Rebirth of the Angry Young Rich Man

​ ​ Personally, I think it would be better if the paragraphs are more detailed. The text in each paragraph is not much different and there are many, which looks a bit tiring. There is some literary talent, but I haven't browsed them all yet, so I don't want to make too many comments. Keep up the good work, writing is a very tedious process, especially a new book. Personal suggestions: 1. Follow your own process for the outline, and don't refer too much to readers' opinions. Otherwise, it will be more difficult to write if it conflicts with your own ideas, and you will easily be rejected later. 2. Pay attention to the details of what you want to express. Don't introduce too many irrelevant things. Just give it a try. Sometimes, although the number of words has passed, the reader is tired of it. 3. If you have time, look at your own work from the perspective of a reader. Although there will not be a good improvement, many details that you ignored when writing will be improved. Not much else to say, if you don't like it, please ignore it.

I finished reading it and left eight chapters unread. It was very well written! What can I say? The writing is fine, but the plot is too bland.

I think you can be a eunuch😁

Don't write it as Li Erhe, and write less about the pig. Most people probably like to see the protagonist achieve a career.

The name of this book has been changed? Does changing the name mean updating a chapter?

Grasp the rhythm, don't go too fast, dig deeper into the details 😏 How can you make millions if you don't have enough money? Of course, in order to attract traffic in the early stage, you can ask for quality. In short, come on! Dry!

Personally, I think it's okay. Come on, I'll give you my recommendation votes.

A bit verbose, other places are pretty good

It's quite interesting. I gave it a recommendation vote. If it's still at this level in the future, I'll put it on the shelves and order it all.

Very good, well written, I give you a recommendation vote, but it is too tender and needs to be raised for a while before slaughtering. Try to submit it to you every day before it is put on the shelf, but it is easy to forget. Sichuan feels good.

After a few days, I frowned a little while watching it, because there were too many narrative parts. It's not that there isn't enough narration, but that the narration part isn't interesting enough.

I've read seven chapters, and there doesn't seem to be any serious dialogue! Does the author not know how to use punctuation? I feel like there is very little dialogue in this book, and it's a bit like a running account.

Cut it and polish it again. There's no point in dragging it. It's better to re-imagine it.

Is it a bug on my part or

I'll collect it first and look it over for you later.

Could it be that the protagonist is followed by a pig farmer?

Check in before you watch it, to encourage you.

110,000, Come on. Write well

Your eldest brother's yo suddenly disappeared. Author, don't be like this.

I shamelessly ask for collection recommendations. As long as I can sign a contract and put it on the shelves, I will never be a prisoner.

The application for contract signing failed, so I changed the title of the book, the introduction of the work, and worked hard to come up with the code word ing. Thank you book friends for supporting me!