
That Childhood Sweetheart of Mine
我的那个青梅or竹马
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 8k Words
- Genre
- Short Story
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Short Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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8Chapters
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The same eyes have different views; the same ears have different ways of hearing; the same mind has different thoughts; one's dusk is still beautiful, but very short; one's sunshine is still bright, but not warm; one's work is still busy, but very lonely; one's life is still regular, but no surprises; one's road still has direction, but it is very long
It's a very good article. It feels like it can attract people's attention and feel a unique atmosphere all the time. It's very good. Keep up the good work. Come on.
Well written👍👍👍👍
Looks good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
I have some unsteady thoughts about this book (quietly bb: If you criticize me, I will have the same thoughts as you) The following 1. Writing issues How can I put it this way, this is almost the highest level of daily descriptions of romance novels I have ever seen. (Currently, it is only daily, and it is still Japanese-style) The details are well described, the psychological description is accurate, the dialogue is smooth, the style is also more daily, the protagonist has a strong sense of substitution, and you can completely assume the role in a few chapters. 2. Mainline Problem Because the book just mentioned may be more daily-oriented, it is acceptable to introduce the mainline slowly. 3. Problems with characterization The impression of the protagonist is too deep, which leads to the lack of deep feelings of the supporting characters. Of course, it may also be due to the word limit. In addition, the supporting characters in a few chapters appear more reasonably, not stiff, but not outstanding either. 4. Regarding the issue of plot development In my opinion, this is probably the most difficult point for writers of daily novels to control. How to integrate and develop daily life with plot is a great test of the author's level. 5. Downplay the problem of character conflicts This book is probably very taboo about the appearance of a sinister, cunning, and very annoying character, which will seriously damage the overall novel style. Above An exquisite senior reader Qian Pujie (gai) author (whisper bb: Is the author Zhou Geng really good)
Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Did that childhood sweetheart also come to Japan to find her, or is the protagonist recalling the daily life with that childhood sweetheart?
It can't be that the two of them suddenly traveled through time together🤔🤔🤔
Things have changed, and after finishing the final exam, I came to Kangkang again to study for the crappy books I had cheated on. Hey, I am indeed a hot chick! I feel so sorry
I am slow to update this book. I know how many people are reading it, but the overall level is not good. I was also annoyed by the plot myself.ヘ(_ _ヘ)Well, thank you very much to those who voted for me and wrote comments! Also say sorry! And although I have marked this book as complete, I will sometimes update it on a whim. Just sauce!
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update. If you don't want to continue writing, please click and finish the book. Thank you!
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