Senior Brother of Qinglong Sect

Come on, hold on brother ✊

I suggest you make a major change in your profile, otherwise you will be easily dismissed. Secondly, you can also change the title of each chapter so that the title can stimulate readers' interest in reading. Third, the fantasy worldview and levels must be told to readers as early as possible, otherwise a large number of nouns will be too unfamiliar, which is not good. The writing is good, but the plot is still stale, so I recommend innovative ideas. Come on!

It's well written. At first glance, it looks like someone who has read a lot of novels.

Books that tend to lean towards traditional fantasy are still relatively difficult to come by these days, so come on!

Very exciting, keep up the good work! Received

1. The first paragraph of the first chapter should be divided into sections properly. If you are an old bookworm, you will not read further when you see such sections. 2. I suggest you, the author, explain the world background of your novel, and start with a fight. It seems very exciting, but in fact it makes people read it mindlessly.