordsman with a charged skill.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. I have a sister again. What, is it that I can't get over the pitfalls of my older sister? Among the ten books, not to mention 9 have older sisters or younger sisters, at least 6 have older sisters. I am convinced. Did these authors read the books before writing them? Didn't they see this kind of starting sister or younger sister when they read the book? Don't you feel a little disgusted?

Why is the male protagonist a bit naive and like a brat? Doesn't he take other people's bodies? Why do you have such a child-like mentality? It's so stupid.

It's a very good book, but the supporting characters are too exaggerated. After losing to the protagonist one by one, they still hate the protagonist and some even look down on him. Also, the protagonist's low level of cultivation is always used as an excuse. Why did I lose every one of them without getting any ac points? How did I get the chance? There are too many brainless characters like this🙂🙂

This title deceives readers. I thought the invincible stream turned into an upgraded stream? Is this just 999 sword skills? I suggest the author change the title of the book

The author of Qidian generally likes a body that is as thin as a monkey. If he writes it if he is stronger, he will feel as if he is dead.

I am simply speechless. Should I read this book with my brain?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It was so awkward to watch. The power and destructive power were not clearly explained. It was unclear. The protagonist was confused and stunned for a moment. It felt so stupid.

I've collected it for a few days and it's gone cold without even looking at it.

Let me tell you a secret, the Qing Dynasty died 😰

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I don't know if it's my imagination, but when I saw Chapter 18, I felt it was very similar to the front frame of Jiuxing Poisonous Milk. I wonder what the back is like? I hope the author will change.