Leisurely Life in the World of Conan

Not bad, not bad. I would like to give you a suggestion, each case can be a little more detailed. After all, in addition to delicious food, you also need to cover the plot.

After seeing Chapter 120, let me know what you think. First of all, this book has no main line. It is really the main line of Conan, but there are very few elements. This resulted in me not being able to see the protagonist's life at all, which is when I met Conan, the three little ones started dating, Conan started dating, and Xiaolan started dating. It was too attached to the plot of Conan. This situation started to get better after Chapter 90, but only a little better. If the author doesn't know how to create his own plot and doesn't study, then he should just regard writing novels as a hobby, not a career. Secondly, if I really want to talk about the highlights, it is the sweetness between the protagonist and Mariko. There is enough sugar. If the author can share the sugar that is too direct later, it will be perfect to make the whole book sweeter. Some sentences are still too direct and "awkward". Thirdly, in terms of food, the author needs to strengthen his writing skills, add descriptions and consider how to write the dishes. Personally, when I read the food in this book, I felt that it had no soul. The description was just that everyone said it was delicious, looked beautiful, and smelled good, but it felt very monotonous. Personally, I feel that this book belongs to the book shortage and is a good book. From the perspective of Conan fans, it can get 2.5 Out of 5. It has no original main line/plot (relative to a large-scale copy), and the main character has no life. It is really a flaw.

Don't tell me, I'm used to reading novels where the strength level is as high as Kyogoku, and the intelligence completely beats Conan, but when I encounter a novel where the strength level is below the ceiling but the favorability of passers-by is maxed out by other skills, does it feel good to see the protagonist use this face to kill monsters?

It's not bad. There are too many Conan fanfics where the male protagonist is a loser, or the female protagonist is Xiao Ai. It's not that Xiao Ai is not good, it's just that there are very few about other female protagonists. The other girls in Conan are also very good.

There is also the growth of the protagonist itself, which is very core and very exciting for readers. You, the protagonist, have everything figured out from the beginning, and you can even shock the world by just doing scientific research. Maybe there is room for improvement in your food skills, But If you can, just like cooking, you will get better and better, making dishes that can give people strong emotions on one side. For example, making a dish when the prisoner refuses to admit it after being beaten to death. Integrate strong hatred and stubbornness into the taste, and then have warmth and warmth in the aftertaste. Delicate, it reminds the prisoner of his murdered loved one, so that the prisoner confesses with tears Also, although the protagonist, as a gourmet, works hard to let everyone around him enjoy delicious food and have happy memories, but in To spread publicity, there is obviously no plot about being a good foodie, nor does it seem to spread the reputation of gourmets to foreign countries. I feel that I can write it and then take the protagonist group to travel around the culinary world of various countries, so that the protagonist can shock the world as a gourmet in addition to scientific research.

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After seeing Sister Bei being held hostage and fucked, I couldn't stand it anymore. What are you still pretending to do? If you did it on purpose, are you Kaido? You're unconscious and not afraid of being stabbed? If you hadn't done it on purpose, it would have been even funnier. The injured Bei Sister Fufu was the one who got the upper hand in the fight with Kyogoku. She laughed so hard and pretended to be strategizing. I'm just pretending to you.

First of all, this article is completely unreasonable. For example, the protagonist Ito can be strong-willed and is not afraid of the organization at all; Tohru Amuro becomes a disciple of the protagonist, and the organization is completely laissez-faire, without testing or trying to abduct scientific researchers; the protagonist has an IQ of 230 and can casually solve mathematical conjectures, solve scientific research problems, discover chemical biology, etc. Rare materials in all aspects, civil and military skills; world-class scientific researchers, talents of the country, but except for its own bodyguards, the country has no protection measures and control methods; the protagonist's IQ is incredible, and his emotional intelligence is also not low. Knowing the outcome of the plot, Sister Bei can still fail and suffer a loss, purely for the plot service of saving Sister Bei. In short, Jack Su has reached the extreme, and it's not good enough for a novice, but it's just fun! 😂You can't read this book in detail, otherwise there will be a lot of bugs, but you should just read it as a pure and refreshing novel. It is a pure little white dragon Aotian (there is a saying, the protagonist has a pretty good personality), upgrades to cheat, and is not good at pretending to be b. The tone is relatively relaxed and interesting, focusing mostly on daily life, food and occasionally solving crimes, avoiding the scientific research, China, and winery calculations. It will look much more comfortable! (I probably saw that in the middle period, people from China became subordinates. The protagonist conquered AIDS, made bionic robots, and invented a armor similar to Iron Man. He couldn't hold on anymore)

I heard people say that generally the protagonists in books with the word leisurely are not leisurely.

The female videos, characters, writing and plot all have a romantic flavor.

The setting of the protagonist's God's Tongue is really not good. If the food is not perfect, he will not eat it. Hungry him for a few days and see if he eats it!

Author, do you think why many time travel books, or 99% of time travel books, don't state the reason for time travel? Because this thing is actually the final puzzle of a book most of the time, readers expect the author to complete a big job. But if you want to complete a big job, you not only need to have unexpected ideas, but also have rich knowledge as a basis. Most online writers are far from these two points, so the authors actually avoid talking about the origin and process of time travel. It's like Venus without arms. If you don't know how to carve perfect arms, you might as well get rid of them. Therefore, the beginning of your book is quite surprising - there is such a clichéd beginning written by the author.

Just say it once in a while, but a man always emphasizes his appearance. It's written like a succubus.

The protagonist is given this identity and still likes Sonoko. Unless the Fujiwara family is shameless and accepts the protagonist's marriage to the Suzuki family, it is impossible to be together.

Reading the comments, I heard that the heroine is Sonoko and immediately didn't want to watch it. I don't understand why there are so many female characters in Conan, why Sonoko? Yuanzi's character is that of a funny b + nympho, who likes all the handsome men she sees. This is suitable to be written as a friend, why is it a heroine? Vomited

You may not believe it when I tell you, but the heroine of this book is no longer a copper smelter. The single heroine Sonoko is going to have a fist fight with Kyogoku Makoto!

After watching a little bit, I felt that it was too idol drama, with perfect characters. From the beginning, no matter the body appearance, family background, or even personal ability, it was the template of a perfect winner in life. Of course, if I really time traveled, I would be happy with this template. But in novels, this template, how should I put it, is too female-oriented. Even all aspects, including the description of the protagonist's image, are too female-oriented, and it feels uninteresting...

The protagonist is busier than Conan, the death elementary school student. Do you think he is leisurely or not?

I like this book very much, but the plot of traveling to China seems too frustrating. This is the type of writing that many female authors write, where the protagonist is always kidnapped by morality. It seems that the protagonist fights back, but in fact, there is no sense of satisfaction at all. Even if you want to express your feelings first, you can't suppress them all the time. You just feel that you are not expressing yourself. Now that you're back in Japan, things should be a bit more normal, right? Don't you have to be kidnapped by morality all the time? Don't you just have to be beaten passively all the time and just let it go? Anyway, I can't see any sense of satisfaction in revenge. I keep seeing the protagonist's loss, but I can't see the enemy's loss. I really can't see it. Is it because the author can't write it? I feel that many female authors have this problem. It seems that the protagonist fights back, but they can't write about the losses suffered by the villain. I just see that they have been suppressing the protagonist and causing the protagonist to suffer losses. Although I am a female, I still like male videos because there is no moral kidnapping. Even if the protagonist does bad things, it is right and justified, and it is super enjoyable to watch. It is always like this. The protagonist is always kidnapped by morality, and it is not very satisfying to write. 😭