The Legend of Wu Ming

There are several problems with your work. Firstly, the paragraphs are not divided well. Secondly, some places are not smooth. Thirdly, the sense of inclusion is poor. Finally, I have a sentence for you. Just read whatever you want to write. Learn more from the great masters! Come on!

The writing is very interesting. I laughed through the opening chapter and am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Good cheers to the author!

Collected, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Comment: It continues Wukong's lost love. From the beginning, you can see the realism of Journey to the West and the others. Although I don't know if Zixia Fairy will be with the monkey later. But there is always hope for Wukong.

I saw Chapter 4. The subject matter is so niche, and the audience is even smaller. There could be a little less swearing in the front, um, a little would be just right. Another point is that when I see it here, there is nothing that attracts people from other circles. It is easy for readers to click x. The sense of immersion may also be a problem. The writing is smooth and comfortable, and the basics are very good. If I have time, I will read the rest of it. There is no need to pay a follow-up visit. I am mainly here to learn. I hope you will get better and better as you write.

Please save it and leave a comment after reading it. You can post and vote by yourself, don't let the book circle be too cold! 😁

Okay, I'll take a look when I have time.

The background plot of many movies and novels can be seen at the beginning. It is estimated that the author must have watched many movies about Journey to the West before writing. The writing is similar to "The Legend of Wukong", which may be intentional by the author, but the plot seems a bit confusing. The writing is pretty good. In my opinion, the author is currently suitable for writing short stories. Long stories are easy to break down. It is also a good start for newcomers. In general, if this is regarded as a fanfic of "The Legend of Wukong", the writing is okay, but if it is to be turned into an independent novel, it is still far behind. I lost much interest after reading ten chapters, because it seemed a bit unclear, and there were too many humorous and funny plots. It was quite relaxing, but that was it, and it seemed a bit unrigorous. I feel that the author does not yet have the ability to control a huge worldview system. So in one sentence, the author is currently suitable for writing short stories. Come on, I believe you will get better and better. There are only two recommendation votes left, I hope they are not too few.