I Can Really Create All Things

I saw Chapter 7, and I can't say enough. First of all, a common problem of many new authors (even a common problem of many veteran authors) is that the protagonist's mentality changes very quickly and can even adapt to the environment quickly. Even a person will feel unaccustomed to a strange place, let alone another world. The second is that the psychological description of the protagonist is insufficient. Take the protagonist as a beggar as an example. As an ordinary person who lived on Blue Star in his previous life, he would not beg as a matter of course, but should go through a psychological struggle (word count by the way) Third, the main character Jiao has just come to work as a guard not long ago, and even if his talent impresses the butler, it is only in the realm of ordinary people. The butler will appreciate it, but he will never say that he is deliberately tolerating you. After all, you have nothing to do with him. He can only say that he will be nice to you, and when the protagonist asks for leave on the second day of work. . . If the author is a leader, and you have a very capable employee who has just arrived, you will admire him, and then he asks you for leave for no reason the next day. How would you feel? You will only feel that this person is arrogant and arrogant, which will lead to boredom. Even if the butler admires the protagonist very much, he will not agree so plainly. At least he will frown and think for a moment. And judging from the background of this book, it is definitely not a world of human rights (after all, he is a cultivator), so the guard will not be a subordinate relationship for the master's family, but a master-servant relationship (note that it is a servant, not a slave). In such a social background, as a low-status guard, it is probably quite difficult to ask for leave, right? Fourthly, the part where the protagonist is attacked by a sneak attack is too natural. Then who is it (that is, the one who will die if the protagonist is hit by a silver needle)? How can he be so sure? First of all, it's non-toxic, and I haven't seen anywhere that it's poisonous. So if it's purely based on lethality, then it's obviously impossible for the protagonist to still have the strength to run so fast. That person must have killed a lot of people with this move. So a thirteen or fourteen-year-old boy was hit by a silver needle that can shoot through the bluestone floor, but he can still come and go like the wind. Can't he see the problem? But if the silver needle here is coated with poison, and then the shooting power of the silver needle is reduced, it will feel much better if the protagonist uses two points of infuriating energy to force the poison out.

The author has a lot of imagination and the story is very exciting! The author's writing style has also been greatly improved! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the arrival of Chen Tian, ​​who "lives in the palm of his hand and lives in his heart for eternity".

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Baijiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

The story is very exciting. I finished reading it before I knew it. I am so grateful for it. Come on, more and more (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a cool story with an invincible protagonist, and it's very enjoyable to read The setting of the protagonist team is classic and can't go wrong. The protagonist himself seems to have a little bit of personality? If there is indeed such a setting, it can be highlighted I hope that the dangers encountered by the protagonist group in the later stage will be designed reasonably, and the combat power value will not have a sense of dissonance that rises and falls The design of the prop card draw is very malleable (Onmyoji) It was the eternal pain of the African chiefs, until I played the Japanese server and found out that the Japanese server had a guarantee, but I still didn't get Ibaraki... Well, it's because I'm not worthy (๑˙ー˙๑)) A new guy is just saying some nonsense, come on, the author

Wonderful! The introduction is also very interesting, cheers (*°∀°)=3

Collect, a good book not to be missed, if you persist, you will become a god, a good book from a director's perspective

Love this wonderful story! Already collected! Stay tuned and look forward to updates! Seeking mutual acceptance and mutual evaluation🌹🌹🥺🥺

Nice! Collected it. To be honest, this title is very attractive to me. I am a new author. Can the author also read my article?